VN Ren'Py Aperture [Ch.1] [Vonsatia]

[Slvknt]

It’s not a BSS story as I plan to fully develop the romance plot. And regarding if she warms up to anyone, you’ll just have to play Chapter 1 for that

So will we get MC/FMC scenes as well? Keita doesn't seem like the 'wait for marriage' type tbh

 

[Vonsatia]

Aperture Chapter 2: Progress Update


First of all, I want to thank you all for:

1. Loving the game so much. I never thought Aperture would get this much love and attention from you all.
2. The insane Patreon support. So many of you subscribed to me in just the past 2 days. Thank you for trusting and believing in the potential of me and this game. I'll be working hard to make Chapter 2 even better.

NOW.

I have completed half of my story outline for chapter 2 and I'm already super excited to write the script for it. I aim to finish the outline today and spend the rest of the week to write the dialogues for it. For me, dialogues tend to write themselves once I have a very solid outline.

Based on my unfinished outline and my plans, I estimate that the contents for Chapter 2 will be twice as big. With way more NSFW content.

Game mechanics:
I don't want this VN to be a simple Kinetic Novel. I do want to implement a few mechanics as I go along. Naturally, I'll keep in mind not to overwhelm myself with feature creep.

Here's the mechanics I'm planning for Chapter 2:

1. Rin's Perspective: The player will be able to experience our FMC, Tomoya Rin's unique POV. Get to know how she thinks, how she sees the world and our characters from her perspective.
   Note: This perspective is completely optional for players who want a Male POV only playthrough.
2. Dynamic CG: This is a fun one. I really want to bring something new to the table with how we experience HCGs especially from the Male POV. This chapter will include a couple of scenes where our MC, Keita will be looking through cracks or holes to look at something he's not supposed to look at.
   And while this is happening, you, the Player are able to look around in the scene with your mouse, albeit with limited visibility and range of motion. I believe this should really amplify the Mystery NTR/Voyeuristic nature of particular scenes.
3. Rin's Stats: This will be a typical status screen with Rin's various... stats. Naturally, I'll be doing something different with this mechanic than other games. You want to know what it is? Well I can't give everything away can I?
4. Dialogue Options: Let's have a bit of a RPG element going, shall we? I'll be honest, I won't be able to implement branching storylines or scenes with this just yet. It's mostly for flavor. Be the Sasaki Keita you want to be.
   Note: These choices won't have uncharacteristic choices for Keita. He'll essentially be the same character.

Progress:
Obviously, I promise to be transparent with you guys with the work progress. These are the parameters with how I divide my work:

• Story Outline
• Script
• Art
• Coding
• Proofreading

Timelines:
I expect to finish the outline today. After that, I'll take a few days to write the script. Then I'll be generating the art necessary for the scenes. Though I sometimes get excited about a scene and generate the art early. For example: The scene which I've attached for the Paid Members to see!

I aim to complete the chapter in the coming 4-5 weeks. I'll only give a tentative date once I have finished 90% of the chapter.

For the Patrons, I have posted an exclusive preview image of Ch. 2 which will feature our second antagonist. He will be the antagonist to Jun.

Thank you again for supporting. You will receive another update next week!

Regards,

Vonsatia

 

[Vonsatia]

usually i dont like any AI art games. but this one caught my attention for some reason, i just finished the game and i really like the atmosphere in it. and i loved NTR, looking forward of the climax of this game! this one really has a lot of potential. and pls i hope you add a lot of hot blowjob scenes.

Blowjob scenes are my absolute favorite. Not just that but anything related to Oral Fixation. There'll be tons.

The game looks good. I love the art style, the personal touch ups you did, I love the UI, I love the plot. Hopefully you'll create decent amount of choices in the game, otherwise it'll feel like I am just reading, not participating.

For instance the main character sees the main heroine being molested by Daizo, and you can choose whether to interfere or let it play out, but for good reasons like not wanting to get expelled again, etc. I can't wait to see more!

I'm planning to add some dialogue option! You can check the update I posted above, for

So will we get MC/FMC scenes as well? Keita doesn't seem like the 'wait for marriage' type tbh

Hell yeah. I'm not gonna make that boring for the readers as well.

 

[Zeref@123#]

Aperture Chapter 2: Progress Update


First of all, I want to thank you all for:

1. Loving the game so much. I never thought Aperture would get this much love and attention from you all.
2. The insane Patreon support. So many of you subscribed to me in just the past 2 days. Thank you for trusting and believing in the potential of me and this game. I'll be working hard to make Chapter 2 even better.

NOW.

I have completed half of my story outline for chapter 2 and I'm already super excited to write the script for it. I aim to finish the outline today and spend the rest of the week to write the dialogues for it. For me, dialogues tend to write themselves once I have a very solid outline.

Based on my unfinished outline and my plans, I estimate that the contents for Chapter 2 will be twice as big. With way more NSFW content.

Game mechanics:
I don't want this VN to be a simple Kinetic Novel. I do want to implement a few mechanics as I go along. Naturally, I'll keep in mind not to overwhelm myself with feature creep.

Here's the mechanics I'm planning for Chapter 2:

1. Rin's Perspective: The player will be able to experience our FMC, Tomoya Rin's unique POV. Get to know how she thinks, how she sees the world and our characters from her perspective.
   Note: This perspective is completely optional for players who want a Male POV only playthrough.
2. Dynamic CG: This is a fun one. I really want to bring something new to the table with how we experience HCGs especially from the Male POV. This chapter will include a couple of scenes where our MC, Keita will be looking through cracks or holes to look at something he's not supposed to look at.
   And while this is happening, you, the Player are able to look around in the scene with your mouse, albeit with limited visibility and range of motion. I believe this should really amplify the Mystery NTR/Voyeuristic nature of particular scenes.
3. Rin's Stats: This will be a typical status screen with Rin's various... stats. Naturally, I'll be doing something different with this mechanic than other games. You want to know what it is? Well I can't give everything away can I?
4. Dialogue Options: Let's have a bit of a RPG element going, shall we? I'll be honest, I won't be able to implement branching storylines or scenes with this just yet. It's mostly for flavor. Be the Sasaki Keita you want to be.
   Note: These choices won't have uncharacteristic choices for Keita. He'll essentially be the same character.

Progress:
Obviously, I promise to be transparent with you guys with the work progress. These are the parameters with how I divide my work:

• Story Outline
• Script
• Art
• Coding
• Proofreading

Timelines:
I expect to finish the outline today. After that, I'll take a few days to write the script. Then I'll be generating the art necessary for the scenes. Though I sometimes get excited about a scene and generate the art early. For example: The scene which I've attached for the Paid Members to see!

I aim to complete the chapter in the coming 4-5 weeks. I'll only give a tentative date once I have finished 90% of the chapter.

For the Patrons, I have posted an exclusive preview image of Ch. 2 which will feature our second antagonist. He will be the antagonist to Jun.

Thank you again for supporting. You will receive another update next week!

Regards,

Vonsatia

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Hey! Can you clear few doubts about your post please!
1) when you say you will not able to implement branching story line yet , do you mean that currently, you want to focus on the two heroines route and add branching story in future or there is no plans at all for branching story line?
2) is there hope to see more old ugly men like the principal as antagonist? It seems you already decided on the second antagonist and there will be no more old men or perverted coach for our tomboy.

Anyway thanks for the update and excited for ch-2. Best wishes.

 

[Tatsugaya]

After playing and enjoying the preview, I'll leave my mini review here.

- The story seems promising, there's still short material but for a preview it was very good, it made me want to know more.

- Characters are interesting, the secondary duo made me laugh a bit with little screen time and that's a good thing.

- The mysterious tone is that touch that makes a timely difference and can serve as the strawberry on the cake for the plot.

- Layout, music and sound effects are all spot on.

In short, I want to see what comes next in this intriguing and well-written story so far.

 

[Vonsatia]

Hey! Can you clear few doubts about your post please!
1) when you say you will not able to implement branching story line yet , do you mean that currently, you want to focus on the two heroines route and add branching story in future or there is no plans at all for branching story line?
2) is there hope to see more old ugly men like the principal as antagonist? It seems you already decided on the second antagonist and there will be no more old men or perverted coach for our tomboy.

Anyway thanks for the update and excited for ch-2. Best wishes.

1. For now, I don't think there will be any real branching paths. Rather, I'll probably do branching H-scenes here and there.

2. Absolutely there'll be more old perverted men. Hoshino City is full of those. And our two heroines will have plenty of scenes with them further down the line. I suggest playing through the chapter once again. I left some clues here and there as to who those characters can be.

After playing and enjoying the preview, I'll leave my mini review here.

- The story seems promising, there's still short material but for a preview it was very good, it made me want to know more.

- Characters are interesting, the secondary duo made me laugh a bit with little screen time and that's a good thing.

- The mysterious tone is that touch that makes a timely difference and can serve as the strawberry on the cake for the plot.

- Layout, music and sound effects are all spot on.

In short, I want to see what comes next in this intriguing and well-written story so far.

Thanks for the review! Really glad you took notice of all the details I put in it. Personally, good sound is as important, if not more important than the visuals.

 

[Zeref@123#]

2. Absolutely there'll be more old perverted men. Hoshino City is full of those. And our two heroines will have plenty of scenes with them further down the line. I suggest playing through the chapter once again. I left some clues here and there as to who those characters can be.

Yeah replayed it just now. Seems we are getting illegal websites, shows, night clubs etc. Really excited to see that. I think the two antagonists not only going to enjoy themselves but also earn some extra money by lending them to these shows and websites. But I am not sure that these people they are going to meet in these places will be one time or will become antagonists and have their own routes?

 

[Slvknt]

1. For now, I don't think there will be any real branching paths. Rather, I'll probably do branching H-scenes here and there.

Efficent call. Having one path/route be done from start to finish is probably the best way to go. Since building around it would be much easier, due to having all the ‘common’ scenes like talks or expositions ready. While minor adjustments(characters having different sprites/ways of speaking due to varying corruption/choices made) would be much easier to implement than writing a whole new scene twice because ‘Inota got a black eye in route B’ or something.

I think they do just that in JP VNs too. One route at a time.

On the side note, any predictions on how much chapters you’re planning to do(until the first path is finished)?

 

[SquigglyCalamari]

You did an amazing job on the visuals, the audio, and the story. If I hadn't joined your thread before I would have thought you have done this before. I'm really impressed with the overall level of quality. There is so much potential in your story and in your progress as a creator. I believe in you.

 

[Babelok]

Looks very promising. Loved the first scene. Hope to see Rin becomes Daizo pet and work willingly for her daily meal. She must be the type to like cat ears and buttplug.

 

[Slvknt]

I’m pretty sure Daizo is a competitive NTR antagonist and does it solely for the thrill.
The dude read the MC’s personal file and basically went:

“hmm this new student got expelled for beating up a teacher who molested a random chick? Yeah, lets cuck him”

If Keita did that for a stranger, imagine to what extent he will go for people he actually cares about.
The principal is literally gambling with his life here.

 

[Babelok]

I’m pretty sure Daizo is a competitive NTR antagonist and does it solely for the thrill.
The dude read the MC’s personal file and basically went:

“hmm this new student got expelled for beating up a teacher who molested a random chick? Yeah, lets cuck him”

If Keita did that for a stranger, imagine to what extent he will go for people he actually cares about.
The principal is literally gambling with his life here.

Principal is not gambling with anything. He has money. Most rich men IRL are ugly fat dudes just using lawyers and random shit to be on the top. A kiddo not gonna change anything, maybe in his dream.

 

[Slvknt]

Principal is not gambling with anything. He has money. Most rich men IRL are ugly fat dudes just using lawyers and random shit to be on the top. A kiddo not gonna change anything, maybe in his dream.

Yeah, maybe, but untouchable antagonists are impossibly boring.

If Daizo turns out to be the typical ‘rich, connections everywhere, police bought out’ type of villain, there would be little to no point in blackmail/coercion in the first place.

It is, perhaps, the only pitfall this VN has a risk of falling in.

Sleazy principal that must act smart is interesting and believable.
‘Hanma Yujiro NTR edition’ is overused and bland.

 

[Babelok]

Yeah, maybe, but untouchable antagonists are impossibly boring.

If Daizo turns out to be the typical ‘rich, connections everywhere, police bought out’ type of villain, there would be little to no point in blackmail/coercion in the first place.

It is, perhaps, the only pitfall this VN has a risk of falling in.

Sleazy principal that must act smart is interesting and believable.
‘Hanma Yujiro NTR edition’ is overused and bland.

If you're talking about the story I think it's funnier if Principal has to manipulate them or plan things to not be catch by the police or be faced by some associations against school abuses. But having MC being a clown thinking he can hit whatever he wants is also cringe and immature, he's in highschool not a 30yo ex-veteran soldier.

 

[Slvknt]

If you're talking about the story I think it's funnier if Principal has to manipulate them or plan things to not be catch by the police or be faced by some associations against school abuses. But having MC being a clown thinking he can hit whatever he wants is also cringe and immature, he's in highschool not a 30yo ex-veteran soldier.

Agree on the manipulation part 100%

But our MC is in highschool. He IS cringe and immature with a history of violent reactions to such things. So the most I’d expect of him is alleyway baseball bat ambush after work hours.

A ‘30yo ex-veteran soldier’ would just quietly unalive the person in question, given our supposed situation.

Discussing this themes and opinions is peak by the way.

 

[MisterZone]

This game is great and promising. I hope Rin has sex with the Principal because she enjoys cheating on Keita, and not just a prostitute who does it just for money. Good luck to you Vonsatia!

 

[Hentai_Desu-ka?]

Honestly opinion-wise the fact that MC is willing to not even hesitate to go into a physically violent response to something he see's, tells me that the NTR will be worth it in the story to make sense because at least it's not the typical overused protagonist where he's just dense as hell and not aware that some kind of bullshit is going on. I don't know if the Dev has plans for it but this does open up potential for those who want a "Revenge Plot Line" in the game.

However like I said before, we may need more context for why MC just immediately runs up and punches that gym teacher in the beginning other than he's just "always wanted to" and also more explanation revealed to the player why MC was the one who got punished and nothing at all absolutely happens to the gym teacher -- plot hole aside, realistically, a student witnessing a teacher abusing his position of power to openly broad daylight sexually assault a student no matter how you spin it will ALWAYS land all over the media and it don't matter what these unknown "connections" are that the gym teacher had, that teachers name and face would be plastered everywhere INCLUDING online and INCLUDING MC's family having his back instead of the reverse which again, made no sense, because of the missing context as we don't even know of any such sort of blackmail on the parents to spin it that way to begin with.

In order for those unknown "connections" to make sense at all it requires (1) the female student covering for the gym teacher, (2) the MC's parents getting a call/ visit from the principal and a lawyer, (3) the MC's parents being depicted as the poorest of the poor to afford a good lawyer/ attorney etc. and (4) the gym teacher being scolded by someone above him whom offers such protections of blackmail, because it makes no sense that the gym teacher just conveniently has all of that power by himself, he would've had to obtained such connections by being a teacher who had past students who appreciated having him as their teacher because he helped them obtain their positions of power within police/ government etc.

But again that'd take a lot of time revamping the opening to explain all of this to the player just to add a prologue, so it's up to the Dev to include such contexts. The game is still very early stage so the Dev could technically do it without much difficult or problems but it's not my game so I'm only a voice in the ether. Either way I enjoyed the story so far so I look forward to future updates.

 

[Slvknt]

I don't know if the Dev has plans for it but this does open up potential for those who want a "Revenge Plot Line" in the game.

From the looks of it the first route we're getting is 'Keita doesn't know', ie the MC remains oblivious until the very end. Which is most misery inducing(and perverted) outcome.

a student witnessing a teacher abusing his position of power to openly broad daylight sexually assault a student no matter how you spin it will ALWAYS land all over the media and it don't matter what these unknown "connections" are that the gym teacher had, that teachers name and face would be plastered everywhere INCLUDING online and INCLUDING MC's family having his back instead of the reverse which again, made no sense, because of the missing context as we don't even know of any such sort of blackmail on the parents to spin it that way to begin with.

It can be explained by school and/or girl's parents not wanting a scandal, which made the MC take the fall. Since without the victim's testimony it would just be 'a student viciously beat up a coach'.
But I agree, more backstory would be a nice addition.

 

[nhami]

This is first chapter was great! If the following chapters would be as good as good as the first chapter then this would be a masterpiece!
The AI art is great. Did not even think was AI art when I first saw it.

 

[Vonsatia]

Here's some free artwork for you guys.

Rin's Casual Outfit




I personally like the tank top

I've attached the full res image as well for everyone to enjoy.