Looking at this image, I cannot help but think that a choker would fit Rin. Just a thought.Here's some free artwork from myYou must be registered to see the links!
Rin's Casual Outfit
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I personally like the tank top
I've attached the full res image as well for everyone to enjoy.
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This looks incredibly promising! Keeping an eye on it. Haven't played it yet though.
Glad the dev seems to be focused on small progressive corruption over time. My #1 favourite thing in NTR and it barely gets touched haha. Unlike some, I definitely want to see these characters totally gyarufied/bimbofied towards the end... Maybe for one of the endings specifically!
Furthermore, I am interested in the voting for how the story plays out/character details. Dev, you may get me subbing to your patreon if you let us vote on potential outfit changes/adjustments.
Glad the dev seems to be focused on small progressive corruption over time. My #1 favourite thing in NTR and it barely gets touched haha. Unlike some, I definitely want to see these characters totally gyarufied/bimbofied towards the end... Maybe for one of the endings specifically!
Furthermore, I am interested in the voting for how the story plays out/character details. Dev, you may get me subbing to your patreon if you let us vote on potential outfit changes/adjustments.
GreenOwl
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agreed and then the choker could be improved into a collar later down the line
Gyaru-fication is definitely happening to one of the characters (you may guess who). And yes, I do plan on using polls to decide on certain decisions like potential outfits for scenes, outfit modifications, etc. I posted a poll introducing Rin's mother to decide her name.
I find it fun to let y'all decide on these things since it allows me to not think about everything xD
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Well I suggest you to sub to his patreon and join his discord. Here we discuss a lot of theories related to the story and dev hints his directions. Also fun arts sharing.
I'm certainly tempted to subscribe for sure!
I don't quite know who is gonna be gyaru-fied though... Maybe I'm too stupid to connect the dots, haha. This dev is very fun. I hope we introduce some new girls along the way too. I'd like to involve a few more side-girls- Maybe the main character's mother...
I don't quite know who is gonna be gyaru-fied though... Maybe I'm too stupid to connect the dots, haha. This dev is very fun. I hope we introduce some new girls along the way too. I'd like to involve a few more side-girls- Maybe the main character's mother...
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Hope this doesn't get wrecked by Visa and Mastercard and their stupid virtue signalling. I hope they fucking lose billions from their shit and just stop meddling.
Visa/Mastercard are cutting ties with sites if they have things they don't like due to this big numbers of h-games are removed form steam, now they are attacked to itch.io , and forced them to remove nsfw things too. as none of these sites can work without "payment method" soo they are The King unfortunately
Aperture Chapter 2: Progress Update #2
Greetings everyone.
It's been a bit more than a week since my last progress update. I have been super thorough with my plot outline which has exceeded more than 3000+ words by itself. So I can only imagine how many words the dialogues would come to.
I think it's safe for me to say that I'm writing nothing short of a short movie in this chapter. Without overselling it, this chapter will contain:
1: A lot more worldbuilding.
2: Spicy situations.
3: A darker tone and themes overall.
A lot will happen in this chapter. The first thing being introducing our Second Antagonist:
While he looks like a generic cocky dude, I aim to give him some depth, humanize him and make him a compelling character overall.
Before we continue, let me give you the progress % for the people not that interested to read the whole thing. .....
Progress:
With that out of the way, let's get into the meat and bones of Chapter 2.
The Downtown District:
Concept Art:
Welcome to The Downtown District. The name is a bit misleading as this is actually a City within a City. A place filled with secrets, shady establishments, mobs, gangs, and an ever decreasing presence of law enforcement. Our protagonists Rin and Keita will be thoroughly exploring this place together to find something specific for her Photography Competition.
This city is no joke, and things can go really bad if they're not careful.
Speaking of law enforcement, let me introduce another special character!
I hope she's intriguing as a character. The $5 Patrons voted on this name, Noriko. Which means: "child of the law" or "child of principles". The name reflects values of order, guidance, and adherence to established norms.
(Pretty fitting name if I say so myself.)
Anyways.
I've been rambling quite a bit. Hope this info can inspire some speculations and conversations regarding where the story will go. We do a lot of story discussions and more on my Discord ^^!
Chapter 2 will make a lot of progress in it's story and really get things moving. It's super ambitious and I want to do it properly. Please support me however you can!
Take care and keep yourself hydrated. Thank you for reading and the passionate support!
Regards,
Vonsatia
Greetings everyone.
It's been a bit more than a week since my last progress update. I have been super thorough with my plot outline which has exceeded more than 3000+ words by itself. So I can only imagine how many words the dialogues would come to.
I think it's safe for me to say that I'm writing nothing short of a short movie in this chapter. Without overselling it, this chapter will contain:
1: A lot more worldbuilding.
2: Spicy situations.
3: A darker tone and themes overall.
A lot will happen in this chapter. The first thing being introducing our Second Antagonist:
While he looks like a generic cocky dude, I aim to give him some depth, humanize him and make him a compelling character overall.
Before we continue, let me give you the progress % for the people not that interested to read the whole thing. .....
Progress:
- Story Outline: 0% ---> 85%
- Script: 0% ---> 25%
- Art: 0% ---> 20%
- Coding: 0%
- Proofreading: 0%
With that out of the way, let's get into the meat and bones of Chapter 2.
The Downtown District:
Concept Art:
Welcome to The Downtown District. The name is a bit misleading as this is actually a City within a City. A place filled with secrets, shady establishments, mobs, gangs, and an ever decreasing presence of law enforcement. Our protagonists Rin and Keita will be thoroughly exploring this place together to find something specific for her Photography Competition.
This city is no joke, and things can go really bad if they're not careful.
Speaking of law enforcement, let me introduce another special character!
I hope she's intriguing as a character. The $5 Patrons voted on this name, Noriko. Which means: "child of the law" or "child of principles". The name reflects values of order, guidance, and adherence to established norms.
(Pretty fitting name if I say so myself.)
Anyways.
I've been rambling quite a bit. Hope this info can inspire some speculations and conversations regarding where the story will go. We do a lot of story discussions and more on my Discord ^^!
Chapter 2 will make a lot of progress in it's story and really get things moving. It's super ambitious and I want to do it properly. Please support me however you can!
Take care and keep yourself hydrated. Thank you for reading and the passionate support!
Regards,
Vonsatia
Zeref@123#
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Will Rin's mother NTR story begins from chapter 2. Hopefully it's a ugly old bastard like DaizoAperture Chapter 2: Progress Update #2
Greetings everyone.
It's been a bit more than a week since my last progress update. I have been super thorough with my plot outline which has exceeded more than 3000+ words by itself. So I can only imagine how many words the dialogues would come to.
I think it's safe for me to say that I'm writing nothing short of a short movie in this chapter. Without overselling it, this chapter will contain:
1: A lot more worldbuilding.
2: Spicy situations.
3: A darker tone and themes overall.
A lot will happen in this chapter. The first thing being introducing our Second Antagonist:
View attachment 5082148
While he looks like a generic cocky dude, I aim to give him some depth, humanize him and make him a compelling character overall.
Before we continue, let me give you the progress % for the people not that interested to read the whole thing. .....
Progress:
The outline is taking more time than usual since this chapter is looking to be 2-3 times bigger than Chapter 1. By next week's progress update, you should be seeing progress on all fronts!
- Story Outline: 0% ---> 85%
- Script: 0% ---> 25%
- Art: 0% ---> 20%
- Coding: 0%
- Proofreading: 0%
With that out of the way, let's get into the meat and bones of Chapter 2.
The Downtown District:
Concept Art:
View attachment 5082162
Welcome to The Downtown District. The name is a bit misleading as this is actually a City within a City. A place filled with secrets, shady establishments, mobs, gangs, and an ever decreasing presence of law enforcement. Our protagonists Rin and Keita will be thoroughly exploring this place together to find something specific for her Photography Competition.
This city is no joke, and things can go really bad if they're not careful.
Speaking of law enforcement, let me introduce another special character!
View attachment 5082158
I hope she's intriguing as a character. The $5 Patrons voted on this name, Noriko. Which means: "child of the law" or "child of principles". The name reflects values of order, guidance, and adherence to established norms.
(Pretty fitting name if I say so myself.)
Anyways.
I've been rambling quite a bit. Hope this info can inspire some speculations and conversations regarding where the story will go. We do a lot of story discussions and more on my Discord ^^!
Chapter 2 will make a lot of progress in it's story and really get things moving. It's super ambitious and I want to do it properly. Please support me however you can!
Take care and keep yourself hydrated. Thank you for reading and the passionate support!
Regards,
Vonsatia
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I hope that as the story and chapters go on, the MC doesn't end up falling down in his performance and becoming one of those typical NTR dounjinshi MCs we see around. He seems tough and certainly has some behavioral problems, but I hope he doesn't chicken out and stand up when confronted. Another curious thing I'm looking forward to seeing more of is the mysteries of this world; in order to have a good story it's obvious that there has to be intrigue, risks and striking twists.Aperture Chapter 2: Progress Update #2
Greetings everyone.
It's been a bit more than a week since my last progress update. I have been super thorough with my plot outline which has exceeded more than 3000+ words by itself. So I can only imagine how many words the dialogues would come to.
I think it's safe for me to say that I'm writing nothing short of a short movie in this chapter. Without overselling it, this chapter will contain:
1: A lot more worldbuilding.
2: Spicy situations.
3: A darker tone and themes overall.
A lot will happen in this chapter. The first thing being introducing our Second Antagonist:
View attachment 5082148
While he looks like a generic cocky dude, I aim to give him some depth, humanize him and make him a compelling character overall.
Before we continue, let me give you the progress % for the people not that interested to read the whole thing. .....
Progress:
The outline is taking more time than usual since this chapter is looking to be 2-3 times bigger than Chapter 1. By next week's progress update, you should be seeing progress on all fronts!
- Story Outline: 0% ---> 85%
- Script: 0% ---> 25%
- Art: 0% ---> 20%
- Coding: 0%
- Proofreading: 0%
With that out of the way, let's get into the meat and bones of Chapter 2.
The Downtown District:
Concept Art:
View attachment 5082162
Welcome to The Downtown District. The name is a bit misleading as this is actually a City within a City. A place filled with secrets, shady establishments, mobs, gangs, and an ever decreasing presence of law enforcement. Our protagonists Rin and Keita will be thoroughly exploring this place together to find something specific for her Photography Competition.
This city is no joke, and things can go really bad if they're not careful.
Speaking of law enforcement, let me introduce another special character!
View attachment 5082158
I hope she's intriguing as a character. The $5 Patrons voted on this name, Noriko. Which means: "child of the law" or "child of principles". The name reflects values of order, guidance, and adherence to established norms.
(Pretty fitting name if I say so myself.)
Anyways.
I've been rambling quite a bit. Hope this info can inspire some speculations and conversations regarding where the story will go. We do a lot of story discussions and more on my Discord ^^!
Chapter 2 will make a lot of progress in it's story and really get things moving. It's super ambitious and I want to do it properly. Please support me however you can!
Take care and keep yourself hydrated. Thank you for reading and the passionate support!
Regards,
Vonsatia
She will appear in chapter 2 yes! Her antagonist will also make an appearance. I'll keep her antagonist under wraps though.
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Is it just me or he would look several times better with blonde hair? Gyaru-ohs and tomboys fit so well together. Anyways, looking forward to Jun’s and Daichi’s blossoming relationship
.Not simply an officer, but a police CAPTAIN, huh? Yeah, Daizo being a professional NTR antagonist is all but confirmed.
Really curious how our principal will manage to blackmail Rin with this in mind.
The more I see, the more intrigued with the possible routes I get. This story is definitely worth the wait.
(Also yes, Noriko is too fucking hot to not have scenes
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Actually from what I heard from dev, there is a 3rd man which will be introduced in the next chapter. Principal is for Rin and his son is for the tomboy girl.