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My question to the dev is this. Is the goal of the NTR here to finalize a total sense of loss? Like as the MC are we playing to lose? Could he potentially meet another woman and recover?
 

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My question to the dev is this. Is the goal of the NTR here to finalize a total sense of loss? Like as the MC are we playing to lose? Could he potentially meet another woman and recover?
I feel like this answer would be a huge spoiler, so I'd rather not know
 

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Aperture Chapter 2: Synopsis and Preview


Delve deeper into the world of Aperture. In this chapter, you will explore the dark underbelly of Hoshino City. Commonly known as the Downtown District, it is home to illegal mobs, shady businesses, questionable bars and clubs.



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You accompany Tomoya Rin, a cool, artistic photographer. Help her find a hidden location deep within the city for her photography competition.

Get to know more about who she is, where her motives lie, and how she navigates through the ugly old men who always seem to make advances on her.



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You and Rin will face many dangerous people and scenarios along your way as the city unravels itself to you. Do you have what it takes to thrive in this city and take what you need? Or will the city and it's ugly residents swallow you whole?
Played the chapter.
I'm really impressed.
It's good.
Good setup. Solid writing.
And the A.I. art is well done.

I have some small constructive criticism on the art, but its nitpicking. So lmk if I should write you about them.
 

Tatsugaya

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Played the chapter.
I'm really impressed.
It's good.
Good setup. Solid writing.
And the A.I. art is well done.

I have some small constructive criticism on the art, but its nitpicking. So lmk if I should write you about them.
So, is the chapter good? That's great to hear because I'm really hyped to play it.
 

Tatsugaya

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My question to the dev is this. Is the goal of the NTR here to finalize a total sense of loss? Like as the MC are we playing to lose? Could he potentially meet another woman and recover?
I hope there are options and choices for us to decide which path to take throughout the story. Having the power to choose makes things more exciting.
 
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Ion.TemUS

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Just here to say the update is extremely good, but Im not a fan of the price hike.
I thought 5$ for early access is solid. 7 is stretching it.
at least at this point in the game. feels too quick an increase to me.
and the value increase you gotta deliver as a result could put too much pressure onto you. idk if you aren't setting people up for disappointment, as in they expect too much too quickly for that monthly price.

(Price hike is for NEXT update, not this one. Chapter 2 you can get at 3$ as of now, but afterwards (if I understood it correctly) early access will be 7$)).
 
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Vonsatia

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Just here to say the update is extremely good, but Im not a fan of the price hike.
I thought 5$ for early access is solid. 7 is stretching it.
at least at this point in the game. feels too quick an increase to me.
and the value increase you gotta deliver as a result could put too much pressure onto you. idk if you aren't setting people up for disappointment, as in they expect too much too quickly for that monthly price.

(Price hike is for NEXT update, not this one. Chapter 2 you can get at 3$ as of now, but afterwards (if I understood it correctly) early access will be 7$)).
I'm really glad you liked the new chapter!
About the increasing the prices, it's only for new supporters. Anyone who has subbed to me prior to this can retain the lower prices forever as long as they don't cancel.

I kept my prices relatively low earlier as I didn't want to charge more while being unproven, and the project has since grown a lot in scope. In terms of length, art quality, number of CGs etc. The adjustment reflects that.

For anyone new who wants to subscribe, it's completely up to them to decide if the new prices are worth it!
 
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TurboKinetics

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Here it is:
Hope you enjoy!

Regards,
Vonsatia.
i dont understand the netorare and romance tags together in a kinetic novel. im not asking for spoilers but can you make that make sense?
 

gaga123310

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After completing Chapter 2, it's safe to say that the developer definitely knows what they're doing - the game's structure is excellent, and the suspenseful scene in the club is truly captivating. Rin did indeed give that bastard a blowjob, especially considering how she responded to MC's questions afterward... Or did she not, dear developer? And if she did, will we ever get to see that scene? :)
Good luck to you, and we look forward to the next chapter.
 

jayphi45

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Here it is:
Hope you enjoy!

Regards,
Vonsatia.
I take back my previous comment about being worried after the standing art change. Game still looks great and this might be one of the few VN's I actually could sit through and read most of it without getting bored. For sure throwing a sub your way, nice work.
 
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