VN Ren'Py Aperture [Ch.2] [Vonsatia]

[Zeref@123#]

Well, even the first chapter had at least some content, albeit a little bit. But the second is just pure story and plot, with no options, choices, or content... I can't imagine anyone even needing it or finding it interesting. There's no protagonist's impact, and I don't get a feel for the game or its atmosphere. The beginning was certainly promising, but the second chapter was disappointing. This isn't the kind of game that takes the time to build up the plot. Don't follow the example of Japanese hentai games, as they come out in one piece, not in parts like this. The player experience is completely different.

You really hate story building. There are lots of crap games out there where you will get action from start. Also he is a dev. Don't expect him to release the game in one shot, you can wait some time and then try.

 

[Cuckyyboy]

Good game

 

[Zeref@123#]

Well, even the first chapter had at least some content, albeit a little bit. But the second is just pure story and plot, with no options, choices, or content... I can't imagine anyone even needing it or finding it interesting. There's no protagonist's impact, and I don't get a feel for the game or its atmosphere. The beginning was certainly promising, but the second chapter was disappointing. This isn't the kind of game that takes the time to build up the plot. Don't follow the example of Japanese hentai games, as they come out in one piece, not in parts like this. The player experience is completely different.

The entire chapter 2 was not meaning less but to built the relationship between Keita and Rin. Who is Rin? What she stands for. Why Keita falls in love with Rin. How rotten Hoshino city is. It's protagonist POV, it's how he sees rotten city of Hoshino and Rin as person. I usually don't like to read crappy translated dialogues but this felt so good. NTR is good if the romance is good.

 

[Fitharia]

First time i see this vn but already had to laugh, serious look at the second last preview picture, the creep walks like someone just kicked him in the nuggets and now he feeling up a girls tits to see if they can replace his damaged jewels. Seems a pretty well made ntr vn, might try it later, if more of those funny walking guys appear.

 

[What's Up Doc?]

I really liked this game with its first episode and had high expectations, which I still do and remain hopeful, but my advice to the developer now is not to turn this into a wall of text simulator with zero sexual events under the name of "slow burn". The update intervals are already quite long, and when people don't get any of their expectations met, they will eventually abandon it. Maybe not in the second or third update, but eventually.

 

[Yougiblack]

I know right, we have so few AI cg NTS games... /s

Yeaaahh but this one is looking special though mystery NTR without a glimpse of NTS elements isn't my cup of tea, maybe NTR but straight up mystery nah

 

[Oonigiri]

I really liked this game with its first episode and had high expectations, which I still do and remain hopeful, but my advice to the developer now is not to turn this into a wall of text simulator with zero sexual events under the name of "slow burn". The update intervals are already quite long, and when people don't get any of their expectations met, they will eventually abandon it. Maybe not in the second or third update, but eventually.

Agree completely. Slow burn too long will lose audience interest and that's how the project die. Do we want story in H game? well yeah, but we also want the action as well.

 

[MoonlitWhisper]

Thank you! Currently the first chapter is linear. But I will definitely be having some branching paths, scenes, etc. I may also invest some time in a pure love route given the response on the romance plot. Do give it a try!

With this post, I'm now convinced this game is going to be a great experience. I'll be following this one on Patreon very soon.

 

[Angelcrush]

Thank you! Currently the first chapter is linear. But I will definitely be having some branching paths, scenes, etc. I may also invest some time in a pure love route given the response on the romance plot. Do give it a try!

Not really interested in a "pure" love route. Netorase however ...
but I guess it's not that kind of game. Looks good though.

 

[Arkade]

It's a shared pov- not a mc pov. without choices so dev gives us what he thinks we need to make our own assumptions. The red text name from behind door might as well be confirmation. Though it's clear they also want us and the MC to both believe that given how much he thought about it. I'd rather have toggleable povs for sake of making my own guesses at what is happening but seems with a shared pov and no choices- we are just being told a story. which is fine- just not a preference of mine

 

[greybear55]

Oh, great. Another slow burn....

 

[gaga123310]

It's a shared pov- not a mc pov. without choices so dev gives us what he thinks we need to make our own assumptions. The red text name from behind door might as well be confirmation. Though it's clear they also want us and the MC to both believe that given how much he thought about it. I'd rather have toggleable povs for sake of making my own guesses at what is happening but seems with a shared pov and no choices- we are just being told a story. which is fine- just not a preference of mine

I absolutely agree with you... But I also want to add the words that the commenters said above, if the text of the sounds behind the door is "red", then since it's still a sex game, we need a view from Rin's perspective at the end of the chapter (or a separate view from her at the end of the chapter). I think this would be fair

 

[ffive]

Well the MC is strong, don't hesitate to beat anyone if someone does something wrong. He is not a pussy. You will not get disappointed

Considering the game's plot is unavoidable NTR with no other routes/outcomes this makes the "strong MC" really more of a blustering blowhard who is ultimately ending up a loser.

 

[ffive]

With this post, I'm now convinced this game is going to be a great experience. I'll be following this one on Patreon very soon.

If you check later part of the thread you'll discover that the dev in the end isn't actually planning any branching plot. Only some cosmetic differences to the scenes, based on equally cosmetic "choices" for MC's dialogues.

(which is fine, the game is tagged kinetic novel after all. But just so you know what to expect and not set yourself up for a disappointment)

 

[That Pervert]

Damn, I'm too invested with these characters that I wish this game wasn't NTR.

 

[MoonlitWhisper]

If you check later part of the thread you'll discover that the dev in the end isn't actually planning any branching plot. Only some cosmetic differences to the scenes, based on equally cosmetic "choices" for MC's dialogues.

(which is fine, the game is tagged kinetic novel after all. But just so you know what to expect and not set yourself up for a disappointment)

According to the F95 rules page, the 'Kinetic Novel' tag indicates that the current content is a kinetic novel, not the entire game...
It is the developer who determines the future
I couldn't find the subsequent posts where you claim the developer went back on their word! This is the latest post from the developer stating that this game is not intended to be a kinetic novel

 

[NTR Sage]

Any sex content available

 

[ffive]

I couldn't find the subsequent posts where you claim the developer went back on their word! This is the latest post from the developer stating that this game is not intended to be a kinetic novel

Here:

Dialogue Options: Let's have a bit of a RPG element going, shall we? I'll be honest, I won't be able to implement branching storylines or scenes with this just yet. It's mostly for flavor. Be the Sasaki Keita you want to be.
Note: These choices won't have uncharacteristic choices for Keita. He'll essentially be the same character.

For now, I don't think there will be any real branching paths. Rather, I'll probably do branching H-scenes here and there.

Of course, you can convince yourself that "for now" and "just yet" totally means that there will be actual branching added in some unspecified future, but realistically, you'd be just huffing copium. When the developer opens with "It's first and foremost a passion project of mine. Purely for NTR lovers." then it's rather clear that covering themes outside of NTR is not likely to be their passion. Combine that with inevitable burnout that comes from working for long months and years on something, even when that something is one's passion, and we'll be lucky if the primary, NTR route gets completed. Given how few amateur porn games reach this stage.

 

[LordD99]

nice atmo...this is getting better, her mom also hot damn. I was thinking how many old ugly basterd will defile her and mom later. I still hoping that mc don't know about what happen to her or mom but suspicious maybe just this don't stop him to love her right and so they are married have a daughters. anyway.....so far so good

 

[WhySoSerious19]

Nice game, thanks