VN Ren'Py Aperture [Ch.2] [Vonsatia]

[Rozhok]

Do you guys think its Rin that was sucking that guy off based off of the red text? Kinda felt like it was

It certainly felt like the dev wanted us to believe it. But from a story standpoint, it doesn't make too much sense. What could that guy have offered to make her do that? Maybe Rin spoke the truth and there actually was another girl in there. Maybe he just made her watch?
It could have been blackmail, but it feels to easy. I'm sure there's more to it.

Love that we're being toyed with our emotions like that

 

[Tatsugaya]

Well the MC is strong, don't hesitate to beat anyone if someone does something wrong. He is not a pussy. You will not get disappointed

What makes me really interested in this game is precisely the MC. He's not part of that cliché MC standard in this type of work, which is a relief. I hope we can destroy each of the antagonists that appear depending on which route we follow, and also that the MC isn't weakened for some reason throughout the new chapters.

 

[Rugerrell6]

I like that the MC isnt a pushover pussy to. BUT... there's always somebody bigger and tougher then you or just have more power and connections especially in a city like the one in this story. So its gonna be interesting to see how the story plays out.

 

[Slvknt]

The writing didn't disappoint. Also people complaing about getting blueballed by the lack of sexual content is funny
10/10 update

 

[kristo0086]

I like that the MC isnt a pushover pussy to. BUT... there's always somebody bigger and tougher then you or just have more power and connections especially in a city like the one in this story. So its gonna be interesting to see how the story plays out.

It's really interesting what's going to happen in the story.

 

[Golgoroth The Destroyer]

Golgoroth declares that this game, despite the fact that only two chapters have come out as of the time of writing this review, is both entertaining and well-written. The Dark Lord sends his regards to the developer, and shall eagerly await for more content.

 

[Vonsatia]

Golgoroth declares that this game, despite the fact that only two chapters have come out as of the time of writing this review, is both entertaining and well-written. The Dark Lord sends his regards to the developer, and shall eagerly await for more content.

Thank you Golgoroth.

 

[MoonlitWhisper]

Here:



Of course, you can convince yourself that "for now" and "just yet" totally means that there will be actual branching added in some unspecified future, but realistically, you'd be just huffing copium. When the developer opens with "It's first and foremost a passion project of mine. Purely for NTR lovers." then it's rather clear that covering themes outside of NTR is not likely to be their passion. Combine that with inevitable burnout that comes from working for long months and years on something, even when that something is one's passion, and we'll be lucky if the primary, NTR route gets completed. Given how few amateur porn games reach this stage.

Thanks a ton for showing me these posts. I thought we’d have at least two routes..I mean, I said that based on the post below!!!
https://f95zone.to/threads/aperture-ch-2-vonsatia.262238/post-17523908
Thanks for telling me, because I was close to supporting him on Patreon. The visuals, models, and atmosphere of this game are very nice, but unavoidable NTR/full-pathetic-mc isn't enjoyable for me. I like having a love route so I can play both. Anyway, have a good day.

 

[Phantom Renegade]

Thank you! I learned a lot in the process of making this. Making a chapter twice as big with 3x CGs haha. Now that I know what it takes to make something of this length, I should be able to optimize my work flow better. I aim to release chapter 3 at a smaller time-frame.


Ahaha that's the best compliment for me, thank you!



I understand your concerns. Personally, I don't agree with the wall of text thing since I've tried my best to present the story sections with so many CGs. Visually, I always try to keep it engaging and non-static.

As for the slow burn, my aim for this chapter was to establish the romance between MC and FMC. I didn't want to stretch that out to multiple chapters. So, because of the story focus in chapter 2, I can fully start the NTR plot from Chapter 3 itself. Naturally, the scenes and escalation of sexual events will be gradual, but it's gonna be exciting.

As for NSFW scenes, I wanted to include more but had to compromise on it for this chapter. I even had to cut Rin's POV.

Safe to say, Aperture will start to heat up a lot, going forward!

Hi, Awesome job you are doing here i cant wait to see what comes in chapter 3.

When you said: I even had to cut Rin's POV, i dont know if you do it on purpose to make "suffer" the spectator with anxiety and anticipation to dying to know what happen behind that door hahaha, but i think is great if you do,

for me the key of good NTR game is the well developing of high peaks of tension and doubt and later Pow the strike of emotions that hit you when you discover what really happened... Is what make the NTR so great and unique cuz is the only genre that offer such intense experience,

I think if you play well the cards in the story, trying to developing the highest tension situations you can bring the spectator and experience they never forget thats why i dont know how good or wrong can be the POV feature in the future cuz if reveals things too fast and dont let the tension build up correctly can bring harm of the quality of the experience (for example if we already see what happened behind that door the anticipation and trill we experience and the intensity of the impact when we discover it dont as high as can be).

I cant wait to see what you bring in the nexts chapters, i wish you the best thanks again for the hard work.

 

[MrNTR]

Does this include chapter 1 and 2?

 

[MrNTR]

Only thing I recommend just from the start is a gallery. I hear they're harder to implement the longer you go so that'd be a nice feature.

Yeah, I don't think you have to worry about that considering there's just one blowjob scene with some random NPC. Come back in 20 years.

 

[ImNotHereToFap]

What's the play time for this game for this update? Is it worth playing now or should I wait for more updates? I really prefer enjoy a good game from start to finish, just like how I want to wait for the TV show season to complete before watching episode 1.

 

[gilgamesh9]

What's the play time for this game for this update? Is it worth playing now or should I wait for more updates? I really prefer enjoy a good game from start to finish, just like how I want to wait for the TV show season to complete before watching episode 1.

At the rate it's going, it's story seems more important and if I'm understanding correctly we wont really get to see much any way and we are supposed to just imagine what is happening. Probably another 4 or 5 updates before you really see anything. Plus even though it's suppose to focus around the principal they are adding a lot of characters, so no telling when. Decent update none the less though.

 

[PonderingPotatoPal]

Thank you! Currently the first chapter is linear. But I will definitely be having some branching paths, scenes, etc. I may also invest some time in a pure love route given the response on the romance plot. Do give it a try!



Super validating to hear this. I'm putting a lot of care into this and the characters. Hope you're in for the long ride

I'm confused right now, is this true or false? One person says it's the developer's word, another says it's a lie...what the fuck?

 

[gilgamesh9]

I'm confused right now, is this true or false? One person says it's the developer's word, another says it's a lie...what the fuck?

So far no choices to make so seems like it's gonna be linear, could change in the future.

 

[Fitharia]

The first 2 chapters are amazing, I love the ntr elements already in it, but for some reason I started to get a liking to the mc and his new found female friend, that I rather see them be a couple without the ntr touch them, but more like they keep uncovering the filth shown in the city. But i fear she won't be spared either, since fatso already got his eyes on her. But overall pretty good start.

 

[Ion.TemUS]

Do you guys think its Rin that was sucking that guy off based off of the red text? Kinda felt like it was

I think it was not.
I think the name was red because the MC panicked and had the THOUGHT it was Rin.

 

[Fitharia]

Do you guys think its Rin that was sucking that guy off based off of the red text? Kinda felt like it was

That wasn't her, the guy knows her mom, her mom's a special agent, doubt he would risk things. Also she is to pure still... but soon the principal might try create situations to get her.

For propper ntr the mc should be her first in most things and then the ntr creeps should ruin her, but like said earlier i hope that could be avoided. Want to see other girls though in trouble with ntr bulls and having a bf not knowing, but the mc and photo girl I want be somewhat voyeur photo it all. Maybe get kinky with eachother afterwards about what they witness.

 

[desmosome]

Vonsatia

I haven't played chapter 2 yet, but I want to discuss some things. At the end of Chapter 1, there was that one scene away from the MC's perspective.

But you had intentions of doing some mystery NTR for this title based on the OP. Mystery NTR is by far the hardest one to write among NTR subtypes, especially if you take a non-comical approach and keep things more or less grounded. You need to withhold information to the players but still somehow make it hot enough to edged them along and build up tension without making turning the MC into a literal retard with zero situational awareness.

But even perfectly executed mystery NTR tends to have an opportunity cost. Many players do want to watch the scenes and corruption arc in detail at some point. When you shifted out of MC perspective in chap 1, I was wondering what your plan was in structuring the game. Because the players are already getting information that the MC doesn't have. Will the mystery only be kept in regards to the main female characters? And how will you handle the tricky part of making it fappable? A lot of mystery NTR uses tropes like girl having sex while on phone, behind curtains, under tables, or onlyfans type account with a censor/mask. Those are all hot, but it does sometimes strain the plausibility of the situation and often puts into question the IQ of the MC.

One way you can get around this is by using a recollection room/gallery thing. The players could decide to watch (or not) what was happening away from the MC's perspective. This is kind of a best of both worlds type of deal, but in practice, it will probably be a crutch. You won't feel the need to make the mystery side of things fappable since you are allowing players to view the full thing at their leisure. Another method is to only release the full perspective after you finish the male MC perspective. That has its own pros and cons.

Anyways, I don't know what style you will go with nor do I have any intention of suggesting a path. That's all up to you. But in case you haven't, you might want to play Girlfriend Tapes. It was one of the best written mystery NTR that really kept things strictly MC POV.

 

[gilgamesh9]

Vonsatia

I haven't played chapter 2 yet, but I want to discuss some things. At the end of Chapter 1, there was that one scene away from the MC's perspective.

But you had intentions of doing some mystery NTR for this title based on the OP. Mystery NTR is by far the hardest one to write among NTR subtypes, especially if you take a non-comical approach and keep things more or less grounded. You need to withhold information to the players but still somehow make it hot enough to edged them along and build up tension without making turning the MC into a literal retard with zero situational awareness.

But even perfectly executed mystery NTR tends to have an opportunity cost. Many players do want to watch the scenes and corruption arc in detail at some point. When you shifted out of MC perspective in chap 1, I was wondering what your plan was in structuring the game. Because the players are already getting information that the MC doesn't have. Will the mystery only be kept in regards to the main female characters? And how will you handle the tricky part of making it fappable? A lot of mystery NTR uses tropes like girl having sex while on phone, behind curtains, under tables, or onlyfans type account with a censor/mask. Those are all hot, but it does sometimes strain the plausibility of the situation and often puts into question the IQ of the MC.

One way you can get around this is by using a recollection room/gallery thing. The players could decide to watch (or not) what was happening away from the MC's perspective. This is kind of a best of both worlds type of deal, but in practice, it will probably be a crutch. You won't feel the need to make the mystery side of things fappable since you are allowing players to view the full thing at their leisure. Another method is to only release the full perspective after you finish the male MC perspective. That has its own pros and cons.

Anyways, I don't know what style you will go with nor do I have any intention of suggesting a path. That's all up to you. But in case you haven't, you might want to play Girlfriend Tapes. It was one of the best written mystery NTR that really kept things strictly MC POV.

That is what i was thinking, plus for me i need to see something from it at some point. Some old rpgm NTR games made it where you would only see her side in the gallery which worked but if im never gonna see then it kinda just ruins it imo.