VN Ren'Py Aperture [Ch.2] [Vonsatia]

[ffive]

Anyways, I don't know what style you will go with nor do I have any intention of suggesting a path.

Per the dev's earlier posting, they're planning to have optional POV of MC's partner:

Rin's Perspective: The player will be able to experience our FMC, Tomoya Rin's unique POV. Get to know how she thinks, how she sees the world and our characters from her perspective.
Note: This perspective is completely optional for players who want a Male POV only playthrough.

I'd guess this would include her perspective on the NTR events as well.

 

[turbokinetics]

Well the MC is strong, don't hesitate to beat anyone if someone does something wrong. He is not a pussy. You will not get disappointed

not that strong if he gets ntr'ed lol

 

[Tatsugaya]

not that strong if he gets ntr'ed lol

There are other girls in the game. If Rin fails, just move on to another one. And so on and so forth, it will also depend on the creator whether we will have different endings.

 

[goldenrhino]

There are other girls in the game. If Rin fails, just move on to another one. And so on and so forth, it will also depend on the creator whether we will have different endings.

It says unavoidable ntr, so I doubt the MC will have a happy endng...

 

[turbokinetics]

It says unavoidable ntr, so I doubt the MC will have a happy endng...

unless the dev sets up the MC to reclaim one of these girls. then the ntr was still unavoidable but mc can still get their piece, so to speak. im doubting it though. dev had said theyd put in a love route but id imagine the dev would have had to start that branching path already, no? almost seems like the dev was bait and switching us. or rather that the dev cucked us with that claim haha

 

[Phantom Renegade]

Thank you! I learned a lot in the process of making this. Making a chapter twice as big with 3x CGs haha. Now that I know what it takes to make something of this length, I should be able to optimize my work flow better. I aim to release chapter 3 at a smaller time-frame.


Ahaha that's the best compliment for me, thank you!



I understand your concerns. Personally, I don't agree with the wall of text thing since I've tried my best to present the story sections with so many CGs. Visually, I always try to keep it engaging and non-static.

As for the slow burn, my aim for this chapter was to establish the romance between MC and FMC. I didn't want to stretch that out to multiple chapters. So, because of the story focus in chapter 2, I can fully start the NTR plot from Chapter 3 itself. Naturally, the scenes and escalation of sexual events will be gradual, but it's gonna be exciting.

As for NSFW scenes, I wanted to include more but had to compromise on it for this chapter. I even had to cut Rin's POV.

Safe to say, Aperture will start to heat up a lot, going forward!

Hi, Awesome job you are doing here i cant wait to see what comes in chapter 3.

When you said: I even had to cut Rin's POV, i dont know if you do it on purpose to make "suffer" the spectator with anxiety and anticipation to dying to know what happen behind that door hahaha, but i think is great if you do,

for me the key of good NTR game is the well developing of high peaks of tension and doubt and later Pow the strike of emotions that hit you when you discover what really happened... Is what make the NTR so great and unique cuz is the only genre that offer such intense experience,

I think if you play well the cards in the story, trying to developing the highest tension situations you can bring the spectator and experience they never forget thats why i dont know how good or wrong can be the POV feature in the future cuz if reveals things too fast and dont let the tension build up correctly can bring harm to the quality of the experience (for example if we already see what happened behind that door the anticipation and trill we experience and the intensity of the impact when we discover it dont will be as high as can be).

I cant wait to see what you bring in the nexts chapters, i wish you the best thanks again for the hard work.

PD: The art improvement quality you made in this update is Awesome.

 

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[saitamaTM]

first time i see ai good like this ai will only bad with lazy people

 

[saitamaTM]

Hi, Awesome job you are doing here i cant wait to see what comes in chapter 3.

When you said: I even had to cut Rin's POV, i dont know if you do it on purpose to make "suffer" the spectator with anxiety and anticipation to dying to know what happen behind that door hahaha, but i think is great if you do,

for me the key of good NTR game is the well developing of high peaks of tension and doubt and later Pow the strike of emotions that hit you when you discover what really happened... Is what make the NTR so great and unique cuz is the only genre that offer such intense experience,

I think if you play well the cards in the story, trying to developing the highest tension situations you can bring the spectator and experience they never forget thats why i dont know how good or wrong can be the POV feature in the future cuz if reveals things too fast and dont let the tension build up correctly can bring harm to the quality of the experience (for example if we already see what happened behind that door the anticipation and trill we experience and the intensity of the impact when we discover it dont will be as high as can be).

I cant wait to see what you bring in the nexts chapters, i wish you the best thanks again for the hard work.

PD: The art improvement quality you made in this update is Awesome.

the BJ noise and the mc not see Rin anywhere any panic texting her it kinda give me anxiety and i love that

 

[Hentailover533]

will there be optional creampie cleanup and or cum kiss?

 

[What's Up Doc?]

will there be optional creampie cleanup and or cum kiss?

 

[gaga123310]

This person has a mental illness, so just ignore them.

 

[Htoon]

All they did was ask a question, you don't need to be rude & sanctimonious about it.

 

[Rozhok]

All they did was ask a question, you don't need to be rude & sanctimonious about it.

He's making it weird by doing it in every topic though. Kinda like that heels guy, although that might have been a bit of a meme

 

[ffive]

There are other girls in the game. If Rin fails, just move on to another one. And so on and so forth, it will also depend on the creator whether we will have different endings.

The very premise of the game is that MC and Rin get together and then you watch her unavoidably get "corrupted" (and get anxious about it) That's supposed to be the main impact and draw, not "and then MC just shrugged and went to another girl and all was right with the world, as if none of that ever happened or mattered".

Not to mention, this is in context of "MC is acshually strong!" "Not if he gets NTRed". If you have him "just move on" only to get NTRed again, and again, and again, that doesn't help at all in making him looks strong; quite the opposite, he'd be repeatedly rendered a loser.