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Ion.TemUS

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That wasn't her, the guy knows her mom, her mom's a special agent, doubt he would risk things. Also she is to pure still... but soon the principal might try create situations to get her.

For propper ntr the mc should be her first in most things and then the ntr creeps should ruin her, but like said earlier i hope that could be avoided. Want to see other girls though in trouble with ntr bulls and having a bf not knowing, but the mc and photo girl I want be somewhat voyeur photo it all. Maybe get kinky with eachother afterwards about what they witness.
I agree, I also disagree. Lol.

I don't think the MC needs to be her "first" in anything.
I agree though that there needs to be (more) romance/spark between the two of them (there was already a lot, and a lot of good writing at this point imo tho) before she gets "corrupted" and coerced into doing stuff. But I think the principal actually met her when MC was looking for her and during that meeting something happened that is the setup for future coercion/corruption.
 

Ion.TemUS

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not that strong if he gets ntr'ed lol
The best NTR has a decently strong MC and the FMC falls/ get corrupted DESPITE that. It plays with the powerlessness of the MC despite their physical and mental strength. If the MC was a pathetic twink the "fall" of the FMC would not be impactful cause MC would be a bad choice for a partner anyway.

Same goes for a good chemistry and romance. Last update has shown that it can deliver on that.
 
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The best NTR has a decently strong MC and the FMC falls/ get corrupted DESPITE that. It plays with the powerlessness of the MC despite their physical and mental strength. If the MC was a pathetic twink the "fall" of the FMC would not be impactful cause MC would be a bad choice for a partner anyway.
I'd argue it's not very impactful either way -- no matter if the MC "appears" strong or weak, if at the end of the day their partner chooses to abandon them in face of trouble/temptation/whatever, then it just means that in hindsight the supposed bond was little more than lip service and the MC's supposed strength(s) meaningless, if at the end of the day the MC didn't have what it'd take for their partner to stick with them instead of opting for the alternative. They're ultimately evaluated as "insufficient choice for a partner" in both scenarios.

If there's anything different, it is that this setup makes the MC even more of a pathetic failure than that proverbial "pathetic twink", because they can't even hide behind "well i don't have anything going for me so no wonder my partner didn't choose me".

Same for the chemistry and romance. It doesn't matter how many "ILY"s are dropped, if two weeks or months later the person declaring all that is readily fucking other people. Something that falls apart at first obstacle simply wasn't substantial to begin with, no matter how much people involved were in love with the idea of being in love.
 
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