VN Ren'Py Aperture [Ch.2] [Vonsatia]

[Shigeru Miyamoto]

Vonsatia Stand proud. You cooked.

No one likes getting blue-balled but getting H-scenes right off the bat ruins NTR imo. The implication of something happening and then your imagination filling in the gaps at least until the reveal are part of what makes this genre so erotic. Even if it turns out that it wasn't Rin, it's still a hot idea to play with until the actual reveal.

Your latest update reflects that. I'm interested in seeing the heroine turn into ths school's cum dump whom boys line up to fuck (in one of the routes, I know many don't like this stuff). But, I value the journey to result just as much.

Looking forward to your next update. My only suggestion is to have small H-tidbits like this for the main heroine on each update. What happens to the side heroines doesn't interest me personally.

Also, please avoid adding too many FMC to appeal to different fetishes.

 

[turbokinetics]

Why people are assuming so many things. Probably because they are not in discord. Von has not decided everything. He is still trying to make the game better. Like he has not abandoned the idea of pure love route and just want to see people's reactions. To be honest he is 100% sure going to make a good ending route. As for branching, he want to focus and master one thing. Choices will be for dialogues & accesories. He even wanted some rpg elements but it's not possible. He is a new developer trying his first game with first writing. And so far he doing great.

Some of us hate discord. Dev communication should never rely on discord for main channel news. Im not saying dev is doing bad but if they want branching they shouldnt wait too late to start. Wait to late and the girls are too far fallen or youll lose the base that has to wait and wait for it. Unless its the mc saving the LI while shes falling. That could work, but depends on the devs plan. If done right would be kinda amazing.
Thinking about an ntr game where the mc fights and wins back the girl from the dark actually might butter my biscuit lol.

 

[PragmaticCynic]

High quality project!
Despite the fact that the AI img its still looks cool and professional!
The only downside is that this is a unavoidable NTR project!

The characters are colorful and beautiful, everyone has their own character (i don't mean all sorts of bastards and antagonists).
It's clear where the game is heading and what fate awaits Rin.
On the one hand, i want to see the lewd NTR scenes as soon as possible, on the other hand, i want to drag out this moment of disappointment in Rin because of her future actions!
The MC is made strong and i'm interested in how this will affect him and the plot in the future. What kind of ending awaits him? Will there be multiple endings in this project?
There's a mystery here, and maybe the dev, with the help of a strong MC, wants to show that a character like him can also be weak?
Maybe it's MC's actions and his character that will push Rin towards NTR!?
When MC got woke up at the end of the update and was tritened by Rin's mother, for some reason he didn't ask the most important question!
What happened after i lost consciousness? What did the bandits do or try to do to you? How did i end up at your house?

 

[kootas]

Wait... no segz in chapter 2?

 

[shotzpro]

Beautiful art, design, but wall of text is annoying

 

[Zeref@123#]

High quality project!
Despite the fact that the AI img its still looks cool and professional!
The only downside is that this is a unavoidable NTR project!

The characters are colorful and beautiful, everyone has their own character (i don't mean all sorts of bastards and antagonists).
It's clear where the game is heading and what fate awaits Rin.
On the one hand, i want to see the lewd NTR scenes as soon as possible, on the other hand, i want to drag out this moment of disappointment in Rin because of her future actions!
The MC is made strong and i'm interested in how this will affect him and the plot in the future. What kind of ending awaits him? Will there be multiple endings in this project?
There's a mystery here, and maybe the dev, with the help of a strong MC, wants to show that a character like him can also be weak?
Maybe it's MC's actions and his character that will push Rin towards NTR!?
When MC got woke up at the end of the update and was tritened by Rin's mother, for some reason he didn't ask the most important question!
What happened after i lost consciousness? What did the bandits do or try to do to you? How did i end up at your house?

It's not unavoidable. Dev said he will try to make a pure love route depending on the response. He might not focused that now but in future we will get it. (I can feel that)

 

[Zeref@123#]

Some of us hate discord. Dev communication should never rely on discord for main channel news. Im not saying dev is doing bad but if they want branching they shouldnt wait too late to start. Wait to late and the girls are too far fallen or youll lose the base that has to wait and wait for it. Unless its the mc saving the LI while shes falling. That could work, but depends on the devs plan. If done right would be kinda amazing.
Thinking about an ntr game where the mc fights and wins back the girl from the dark actually might butter my biscuit lol.

Well it's chapter 2 . He wants FMC POV to be implemented, at the same time he wants the story to get proper built. I hope we get to see options soon but don't expect major choices. As for the discord thing, it's your choice but discord community of any dev is a place where we can get close to dev and get to know more. You can only get official news in patreon. But then it's your choice. If you are not comfortable it's really ok not to use it. In this case we are here to provide you insights.

 

[ffive]

To be honest he is 100% sure going to make a good ending route. As for branching, he want to focus and master one thing.

That's pretty much contradictory -- you either focus and make one thing or do multiple things in parallel.

The most favorable reading would be that the "good ending" would be added after the main NTR route is all completed, polished and done, but that's quite unrealistic expectation. If NTR events are unavoidable and the whole plot is based on them happening in sequence, then trying to then transplant onto it a branch where you avoid these events would be a genuine mess -- what happens e.g. to the antagonist's escalated actions if the early ones were blocked? Does the game ignore it and just proceeds like the girl got magically "corrupted" anyway even though nothing happened? Or it puts a stop to things and you just skip basically the whole game?

Multiple branches are something that you have to account for from the very start of making your game, it's not really feasible as an add-on when you'd be effectively redoing the whole thing to accommodate it.

 

[Step3]

Crazy good ai art. Best I've seen.

 

[Tatsugaya]

unless the dev sets up the MC to reclaim one of these girls. then the ntr was still unavoidable but mc can still get their piece, so to speak. im doubting it though. dev had said theyd put in a love route but id imagine the dev would have had to start that branching path already, no? almost seems like the dev was bait and switching us. or rather that the dev cucked us with that claim haha

I don't even care much about a romantic route, if there isn't one. What I want is a route where the protagonist can get revenge and kick the antagonists' asses and all the bad things that would happen to him. That would be awesome and different too, enough of these pathetic MCs we see in these types of games. In the end, it's just an idea.

 

[turbokinetics]

That's pretty much contradictory -- you either focus and make one thing or do multiple things in parallel.

The most favorable reading would be that the "good ending" would be added after the main NTR route is all completed, polished and done, but that's quite unrealistic expectation. If NTR events are unavoidable and the whole plot is based on them happening in sequence, then trying to then transplant onto it a branch where you avoid these events would be a genuine mess -- what happens e.g. to the antagonist's escalated actions if the early ones were blocked? Does the game ignore it and just proceeds like the girl got magically "corrupted" anyway even though nothing happened? Or it puts a stop to things and you just skip basically the whole game?

Multiple branches are something that you have to account for from the very start of making your game, it's not really feasible as an add-on when you'd be effectively redoing the whole thing to accommodate it.

^all of this. That was my point. If you go back and add a branch later it can get messy. If he wanted to wait thats fine but he could add a branch point soon. Renpy allows for unclickable choices that a dev can go back to. Confessions in the dark did this for a swinging route. Its not a built route so if you click it, it just circles back to the choice til you click the one path that is built. Gives the players a save point for when it does get built. Dev could still do it though

 

[NozToh]

Art is extremely good and the mum might actually be more hot than the daughter lmao. Having said that, I hate ntr where it's random guys, I would prefer to see just one big bad guy doing the ntr. I don't mind the hidden aspect but I feel like there should be a way to see what happened afterwards

 

[zmfinga]

As a hater for AI or VN games, this game was a good VN game to experience, really enjoyed your work! I feel like I can play this game in public and not be extremely judged and condemned to hell.


I wish you nothing but the best for yourself and your work!

 

[Phantom Renegade]

As a hater for AI or VN games, this game was a good VN game to experience, really enjoyed your work! I feel like I can play this game in public and not be extremely judged and condemned to hell.


I wish you nothing but the best for yourself and your work!

Hi, if you dont hurt yourself of others there is not any problem in your porn preferences but i recommend not to play or see porn in public haha, maybe you can share comments and opinions of porn with really close not toxic friends but never do it in public where you expose yourself to an X amount of people with X amount lvl of understanding.

PD: indeed i cant wait to see the next chapter next year.

 

[kartolas]

Really good. Unfortunately some of the kinks aren't that appealing to me and I'll probably stop but so far I really enjoyed it. We'll see.


Thank you.