1. On this game, Apocalust, that's fine actually. I would prefer a VN with amazing animations. Can improve the characters and dialogue a bit though. But miss me with wandering around, doing mini-games and all that. Going to different rooms at different times and days of the week to progress is fine and rewarding, but I am not looking to complete a master quest here.
2. His OTHER GAME - Dark Neighborhood. I TOTALLY Disagree with you. I finished it. Let me tell you, it's actually one of the better, if not best, m/s games out there. It has some of the best scenes. It really picks up after the halfway point or so. Btw I've played easily 30 of these games. Not to mention that a COMPLETE game out here is pretty commendable. Like, the game is done from A to Z and wraps up great. It really takes a complete look at the m/s genre (you end up impregnating her. Also you bang her in front of the dad if you're into that).
In fact, the writing in that game is so much better/different than Apocalust, I actually question whether the creator is the same. He probably used a ghost writer. I'm telling you, the quality and eroticism of Dark Neighborhood far exceeds Apocalust's. So go ahead and give it another try, or use the gallery mod. Also the game is a bit darker and more disturbing lol, Apocalust is totally different in its appearance, tone, and story so far.
Also, Dark Neighborhood had some weird, and oddly hilarious moments. Yeah...strange game honestly. I don't think the writers are the same, the writer for Dark Neighborhood was way more sophisticated. Anyway, check it out.