Hey ttyrke,
Played 0.02b for about an hour, cool premise!
Bug?: Main Character "Horny" stat does not decrease after fucking a slave, only after masturbating. Checked the code and it appears Horny only resets after it gets over 100? In-game it's not clear how that works.
A few suggestions:
- There are events that instant-kill the player with wrong choices (quicksand, muggers). This just breaks the game flow by making the player reload a save to try different choice. I suggest using in-world penalties, for example: Player is injured and loses Strength, or the muggers steal a random slave.
- With choices that have unpredictable/random/probabilistic outcomes, it would be nice to give the player an indication of their chances of success. Either with words or numbers. For example: "15% chance of success" or "Almost Impossible".
- One of the biggest areas I see for expanding the the game is with the attributes of the slave girls. I would love to see a stat sheet of some kind with differences in Height/Weight, Breast & Butt size, skills, obedience/resistance, hair color. Free Cities Pregmod has some of the most expansive random-girl generation I've seen. It's probably overkill for Apocalyptic World, but it's worth checking out the parameters they use to make each girl interesting and unique.
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Looking at the code I see there are also a handful of girl attributes that are not yet displayed anywhere (corruption/strength/etc), so it seems like you have more girl parameters planned than are currently used.
If you are interested in open-sourcing the game and putting it in a git repository, I and others in the F95 community can offer code contributions as well as these text suggestions.
Cheers mate!