Ren'Py Arena of Lust [v0.1.3a] [SunriseFoxy]

[Merseault]

and the mini game on the graveyard (part time job from Vanessa) doesnt rly seem to work, or i'm too stupid, idk^^ but i cant shoot at all, nothing happens

 

[Blinddejik]

and the mini game on the graveyard (part time job from Vanessa) doesnt rly seem to work, or i'm too stupid, idk^^ but i cant shoot at all, nothing happens

Left mouse shoot. Use the right mouse to reload the crossbow with a new bolt. run on the arrows on the keyboard. Try this. Maybe you really caught the bug.Hm

 

[Merseault]

Left mouse shoot. Use the right mouse to reload the crossbow with a new bolt. run on the arrows on the keyboard. Try this. Maybe you really caught the bug.Hm

yeah, nothing happens with left mouse button, idk *shrug

 

[Blinddejik]

yeah, nothing happens with left mouse button, idk *shrug

Probably a bug then, I'll figure it out. I wrote it down in my notebook.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

also a bit confused about the gallery and why/how i missed stuff there....especially the very first one already^^ not like there were many choices....but not rly important for now, enjoying the game so far anyway

Spoilers obviously, but this is my page one gallery.

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That one is tied to the Kiss or Wine choice.
I'm not sure what the bottom 2 are. Wouldn't mind a hint on them.

Anyway, I believe I made it to the end of the current version and wow, I did not expect the story to be that captivating. I can tell a lot of passion was put into it. I'm gonna post a longer review on itch, but I give a big cheer to the writing (Seriously, even through Google Translate it comes off great) and a big jeers to the combat system (Bugs might be holding it back, but I think it needs a serious rework, especially when it comes to the way the damage/HP system work.)

If I could give one piece of writing advice for the prologue, I would suggest maybe hand-holding/giving the player a reason to visit the port instead of immediately going to the herbalist, because missing the entire Captain Lexi introduction would really confuse some people, especially with what happens in Chapter 1 (I haven't tried playing it while intentionally skipping it, but I assume Lexi acts like you know each other/completed her quests, even if you haven't.)

 

[Blinddejik]

Spoilers obviously, but this is my page one gallery.

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That one is tied to the Kiss or Wine choice.
I'm not sure what the bottom 2 are. Wouldn't mind a hint on them.

Anyway, I believe I made it to the end of the current version and wow, I did not expect the story to be that captivating. I can tell a lot of passion was put into it. I'm gonna post a longer review on itch, but I give a big cheer to the writing (Seriously, even through Google Translate it comes off great) and a big jeers to the combat system (Bugs might be holding it back, but I think it needs a serious rework, especially when it comes to the way the damage/HP system work.)

If I could give one piece of writing advice for the prologue, I would suggest maybe hand-holding/giving the player a reason to visit the port instead of immediately going to the herbalist, because missing the entire Captain Lexi introduction would really confuse some people, especially with what happens in Chapter 1 (I haven't tried playing it while intentionally skipping it, but I assume Lexi acts like you know each other/completed her quests, even if you haven't.)

Wow, thanks for the detailed answer and comment. Yes, the game is still raw. I noticed it myself today in the comments, I wrote 3 pages of notes in my notebook. I will be reworking some things in the coming weeks and fixing them. As for the galleries, I will now write to the PM how to open them.
Thank you for your kind words.

 

[Merseault]

Spoilers obviously, but this is my page one gallery.

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That one is tied to the Kiss or Wine choice.
I'm not sure what the bottom 2 are. Wouldn't mind a hint on them.

Anyway, I believe I made it to the end of the current version and wow, I did not expect the story to be that captivating. I can tell a lot of passion was put into it. I'm gonna post a longer review on itch, but I give a big cheer to the writing (Seriously, even through Google Translate it comes off great) and a big jeers to the combat system (Bugs might be holding it back, but I think it needs a serious rework, especially when it comes to the way the damage/HP system work.)

If I could give one piece of writing advice for the prologue, I would suggest maybe hand-holding/giving the player a reason to visit the port instead of immediately going to the herbalist, because missing the entire Captain Lexi introduction would really confuse some people, especially with what happens in Chapter 1 (I haven't tried playing it while intentionally skipping it, but I assume Lexi acts like you know each other/completed her quests, even if you haven't.)

hm yeah....i thought already the first one would be a

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as they mentioned it in the other scene. but i tried all of the very few choices at the start and wasnt able to get that scene *shrug

number 5 are simply the

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number 4 i havent unlocked either so far, so no idea (edit: for number 4,

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[Merseault]

Spoilers obviously, but this is my page one gallery.

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That one is tied to the Kiss or Wine choice.
I'm not sure what the bottom 2 are. Wouldn't mind a hint on them.

Anyway, I believe I made it to the end of the current version and wow, I did not expect the story to be that captivating. I can tell a lot of passion was put into it. I'm gonna post a longer review on itch, but I give a big cheer to the writing (Seriously, even through Google Translate it comes off great) and a big jeers to the combat system (Bugs might be holding it back, but I think it needs a serious rework, especially when it comes to the way the damage/HP system work.)

If I could give one piece of writing advice for the prologue, I would suggest maybe hand-holding/giving the player a reason to visit the port instead of immediately going to the herbalist, because missing the entire Captain Lexi introduction would really confuse some people, especially with what happens in Chapter 1 (I haven't tried playing it while intentionally skipping it, but I assume Lexi acts like you know each other/completed her quests, even if you haven't.)

i agree completely you have to visit the port and do Lexi's quests tho to progress the story, so you cant miss it. i even did it before i went to the herbalist and continued the story and then was afraid i wouldnt be able to continue the story, but luckily i could just talk to the bald guy again in the brothel and do it once more^^ (not sure if thats rly intended tho)

 

[Blinddejik]

i agree completely you have to visit the port and do Lexi's quests tho to progress the story, so you cant miss it. i even did it before i went to the herbalist and continued the story and then was afraid i wouldnt be able to continue the story, but luckily i could just talk to the bald guy again in the brothel and do it once more^^ (not sure if thats rly intended tho)

Okay, I'll see how it can be recycled. I hope it won't take long)))

 

[Merseault]

Okay, I'll see how it can be recycled. I hope it won't take long)))

probably would be be the best, if you cant visit the port at all, before you went to the herbalist and continued the story. less confusing at least^^

 

[Blinddejik]

I'll probably make sure that the meeting with the herbalist takes place without going into town. But after the dialogue with the herbalist, he would be able to go out into the city.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

This was one of the menu things I saw pop up a lot. I suspect these perspective/tense mix ups are simply translation errors, especially the reoccurant "To say" which shows up in everything "goodbye/end conversation" option in the game.
The simple fix for this one in particular would be
"Agree"
"I'll think about it"


Should be "keeps her word", happens a few other times during her questline. I can probably write down most of them with a replay.
This was across all combat encounters with multiple people.


Should be "But if you need healing and other potions, then you know where to find me."

 

[Blinddejik]

Wow, you've done a good job. I'll change everything. Thanks!

 

[Blinddejik]

Hello everyone!



I've read all your comments on all platforms. I wrote down all the bugs or things that need to be changed in a 5-sheet notebook. Thank you so much for the warm welcome of the game. Now I will leave for 2-3 weeks to improve what you have advised me.

And then there's the bad news. My game was banned from Steam because of the alleged pedophilia in it. Although I didn't do anything like that in it. They didn't even give me the opportunity to fix something and didn't explain anything.

Tell me, did you see a hint of pedophilia in the game somewhere?

Actually, I'm a little devastated by this news, I had high hopes for Steam. I hope I will be able to realize myself on ITCH and f95zone.

It was a short post, thank you all for your attention. Have a nice day.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

Hello everyone!



I've read all your comments on all platforms. I wrote down all the bugs or things that need to be changed in a 5-sheet notebook. Thank you so much for the warm welcome of the game. Now I will leave for 2-3 weeks to improve what you have advised me.

And then there's the bad news. My game was banned from Steam because of the alleged pedophilia in it. Although I didn't do anything like that in it. They didn't even give me the opportunity to fix something and didn't explain anything.

Tell me, did you see a hint of pedophilia in the game somewhere?

Actually, I'm a little devastated by this news, I had high hopes for Steam. I hope I will be able to realize myself on ITCH and f95zone.

It was a short post, thank you all for your attention. Have a nice day.

That's very bizarre. The only 2 characters that might get mistaken for under-aged are Talia and perhaps Eliza? (I can't remember her exact name right now.)
The Talia scene with Welt might be what they took offense to, simply because of her smaller bust. I don't think any text in the game would cause this issue, though.

 

[Blinddejik]

That's very bizarre. The only 2 characters that might get mistaken for under-aged are Talia and perhaps Eliza? (I can't remember her exact name right now.)
The Talia scene with Welt might be what they took offense to, simply because of her smaller bust. I don't think any text in the game would cause this issue, though.

The problem with steam is that they don't even want to explain something. They didn't even give the exact reason, just that there is content. And where is he? In what place? They don't say anything.
Why can't steam tell the user where they can fix something? No, they just need to block the game, and that's it...

 

[fleetp]

I'm thinking the same thing as Bowlcutcultmember, that Steam banned the game due to small-breasted characters that are shorter than Welt having sex with him. The bunny girl from the brothel is one of two examples I can think of. The other is the white haired girl in the black top. I don't remember the characters' names.

 

[Bowlcutcultmember]

I don't think Lilly (the bunny prostitute) is the culprit, but Talia and the white-haired Eliza (I really should be able to remember her name since she's so important to the plot, lol) may be it. Especially the scene with the latter in the mansion , because if you squint it kinda looks like she's under-aged. I don't know much about how Steam's review policy works. I did hear stories that people got their games rejected because it was set in a highschool, but I also heard other people did the same and didn't get rejected. It sounds like such a crapshoot.

 

[Blinddejik]

If only they would give me a clue where the reason for the ban is. I could rule that out of the game. As it is, we can only guess. For some reason, I thought of the goblin girl.

 

[fleetp]

If only they would give me a clue where the reason for the ban is. I could rule that out of the game. As it is, we can only guess. For some reason, I thought of the goblin girl.

Based on what you posted, STEAM isn't going to tell you why they banned the game. If they didn't play the game, they are basing the banishment on the pictures. There's no guarantee that STEAM will lift the ban if you replace the characters that appear to be under-age. You might want to try doing so AND add a statement on the title page saying 'all characters are 21 or older'.