Ren'Py Completed Ariana's Dark Christmas 2 [Final] [Sieglinnde]

[critic specialized in NTR]

With all due respect, and trying to be a constructive critic, I see this developer making several BBC NTR games, and they're all failures, all for the same reasons. The only thing that manages to salvage it is the female protagonist's body. You should try to stop copying Shaman and follow your own rhythm, because judging by the reviews of your latest games, things aren't going well. Take a risk, pick an NTR genre to focus on. If you want a cheating and hidden NTR game, then only make games like that; if you want a cuckold game, then focus on making a cuckold game. This author has some potential but wastes all his time trying to be like Shaman Dev and ends up only making bad BBC NTR games. Try to create an exciting, mysterious story that makes the MC and the player angry at their girlfriend if the focus is cheating + hidden NTR (just a suggestion).

 

[Sieglinnde]

With all due respect, and trying to be a constructive critic, I see this developer making several BBC NTR games, and they're all failures, all for the same reasons. The only thing that manages to salvage it is the female protagonist's body. You should try to stop copying Shaman and follow your own rhythm, because judging by the reviews of your latest games, things aren't going well. Take a risk, pick an NTR genre to focus on. If you want a cheating and hidden NTR game, then only make games like that; if you want a cuckold game, then focus on making a cuckold game. This author has some potential but wastes all his time trying to be like Shaman Dev and ends up only making bad BBC NTR games. Try to create an exciting, mysterious story that makes the MC and the player angry at their girlfriend if the focus is cheating + hidden NTR (just a suggestion).

You can't say something like "just a suggestion" after saying a lot of things that aren't suggestions, just unfounded criticism... Those are not constructive criticism man. Why do you have to compare games like that? Like, comparing my games to Shadows of Desire... Each game has its charms, why do you think every game has to be the same? I aim to other kind of content and other kind of things, and so does Shaman with his game... The only thing we have in common is that we have interracial content in our game, is that enough to compare us? Of course not... If you played my games, you should know how different our content is... It seems you only guide yourself by the "reviews", and that's something really bad if you are looking to give a constructive criticism to someone

Don't take this the wrong way, I accept constructive criticism... Just not when someone is trying to hide a personal attack saying that it's only a "critic". I don't try to copy someone or nothing (heck, I even started doing games before Shaman... THAT'S how different our content is... Some like Shaman's content more, other people like my content more... And that's perfectly fine). I am happy for all the people that enjoy my games and that support me, and I do content for them... If you don't like it, don't play it man... But stop trying to tell a developer how they should do their content

 

[Vanilla099]

thx

 

[maxi456]

thx for the share

 

[EmilIrving]

This just makes me miss Let the Night Shine In all over again... Hoping that it will get remade with this style.

And yet I am glad to see both Ariana and Mallory, missed those two. So thanks, Sieglinnde.

 

[VladimirGretzky]

Let the Night Shine In was one of my favourites so its nice to see a continuation of it, even a small one. looking forward to the next game.

 

[Nanhai]

Yeah it's true, I know people would prefer content from my main games over a special like this, which is why I didn't delay any content from my main games in order to release this special...

On December 22nd, I released the last update for my game "My Girlfriend Wants a Threesome!!", the final... And I was supposed to rest from all the work that went into it during those remaining days before January, but instead, I immediately started working on this Christmas special because I felt that the people who support me deserved it. I released it on January 8th, and immediately afterward, I started working on my first build of my next game, "Shadows of Trust" which will be released this month, in January
I'm explaining it this way to make it clear that I didn't prioritize a special (which I know many people aren't interested in) over a main game (which I know most of the people are interested in), but rather, after finishing everything and having some free time, I took on the task of making the special. I think this way I'm able to please everyone and, of course, give the people that support me some good content because I love them very much

It's all good. Rather you do what you want some of the time so you don't get burnt out. It could give off some good ideas along the way for the main game too. Thanks for your work!

 

[aly9765k]

great

 

[Cormocosco]

good game

 

[Daniele69]

This is the Italian translation of:
Ren'Py Completed Ariana's Dark Christmas 2 [Final] [Sieglinnde]

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This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan"
extract the .rar file and move "game" to the game where the .exe file resides overwrite if required.

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[grossegon]

thx

 

[VladimirGretzky]

Hey Seiglinnde, I just wanted to ask something, it says in this game that Jenny is the daughter of Arianna and the MC from let the night shine in, but… is she really his kid? Or is there another little secret Arianna was keeping?