VN Ren'Py Ariana’s Perverted Diary [v0.7.2] [Girls on Top]

[AlexFenec]

This is a great start!

I love that the story skips the discovery of the spellbook, I like that it is a mystery for the player to piece together while the characters can still use its powers without having to justify them as much.

The models are hot and there are plenty of sex scenes too. I'm not a huge fan of F/F and I wish the main character was futa, but I enjoyed the scenes nonetheless, I'm sure your audience will be pleased.

 

[Girls on Top Games]

I wish the main character was futa

 

[AlexFenec]

Nice!

What I mean is I wish the majority of the content was futa, but I feel like it will take a few update before Adriana gets a cock:

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In short, I wish Adriana was already futa and didn't need to deal with it being a change. That's not the case and it is fine.

Don't let me change you. Write the story you enjoy writing at the pace you want and your audience will find you.

 

[Dragon59]

I have a question.
Futa or trans? There's a big difference, you know.

 

[Girls on Top Games]

I have a question.
Futa or trans? There's a big difference, you know.

futa

 

[Dragon59]

futa

Thanks. I was curious since I had no inkling that there were fantasy elements. All good in my mind now.

 

[sunqian3000]

Good Start

 

[Laughingfox]

Loving it. Out of curiousity, will the MC be able to give others the futa treatment at some point? Free use is every so much fun when the player is on both sides of the fence, and it'd be ever so much fun to see the wrong words "backfire" with somebody as sexually charged as her sister, for example. Not saying she needs to be the submissive, but it'd be keen to see her on the recieving end now and then.

About my only nitpick is how the story often says the player has been going at it for hours with several climaxes, but doesn't really seem to be the part. It's a bit more... aloof. One would figure she'd (the MC) be a gasping, panting, over sensitive wreck from all the action - and her sister much the same. The sheets would definately need to get changed out from a marathon session.

But to be fair, I'm an avid fan of giving as good as you got, haha.

 

[Girls on Top Games]

Loving it. Out of curiousity, will the MC be able to give others the futa treatment at some point?

Undecided, and that alone probably means that if it is added it will be optional and not a major focus.

 

[Laughingfox]

Righto. I'm sure it'll be a glorious romp all the same. Lovely art and writing, by the by.

 

[truaheday]

Undecided, and that alone probably means that if it is added it will be optional and not a major focus.

is it possible to choose futa and normal?

 

[weenog]

I like the art style and love a good "Bible Black" archetype story, but I think starting the story at the point it starts at in v0.2 is a misstep that will leave your audience confused. I understand the desire to put a sexy scene early, and it is important to grab your audience's attention with a good hook, but without any preceding scenes with Ariana and MJ we have no frame of reference to their relationship and consequently no great gauge of the power of the spell cast on MJ. Early character building scenes are essential to the telling of a good story. I'm not saying that you need to write those scenes first, but I do hope that they are there in the final version. Keep up the good work. I think this game could become something really special.

 

[xXxNeospiritxXx]

another game that starts great but goes into the futa direction, at least good to know now before getting surprised

 

[jamiehmcw91]

when is the shemale character get it on with his sister and mum

 

[LightmanP]

steam does not allow incest and I'm not a big fan of altering the game so that it can be compliant.

Steam has no issues with incest, mostly underage and copyright.

 

[Girls on Top Games]

Steam has no issues with incest, mostly underage and copyright.

Are we sure? Because every adult game I am looking at on steam has stepmothers and landladies.

 

[LightmanP]

Are we sure?

Yes

 

[bacienvu88]

Are we sure? Because every adult game I am looking at on steam has stepmothers and landladies.

Exhibit A: Sisterly Lust. There are LIs referred to as sisters within the game who have sex with MC and each other and their mother.
And Perveteer's other game, Tales from the unending void also has sibling sex (and aunt and cousin). But I don't own that game on steam so I don't know if those relationships has been changed there.

 

[Kai956]

Finally a promising Lesbian game again. I love it. The story, the characters, the sex with her sister. I hope that the future futa content is something more avoidable and won't take over the rest of the game when it comes.

 

[Griev]

That's a fucking family, i love them. But with this kind of fast burning story, it will not last very long, we have almost done everything with the sister, we still need to find a dog tho! Then there is the same with the mom.
Later if the game start to add more and more girls it will become lame an annoying but for the moment those two sisters are pure fire, they drive me crazy !!

Don't forget the MC's best friend and her sister! They both need to be Umm.. introduced properly.