If you lose the fishing challenge, your wife makes the decision to give the chief a tit job. It's extremely rushed. You can't just jump straight into NTR sex like that.
MC needs to be able to make more decisions along with Claire and you can't just jump straight into hardcore sex, there needs to be a proper buildup before any climax.
Adelaide Inn was very well done in regards to slow builds up before the climax.
Instead of her rushing to give a tit job, she should instead agree to wear tribal clothing or something similar.
I think it was because he treated every update like a chapter, and the first release was just about who the couple were, their dynamic, the world and why they were doing what they were doing.
It was such a well done game, and the build up was the best. My favorite scene is how Mira, behind her husbands back has sex with the merchant, you wake up and catch her, it obviously excites the husband (You) because you want the cheating to happen, but it betrays the dynamic of the game, by not having you ask Mira to do it. And even after she does,you can tell she still loves you but did it out of exciment. it lets you know she enjoys this, but is still loyal to the player.
I honestly do not know what happened with the writing. It seems everything came downhill after Camp with mom, but still in that game, the setting is sort of realistic?