Harem tag? Is it even possible to "get them all"? Like, when there was a choice to help these two, I immediately said, -"Go fuck yourself. I'm not your wingman and my MC definitely is not fucking sharing! Get lost."
And echoing others, I'm really not that oprimistic about this one, chief. Looks like it's going to be hell for developer and players alike. I've checked every path (except for the wingman path, no thanks. fuck that shit), even though story looks pretty good/okay/okayish, but there are already some problems.
First thing is amount of paths and "forks" in the sory. If you choose to run away and don't get "Brave" perk, you'll miss out on the handjob scene. Prompt for picking a choice procks only then, otherwise you won't even know about it. She just leaves. Tho, scenes after this are wastly different, and personally, "Cold-headed/hearted" path is better. (tho, it won't work in reality in the way it was shown. At. Fucking. All. But I've turned off my brain and reined in my suspension of disbelief, when the sun exploded) Later you can get "Brave" perk through other choice in this path too. But that's problem in itself for me too, now I want to hoard them. My choice is now depends on it, now I want to get all interesting to me perks and I don't really care, if I have to do something I otherwise wouldn't done for them. This all f sucks, I hate it. It's so f annoying and frustrating. Ughh.
That's just single case, but if we remeber about every other choice, path and possible future ones... I already used up more than 3 sheets of saves and I've tried using them really sparingly. It's going to be such clusterfuck of saves at some point...
Second thing is bugs and how many of them there are going to be possibly in the future, for example this one: "Even if I killed the soldier, later Alicia says it was Luna." I got it too on my first/"true" playthrough. Thanks to this my primary/main experience and impression of this game are already smeared. "It's fine! It's no big deal!" But if it's such a small deal, why is it there? It's just beginning, we're just starting and there's not that much to proofread, but can you imagine how big this can become at the later stages of development. And if we try to dig deeper in it, developer couldn't comprehend or think that someone can get or be "Compassionate" and "Brave" simultaneously (or that these traits described in the game itself or by their description are mutually exclusive), that is letting already dead man suffer more is being ""compassionate"". But I hope, it's just oversight.
"Chill man, everything is under control" Yeaaaah, sure man...
I really like your game. It isn't stellar or anything that new and characters are trait/cliche deep, but it's good, it's good. And that is already way more than majority of the games on this site can offer. And it'll be a real shame if it gets "Abandoned" tag down the road. For whatever possible reason. For now, I'll keep my review to myself, for now, as there not many people and my review is definitely going to lower overall score. As I really don't want to ruin what you have here and I hope you'll complete this game and achieve what you had in mind, when you envisioned it in its full glory.
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