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VN Ren'Py Ashley Grevstone [v0.01 Beta] [DenZRG]

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Overview:
The story is about a girl kidnapped in a dark alley and it's up to you what happens to her.
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Thread Updated: 2024-05-24
Release Date: 2024-05-24
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Version: 0.01 Beta
OS: Windows, Linux
Language: English, Russian
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This is embarrassing. This guy makes all of us (devs) look bad... Badly made, messy menus because he didn't know what to do. To top it off, the colors he chose are confused with the background image. The guy doesn't speak English and it's noticeable from the beginning where he confuses "she" with "he"... The game lasts a minute, don't even bother downloading it. It's the worst thing I've seen in a long time. This guy doesn't deserve to be called a "developer".
 
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I did not think it was possible, but this might actually be the worst game on this site. Not even 5 seconds of content. Took me longer to write this.
 
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Well i haven't played this shit but i'm pretty sure it's missing a rape tag lol
 
Mercedes

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Great release for version 0.001.
Far too little for version 0.01.

Writing the game experience will take much longer than it takes to play this test.

Lighting.
Yes, as a player you want something to look at, so good lighting is important. But why talk about a dark alley when the place where the robbery takes place is fully lit? The robbery should take place 10m later, when the victim and MC are back in the shadows.

Walking animation:
This is very stuttering and the feet slide backwards on the floor. This would need to be revised.

Decisions.
Always a good choice, but avoid making an unfinished path a game over for a later version of the game. Implement a back button so that the player can save their progress if necessary.

Logic gap
Why isn't the girl tied up and gagged. The protagonist is hardly rich enough to have a car to drive the girl to a completely remote place in an hour, nor does this room seem to be completely soundproof.
Maybe she can do karate.
Since the bed looks like it is in use, the nightstand is unlikely to be empty and may even contain something to defend against.
 
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