This was actually really good. It all comes together solidly, the combat works and is well suited for a renpy game, the world, monsters and whatnot are interesting, I like the girls and some of the lewd stuff you could have going on (like raping the woman in the warehouse).
It's probably pretty grindy. I used the cheat mod and if I found a way of naturally obtaining a resource or raising a stat then would get a bunch using that, as I got all the resources for the gym naturally and it took a kinda boring about of just farming stuff, and it only goes up from there. It's still a bit of a grind after that, trying to get cards you're into and whatnot, so cutting out the resources problem made things more reasonable.
I wasn't able to make everything, never found a werewolf for some of those card bits, no idea how you'd be supposed to kill that dragon either, so went without those. I also thought it was kinda weird you could get cards from that trader weird dude with a cost to use of 6, given I never got my pool over 4, so I might have missed something there.
The succubae were probably the most interesting bit and I really hope that's expanded on. I don't think their lust should be able to go into the negatives (I was grinding up corruption a bit and ended up with one of them down at -170 or something so then had to spend ages with her on the horse to build it back up). Also given they can move around freely I think it'd be cool if you could put them to work raising the girls' lust as they sleep, Alice you can get a ton of free lust with by having her wake you up each morning, would be nice to use the succubae to do the same to the others. Also I'd kinda like ways to choose one to sleep with, and customise them a bit and whatnot
The chest event seems to spawn pretty infrequently, I spent a long time quick loading to get it to happen for the remaining times that didn't occur naturally. Also I'm way past day 100 and never found that girl's bike, I dunno if it was supposed to be found just when exploring but I presume it should have been an option to pop up as the hint said it'd take a month... the hints in general were sometimes not very helpful.
I hope I didn't lose out on anything by not taking that devil's deal... I kinda wanted to but rebuilding my deck would have been a massive pain. I hope someone does an advanced cheat mod where you'll be able to pick cards and add them to your inventory as farming monsters seems kinda hit or miss.
Oh and I very much appreciated being able to pet the dog.