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MisterNephilim

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but this incomplete reunion like this will certainly make many players hate her
It's not that I hate her, it's just that she's... boring? I don't know how to explain it, Olivia is a better ride or die, Miriel is more loveable and Kalestra is a badass. Meanwhile the only thing that Lora has as a positive (if you can call it that) is that she has history with MC, but it seems that that isn't even true.
 
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Posseman

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So what confuses me about this game is, normally when you are given an option to have sex or some intimate experience with a character, even if you reject them, the game assumes you said yes and all the dialogue after that point acts like you went ahead and did something, even if you don't. Usually the choice comes up and if you choose to bang then you see the scene, if you decline time kind of jumps forward but in the background you still banged. But in this game, if you say no, or turn the girl down, they react to it, like they get hurt or flip you off, or even comment on it, but for some reason later in the game they still talked like you said yes. So why code in the scenes where you acknowledge turning the girl down, but still leave in the code as if you said yes?

Plus you establish the MC is married, and that he loves his wife unconditionally, and when she disappears or is presumed dead, you still have the MC believing he'll still see her some day, whether it's delusion or not, you present him as a loving, faithful husband, so how would it make narrative sense to have him banging chicks that aren't his wife? Especially after he is reunited with her, I just don't see a way, realistically that this makes any sense. It WOULD make sense if the MC was a cheater and the wife knew and didn't care, OR, they had an open relationship, OR, the wife was a Cuckquean, but none of that was established, so if the MC has sex, he's an asshole. And before anyone says, "Come on it's just a porn game." I beg to differ, one that shouldn't trump good storytelling and two, this is hardly a porn game as there are only 6 lewd scenes over about 6 hours of gameplay, that is hardly porn statistics.
 

JJJ84

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Welp, looks like I'm gonna be putting my game progress on hold at this point until the hotfix comes. :HideThePain:
Miriel is my favorite out of all LIs, and I have no intention of picking the Lora & Olivia option just for the progress.
 

CeTanu_AUT

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Is it just me or is the timeline all a bit wonky and the age gap between Olivia and Anya doesn't really make sense?

In one of the the Flashbacks (the one in the car) it states that it happened 14 years ago which would put Olivia at age 18 and Anya at age 5 when you go off the ages present in the Character Profiles.

In another Flashback where Olivia talks to Miriel she starts the story/flashback with "It's not a simple story. It started long before we ever met". In the flashback we then see a Olivia that seems to be the same age or slightly younger as in the first Flashback (18) but a Anya that sure as hell is not 5 years old.

So either you have to make Anya a lot older in your Character Profiles or Olivia younger and change the thing with "14 years ago".
So, after playing the newest version from the beginning again, this still seems to be a problem.

There is an age gap of 13 years between Olivia and Anya.

In the first Flashback of Olivia where she tells Norman how she and MC met while driving to the forest it says "14 Years Ago", so that puts Olivia at age 18 and Anya at age 5.

In the second Flashback of Olivia where she tells Miriel why she is so loyal to MC it begins before she even met the MC and we see that Anya is treating wounds on Olivias hands after a fight. Olivia could be 18 at best and Anya should be 5 at the highest but Anya is for sure not 5 years old in that flashback.

The age gap between those 2 makes no sense at all, if Olivia is 32, Anya should be 27-28, but i would probably make Olivia a few years younger and Anya a few older so you got a 4-5 year age gap which seems more reasonable instead of the 13 year gap we have now. So something like Olivia 28, Anya 23.

Doesn't really matter what's the ideal solution but something has to change as it doesn't make any sense now.

Apart from that and some grammar and article problems (he, she) the game is really good so far. Still a bit of a shame that the early Anya scene is gone but i can live with that.

But it looks like there are still some leftovers before the reworks, like there are checks if i got enough Olivia Points and even alternative scenes/text when you don't have enough but i don't think there are any possibilities to lose points before those checks. Or the first conversation between MC und Yong where MC says "It's just... people think you're dead. Even I started doubting any of this was real." But in the rework the MC never talks with anyone about that he saw Miriel with someone else on Earth before going through the portal.

One thing that i found curious is that it looks like pretty much a forced harem?
Even when you reject every single girl Lora and Olivia both mention that you are screwing around and have other girls.
Is it planned in the future to set variables for the different relationships and to "opt out" of routes?
Or Flora for example mentions that she would like to continue where you left off even if you rejected her in the bath.
So looks like Scenes are skippable but not avoidable (so they still happen but you just don't see them).

Also found another problem when you choose for the first time if you wanna be on the Miriel Path or not, if you choose not to be on her path you run into an error after the barkeeper or whatever disappears.

Code:
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
  File "game/Story02.rpy", line 4131, in script
    jump akt2chapter8_ch
ScriptError: could not find label 'akt2chapter8_ch'.

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "game/Story02.rpy", line 4131, in script
    jump akt2chapter8_ch
  File "F:\Temp\AAAA Current\_Now Playing_\Astreon 0.3-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1705, in execute
    rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
  File "F:\Temp\AAAA Current\_Now Playing_\Astreon 0.3-pc\renpy\script.py", line 1103, in lookup
    raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'akt2chapter8_ch'.

Windows-10-10.0.26100 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.3.4.24120703
Astreon 
Thu Aug 21 12:21:09 2025
 
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Porthas

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NoGloryx

I really like the look of the UI, could you please change the ESC button to a BACK button for returning to the game? "Escape" has the general connotation of turning off something. Thanks for your consideration, have a nice day.

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Porthas

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The game was okay from the beginning, but now, after all the changes, it's unfortunately boring. From conversations that have nothing to do with it to mind reading that gets on your nerves. MC has earned everyone's respect from day one, but he still has no voice. Everyone lies to him, especially his wife.. the first character I would have nothing more to do with.My opinion..if anyone like it so be it..
Well, thanks for your permission. :LOL:
 

csum

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Does anyone know how to unlock the last 2 sex scenes found via from the gallery?
 

thiave

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Dose anyone else have an issue whit how the dialogue flows?
The writing gives me strong AI vibes and it's bugging me to the point that I skipped a lot of it, and don't get me wrong, I like the animations and the renders but the dialogue feels so unnatural and..idk? out of place?
 

Meiri

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The writing gives me strong AI vibes and it's bugging me to the point that I skipped a lot of it, and don't get me wrong, I like the animations and the renders but the dialogue feels so unnatural and..idk? out of place?
I don't get an AI vibe from it, but it's obvious the author isn't a native speaker, and the proofreaders aren't helping in that regard. Grammatically, it may be correct, but the sentences aren't natural. It has improved over previous versions; however, the core issue remains: the conversations often jump nonsensically from topic to topic, and the dialogue doesn't sound like natural English.

I am still replaying version 0.3, which I believe rewrote some early dialogues. In previous versions, the issue was most noticeable when moving to the other planet, meeting all the new characters, and getting a massive story dump. Hopefully, this new version will fix that, but I have my doubts.
 

KyuubiGoku

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What was that background song playing when the MC was giving the BEST DAMN armyspeech of his life with Flora? I need that song on repeat!
 
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