Ren'Py Ataegina Remaster [Prologue Act I] [Kthulian]
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I tried this a week or so ago. I want to give some thoughts. Props for including worldbuilding, and a combat system that works for a Visual Novel. The first person spell effects are fun, and I like how you can mix and match playstyles. The attention to character interactions between the MC and the people around him is good and I like how powerful Lust is.
The worldbuilding on the source of magic is interesting, and it has a good mix of porn and plot. Now for the critique. While each character is identifiable, the art style is generic and the sex scenes are stiff. The accompanying novel text is limp. There is no vivid description, no erotic emotion or depthful writing on the physical and mental feelings of the characters. It is "They fucked. They sucked. They" lots of tell and no show creating flat uninspired smut. A lot of effort has been put into this project. I appreciate that. The deeper lore behind the gods, the political place of mages in the world, the deeper personality of the evil redhead mage lady I can't remember the name of. That was a unexpected bit of nuance in her character as the former friend of the archmage I didn't think would happen.
But for all of this, I rest my case on what holds this back. Weak art style, weak barely there descriptive language, and generic dialogue. I will say a lot of characters I can pick out between them who they are, but the dialogue is not exciting. If there are questions on why, feel free to ask and I will try to explain.
Overall, I would like to see more development from this creator to greater heights.
The worldbuilding on the source of magic is interesting, and it has a good mix of porn and plot. Now for the critique. While each character is identifiable, the art style is generic and the sex scenes are stiff. The accompanying novel text is limp. There is no vivid description, no erotic emotion or depthful writing on the physical and mental feelings of the characters. It is "They fucked. They sucked. They" lots of tell and no show creating flat uninspired smut. A lot of effort has been put into this project. I appreciate that. The deeper lore behind the gods, the political place of mages in the world, the deeper personality of the evil redhead mage lady I can't remember the name of. That was a unexpected bit of nuance in her character as the former friend of the archmage I didn't think would happen.
But for all of this, I rest my case on what holds this back. Weak art style, weak barely there descriptive language, and generic dialogue. I will say a lot of characters I can pick out between them who they are, but the dialogue is not exciting. If there are questions on why, feel free to ask and I will try to explain.
Overall, I would like to see more development from this creator to greater heights.
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Hi, apparently in the latest update (v0.9.6) there was a bugfix after years applied to Act I. Does the compressed game need an update too?
This is the post I'm talking about, read the final part
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Thank you for your great work. However, is there any chance that you can make it so that pressing "R" again hides the icon for the mod? I find it pretty distracting for that icon to constantly be on screen. Thanks (Just started the game, looks pretty interesting
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besides no need to cheat, hjard doesn't use gold on anything, increasing stats is pointless since battles can be skipped.
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It would be the "r" key for both Act 1 and Act 2, but like someone previously stated cheating is liable to break your game if you're not careful. Use at your discretion.
