Unity Abandoned Atlantia [v0.09] [CoffeeGirl Works]

[crash.7ds]

Was kind of hoping this would be closer a kin to Teraurge rather than TiTS. Still, does what it says on the label and looks pretty good all things considered. Not a bad start at all. I tip my hat to the dev and wish him or her all the best luck.

One thing to note is that breasts, and subsequently nipples, don't seem to be mentioned at all in the character description.

 

[Jove76]

Thanks for the interesting insights from several people. Some of that made a lot of sense. I will delete that question now though, as I do not wish to derail the game thread, but I appreciate those that took the time to answer.

Good luck with your game, CoffeeGirl.

 

[CoffeeGirl Works]

I'm not a fan of the story premises.
but i appreciate anything that tries to compete with TiTs.

I think the premises would be more unique if they make it in the modern world we live in today.

I hate utopias ....they are nothing but a ideological circle jerk, thats doomed to fail, the second someone stops jerking off.

I was debating on whether or not to mention, but I think it's fair to. Slight future spoilers here, but something I have planned:

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Was kind of hoping this would be closer a kin to Teraurge rather than TiTS. Still, does what it says on the label and looks pretty good all things considered. Not a bad start at all. I tip my hat to the dev and wish him or her all the best luck.

One thing to note is that breasts, and subsequently nipples, don't seem to be mentioned at all in the character description.

Ah right you are! Looks like a small typo in the check for them, thanks for the catch, will fix for the next build.

Thanks for the interesting insights from several people. Some of that made a lot of sense. I will delete that question now though, as I do not wish to derail the game thread, but I appreciate those that took the time to answer.

Good luck with your game, CoffeeGirl.

Thanks!

 

[tipoima]

Gonna be interesting to take a look in 12-18 months, probably.

 

[IvoryOwl]

Back on topic: So a TiTs clone per se? I'm curious to see where this is heading and how expansive it will become. I like that you can input certain things yourself, like your race, instead of waiting for the developer to add said morph. I do wish there was an option to use the metric system though...

 

[CoffeeGirl Works]

New Version Up, enjoy!
Took in some design and usability feedback, as well as added some scene content.

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[KMJ96815]

Good luck with the game, I'm not really into furry anything, but love this style of text game so keeping an eye on it

 

[V01]

I really enjoy text-based games with transformations like this one has, but this game doesn't currently stand out in any way. Maybe it's just too early in development, but it looks and plays too much like TiTS, and also looks like it will have the same issues.

The sex text is OK right now, but rather than having sex be 10 paragraphs, break it up and let the player have some choice. Also, I despise futa, and have no interest in gay sex, but there's only one M/F scene I could find.

 

[DasKapitan]

I love these kinds of games. I moved my patron money from Fenoxo to Innoxia ages ago but now it's looking like I'll need to dig a little deeper because this niche needs more games.

The writing is really good. I just hope that the sex scenes will grow into something less linear over time, because right now they're just click-through literotica... For example, I get that Kat is open about being a free-use slut, but I feel like the 'submission' scene should be something you progress toward through another scene (like maybe spanking her or something). That's actually one of the few things I think TiTS does better than Lilith's Throne; it gives you paths to develop kinks rather than just express them.

The map exploration has the same kinda problem right now, in that it just exposits everything up front. I think the only gating at the moment is the day/night cycle, right?... For an early proof-of-concept demo this is fine, but I'm really looking forward to some more exploration and branching paths... E.g. we find a keycard on the ground, do we keep it and try to find the owner or turn it in? If we find the owner do we give it back to them, or use it to sneak into their apartment late at night? Etc.

Other randoms notes:

• You're missing Brown as a eye color. That's something like 3/4 of the entire human population.
• Scrolling is awkward on a laptop. PgUp/PgDn don't work and I don't have a scroll wheel like on my desktop; and I think I'd actually prefer an option for Next/Previous page leafing over scrolling on a game like this.
• If status effects like 'Cumdrunk' result in temporary stat changes or unique interactions, could you display those in the mouseover? I get that sometimes you'll want to be a little coy about specific effects, but in general knowing that stuff can really trigger ideas for where to go or who to talk to (i.e. while your face is plastered with cum).

[Edit]
It also just occurred to me that Fenoxo and Innoxia don't write all of their own scene content. Those projects are too big for just one person, and eventually yours will be too... So regardless of whether you make it publicly moddable or just build an internal team of writers, I really hope you're planning ahead and creating some kind of modularity for this project, rather than embedding the narratives and locations within the code.

 

[DasKapitan]

there's only one M/F scene I could find.

There's a M/F/F scene with two deer morphs at the party at 3rd St. North... You need to be there after 10pm (I think).

 

[LixianPrime]

One of the many things on the list of "Why is this made with Unity and not just Flash?"

Maybe because Flash is dead at the end of the year and if this game last longer than that it still can be worked on and played

 

[gillriss]

Thanks for all the feedback folks, it's great to see this much activity in the first day!


Thanks, I certainly plan to!


Thanks - and done! TFGames listing was glitched for a few hours and wouldn't permit adding the download links, but fixed now.


Well, question is definitely off topic heh, as this is a sandbox game that's only gay if you want it to be, so don't want to linger on it here. But, for my money if you're already questioning one aspect of yourself and your sexuality you're more likely to question another. Ergo, many furries find they're OK With Gay and many queer folk realize that furry stuff can be fun too.


Thanks! I'll definitely check it out - while I'm still in the bounds of acceptability of Patreon, and plan on staying there, in the event they change their rules further a backup is good to have.


Yep, if it starts getting some solid income I'll consider commissioning artwork in the future to put donations back into the work, but for now it'll be text-only content.

Saying Social-Justice-Warriors unironically in this year 2019? Yikes! Well bye, since you don't want to associate with me, have a good life stranger!


I prefer working in Unity to working in Flash honestly. I just find it easier and more familiar.


Thanks! This is a common comment yep, next version later this week will have option to select font as well as font size.


There will be a healthy amount for sure!


Thanks!


Hope you enjoy!


Thanks, glad you like it! I'm hoping to keep player options as the primary motivation. Next build should be out later this week!


Thanks again for the responses folk! ( Though I'll ask the random debate on LGBT issues be taken elsewhere please, keep discussion to the game and feedback on it if possible. ) Should have some further content out this week taking the feedback into account, so keep your eyes open for that! Hope you all enjoy the porn!~

-CoffeeGirl

Are there any plans to make this playable on x82(32-bit) systems? A lot of games still cover old formats and many folks in your audience could be running hand-me-down computers.

 

[HikariNova]

the nopy download version is 0.02 so please update that link but the GDrive link is up to date with the 0.03 download link

 

[IvoryOwl]

[snip]

Looking at this game's version number I guess it's still quite early in development, maybe even straight out of the box, so to speak. Although TiTs has it's quirks I don't think it's a good idea to copy everything Fen does either. I enjoyed it quite a lot when I found it but over the years the excessive amount of female-futas (a number that only kept growing) and the fact that progress had trickled down to a tiny amount per update made me quit the game.

As much as I like the idea, I think true sandboxes are hard to pull off. The sheer amount of content and text required would rival even the heftiest of books and it is hard to find writers willing or capable of making such long-term commitments and taking it to the end. What usually ends up happening is the main developer going through a list of authors through the years, which result in the game having different styles at different points. It can be jarring.

The same thing can be said about games with multiple choices. I'm a big fan of CYOAs but I have found over the years that when they advertise a game as "your choices have consequences" what they usually mean is that it changes a few things here and there but nothing major. It's merely for flavour, the main plot is still the same no matter whether you take path A or B. It's really hard as a story-teller to achieve the amount of replayability and differentiation most people expect.

I'm not going to hold this game to such high bars though... better that way too.

 

[masarutoshu]

so is there spicy pictures?

 

[crash.7ds]

so is there spicy pictures?

It's a text game, silly.

 

[Kink Miser]

This looks good so far, hope this is kept up with.

 

[DasKapitan]

It's a text game, silly.

Both TiTS and Lilith's Throne have character galleries; not exactly 'spicy' but these games can at least have a bit of a visual content to them.

And creating an ingame mechanism for art could be a good way to encourage a fan-art community, even if the dev isn't an artist themselves... Imagine if you could queue your own art into the game with just an XML file to register scene triggers?

 

[RNDM]

Seriously scratching my head @ just what

a bright and vibrant solar/cyberpunk world

is supposed to be though, all the more so as even in its modern reformed iteration cyberpunk as a genre and setting tends to be regarded as about the polar opposite of those adjectives...

 

[DasKapitan]

Seriously scratching my head @ just what "a bright and vibrant solar/cyberpunk world" is supposed to be though, all the more so as even in its modern reformed iteration cyberpunk as a genre and setting tends to be regarded as about the polar opposite of those adjectives...

I was curious about that too, but then I could imagine at least two scenarios which would make it a meaningful definition:

1. Solarpunk is really just a veneer for the social elites of Atlantia to convince themselves that they 'fixed the world' (making the game description an example of their propaganda), while elsewhere the majority of the society is really still driven by Cyberpunk rules.
2. The description is actually talking about a Solarpunk/Post-cyberpunk setting where radical pessimism finally gave way to a similarly radical optimism and, lead by Atlantia, the global society lifted itself out of the doldrums.

And I'm sure there are other ways to make that all work... I think the first option would be my preference if CoffeeGirl is planning to introduce the kinds of corruption and sexual slavery elements that CoC, TiTS and Lilith's Throne have, but the second option would be my pick for a sincere new-utopian approach to furry transformation and consenting kinksploration.