Whenever I feel like I'm not getting enough hate in life, I just come to my F95 thread. Really keeps me zen.
Don't mean to add to your woes, but I saw the complaints from earlier in the thread about the writing quality & saw they'd mostly been resolved, but you missed the following one.
MC has just gone to breakfast on the 1st morning.
Enshrined means you place something precious in a safe place, or to protect it. You enclose it, as if it were in a shrine.
I presume that you meant "ensured", not "enshrined".
Also, when Wei turns up with Yushi, he hasn't been introduced to Aurora & wonders if they have met before. The only thing he's been told is that she's MC's cousin & Blake helped her get where she is, as part of the remote mentor program.
Next sentence he miraculously knows her name.
Obviously I'm not sure if he does know her from Artimus Corp, but if he does he's not putting up a very plausible performance by calling her by her name, when no-one in the conversation has told him it.
As far as the plot is concerned, he does not know her name. Yet, somehow, he does.
Neither Mia or Luna even remark on the fact that she's there, either. Neither of them ask who she is, or anything else. Mia just goes to her room with Yushu & Luna takes MC to play games, completely disregarding the fact that there's a new girl in their home.
Straight after, in the scene where MC & Luna are playing a game, you get the choice to tell her how you won, but MC doesn't mention it.
After the scene with the android, when MC wakes up after Aurora gave him the blood:
"A voice" & "it's" are singular. "Some right next to your ear & others far away" is referring to plural.
This should read "You hear voice
s all around you", "You can't quite understand what
they are saying"