VN Ren'Py Aurora Protocol [v0.3] [Astghik]

[astghik]

Whenever I feel like I'm not getting enough hate in life, I just come to my F95 thread. Really keeps me zen.

 

[salkrim]

You're welcome

 

[lordvipi]

 

[Harvester of Doom]

awesome game

 

[jackeasy]

More likely, they don't want to extend the tag list to keep it short and memorable. That offer was simply rejected.
Of course, it is easy divide each tag to few to cover all kinks - and get tag list of 500 or so.

https://f95zone.to/sam/planned_tags-v2.html

The updated tag list (pending site updates that a single person is trying to do outside of their job) does include separate tags for impregnation. You're welcome to paint whatever picture of the site devs you'd like, but I'd encourage you to try and be less pessimistic.

 

[chiefkilic]

The game is currently unplayable. Thanks to 4K, the game crashes during the first sex scene. I deleted it afterward. The intro is complete bullshit. Who lets a complete stranger into their house? The person claims to have been sent by someone to protect them and only them. On top of that, the main character immediately lies to his (not) mother, saying the complete stranger is his cousin. That makes absolutely no sense. No one with even a shred of common sense would do that. Furthermore, the main character is a complete idiot. The things he does make no sense at all. I have no idea how old the developer is, but I think he's 14 or so because an adult wouldn't write such a nonsensical story where nothing makes sense. I forgot to mention that the complete stranger doesn't even provide proof that they are who they claim to be, and the MC doesn't even ask for proof; they don't even call their uncle to confirm whether the stranger is telling the truth. (Translated with Google)

 

[astghik]

The game is currently unplayable. Thanks to 4K, the game crashes during the first sex scene. I deleted it afterward. The intro is complete bullshit. Who lets a complete stranger into their house? The person claims to have been sent by someone to protect them and only them. On top of that, the main character immediately lies to his (not) mother, saying the complete stranger is his cousin. That makes absolutely no sense. No one with even a shred of common sense would do that. Furthermore, the main character is a complete idiot. The things he does make no sense at all. I have no idea how old the developer is, but I think he's 14 or so because an adult wouldn't write such a nonsensical story where nothing makes sense. I forgot to mention that the complete stranger doesn't even provide proof that they are who they claim to be, and the MC doesn't even ask for proof; they don't even call their uncle to confirm whether the stranger is telling the truth. (Translated with Google)

Thanks for the 1 star review! Also, you can download compressed versions of the game on here, or on my itch.io page.

 

[only MILF]

Screenwriter, what are you smoking or sniffing?I think the script was written by an alien.I only play for the beautiful characters.

 

[SafeForSure]

Thanks for the 1 star review! Also, you can download compressed versions of the game on here, or on my itch.io page.

It's idiotic to give a 1 star. Yeah mc is a complete moron but I played the game on laptop and tablet without issues also the story is funny and the women look absolutely gorgeous and are also likeable. Serious don't let this put down your mood it's a really lovely game.

 

[chiefkilic]

It's idiotic to give a 1 star. Yeah mc is a complete moron but I played the game on laptop and tablet without issues also the story is funny and the women look absolutely gorgeous and are also likeable. Serious don't let this put down your mood it's a really lovely game.

I already wrote what bothers me: the intro makes absolutely no sense. Who in their right mind lets a complete stranger into their house just because the stranger says, "I was sent by your uncle and am only supposed to protect you, not the rest of the family," without the stranger being able to provide any proof that what they're saying is true? On top of that, that guy is incredibly stupid. He just lets the stranger in without even calling his uncle to check if it's true. No, instead, he lets the stranger into his house and even lies to his (non-)mother, saying the stranger is his cousin. That makes no sense at all. No one in the world would behave like that.Can someone seriously tell me if any of you who are adults would behave like that and let a stranger into your house in the described situation?If Dev were to rewrite the intro in a more realistic scenario, it would be quite easy; it wouldn't even require much work. You'd just have to get the MC to question it and then call his uncle beforehand, or the stranger could give the MC a letter with the uncle's handwriting, and presto, the intro wouldn't be so ridiculous anymore. (Translated with Google)

 

[astghik]

He just lets the stranger in without even calling his uncle to check if it's true. (Translated with Google)

I might need to remove support for languages other then english because I'm getting a lot of negative reviews from non-english speakers. The "uncle" (i'm assuming you mean Blake?) is unreachable in the game, maybe DeepL didn't translate that correctly, I'm not sure.

 

[whatone]

You'd just have to get the MC to question it and then call his uncle beforehand

Blake had been missing for 48hrs at that point. This had been stated numerous times. I'm not sure if calling him would achieve anything.

Also, you ask if any adult would do this. Some would, yes. Not everyone is as distrusting of others.
Some would absolutely welcome someone claiming to be sent to protect them. Especially if they were scared.
I wouldn't & it doesn't seem that you would, either. But that doesn't apply to everyone in the world universally.

 

[Mellt]

The game is currently unplayable. Thanks to 4K, the game crashes during the first sex scene. I deleted it afterward. The intro is complete bullshit. Who lets a complete stranger into their house? The person claims to have been sent by someone to protect them and only them. On top of that, the main character immediately lies to his (not) mother, saying the complete stranger is his cousin. That makes absolutely no sense. No one with even a shred of common sense would do that. Furthermore, the main character is a complete idiot. The things he does make no sense at all. I have no idea how old the developer is, but I think he's 14 or so because an adult wouldn't write such a nonsensical story where nothing makes sense. I forgot to mention that the complete stranger doesn't even provide proof that they are who they claim to be, and the MC doesn't even ask for proof; they don't even call their uncle to confirm whether the stranger is telling the truth. (Translated with Google)

Honestly i think you have a point in some of your views.
But your attitude.............. Man only because you have a hard life atm you dont have to take it out on the dev.
Criticismis always welcomed but not the way you write it.

First of all i also think the MC is slightly dumb. He let in a stranger in his house ok that can be debatable because she said she comes from blake and maybe there is a backstory in where the adress where they are living is a secret. And only trusted people can enter this house or building.
But after she changes her eye color and act agressivly against the android he just dont question her reaction he just says oh the Android is harmless...... come on dude when you see a girls eye color change and this girl things the android is dangerous, why dont you question her why she thinks so or why she can change her eye color.
And also this strange reaction to introduce her as his cousin. WTF say she is a bodyguard from blake. And she was sent to protect you. Like it literaly happend. no reason to lie.
But whatever maybe MC is just a primate virgin. That would explain his permanent brain afk reaction to every girls he interact with. Also he is directly asking for a sexual interaction from his bodyguard as soon as he realise she would do it because it is her job. And all this isnt logical because he is the protege of one of the biggest CEO in this game if i got this right. so he should have some self control.

But all these details dont matter because it is a "SCI-FI VISUAL NOVEL"
Dude pls let the Dev enjoy his work and let his creatism work.
It doesnt matter if some actions are logical or not. This VN is there to entertain us.
And i am entertaint!!!!!

Take Logic to your RL and let it outside this sweet Vn World.

THX for your hard work Dev!!!

 

[Havenless_]

I might need to remove support for languages other then english because I'm getting a lot of negative reviews from non-english speakers. The "uncle" (i'm assuming you mean Blake?) is unreachable in the game, maybe DeepL didn't translate that correctly, I'm not sure.

Not related to that topic but I recommed adding more images to the OP. Changelog says there are more than 1500 renders but only 4 in the OP, and they look pretty much like the same scene. Add more images about the all the girls, the setting and maybe the MC. I think you need to contact a mod or a uploader for that

 

[chiefkilic]

Honestly i think you have a point in some of your views.
But your attitude.............. Man only because you have a hard life atm you dont have to take it out on the dev.
Criticismis always welcomed but not the way you write it.

First of all i also think the MC is slightly dumb. He let in a stranger in his house ok that can be debatable because she said she comes from blake and maybe there is a backstory in where the adress where they are living is a secret. And only trusted people can enter this house or building.
But after she changes her eye color and act agressivly against the android he just dont question her reaction he just says oh the Android is harmless...... come on dude when you see a girls eye color change and this girl things the android is dangerous, why dont you question her why she thinks so or why she can change her eye color.
And also this strange reaction to introduce her as his cousin. WTF say she is a bodyguard from blake. And she was sent to protect you. Like it literaly happend. no reason to lie.
But whatever maybe MC is just a primate virgin. That would explain his permanent brain afk reaction to every girls he interact with. Also he is directly asking for a sexual interaction from his bodyguard as soon as he realise she would do it because it is her job. And all this isnt logical because he is the protege of one of the biggest CEO in this game if i got this right. so he should have some self control.

But all these details dont matter because it is a "SCI-FI VISUAL NOVEL"
Dude pls let the Dev enjoy his work and let his creatism work.
It doesnt matter if some actions are logical or not. This VN is there to entertain us.
And i am entertaint!!!!!

Take Logic to your RL and let it outside this sweet Vn World.

THX for your hard work Dev!!!

I agree with your point about my attitude; I write what I think, and some people might find that harsh. But I can't agree with the point about turning on your VN and turning off your brain. If you're constantly facepalming while reading and thinking, "WTF, what's the MC doing?" then you don't feel like you're in the story. On the contrary, you're constantly being pulled out. Then it doesn't matter if the quality is fantastic, and the quality in the game really is good. The models all look great, too. However, I had to laugh at the blowjob scene because it looked so ridiculous. The angle of her mouth looked so strange. The animation itself was great. I don't want to say that the developer made a bad game in terms of graphics and animation, but the script is unfortunately just bad, at least as far as the intro is concerned. I didn't get past the blowjob scene before the game crashed, and I haven't seen a combresset version yet. And if I come across as too harsh, I'm sorry, but I Write what I think, and dev, you've already done a great job. You just need to rewrite the script here and there, add a few renders, and boom, the game is a masterpiece.(übersetzt mit google)

 

[whatone]

I didn't get past the blowjob scene before the game crashed, and I haven't seen a combresset version yet.

Compressed version is on the previous page mate. See here.

 

[chiefkilic]

Compressed version is on the previous page mate. See here.

Thank you

 

[SafeForSure]

Honestly i think you have a point in some of your views.
But your attitude.............. Man only because you have a hard life atm you dont have to take it out on the dev.
Criticismis always welcomed but not the way you write it.

First of all i also think the MC is slightly dumb. He let in a stranger in his house ok that can be debatable because she said she comes from blake and maybe there is a backstory in where the adress where they are living is a secret. And only trusted people can enter this house or building.
But after she changes her eye color and act agressivly against the android he just dont question her reaction he just says oh the Android is harmless...... come on dude when you see a girls eye color change and this girl things the android is dangerous, why dont you question her why she thinks so or why she can change her eye color.
And also this strange reaction to introduce her as his cousin. WTF say she is a bodyguard from blake. And she was sent to protect you. Like it literaly happend. no reason to lie.
But whatever maybe MC is just a primate virgin. That would explain his permanent brain afk reaction to every girls he interact with. Also he is directly asking for a sexual interaction from his bodyguard as soon as he realise she would do it because it is her job. And all this isnt logical because he is the protege of one of the biggest CEO in this game if i got this right. so he should have some self control.

But all these details dont matter because it is a "SCI-FI VISUAL NOVEL"
Dude pls let the Dev enjoy his work and let his creatism work.
It doesnt matter if some actions are logical or not. This VN is there to entertain us.
And i am entertaint!!!!!

Take Logic to your RL and let it outside this sweet Vn World.

THX for your hard work Dev!!!

Chiefkilic is actually a really good guy who is in 99% of his comments spot on and I always check out his comments to see what to expect from a game. We all sometimes sound harsher than we are or we have a shitty day

 

[David Carr]

Seems great so far

 

[Davewatch]

Well interesting start to the game (for me anyway) Like a bit of SciFi