Well, since i'm a very kinky perv, i like this one and hope it will go a long way. The bycicle shop is too much of a joke, quite out of the place, the over-organized nature of the town is funny though. The music is great and the whole concept seems nice, hopefully the serious side of the storytelling won't fade but i feel it will be a real challenge for the Dev to make the grim tale merge seamlessly with the Lechertown setup.
@Disciples of Virginia, you have to be very carefull balancing between jokes and the horror plot because the former can ruin the latter easily. I admire your selection of background musics and that i finally see some change in the rpgm maps.
Some inconsistencies are pretty obvious though. Again, the horrorclown is too much. Then there is sunny, sandy beach where mc sunbathes in a bikini while its actually winter and snowy woods surround the city is quite noticable, not in a good way. Its either cold winter or summer, or a good explanation is required, otherwise it just appears a big mishap.
Unlike others i do like the mc's appearance, her eyes too. I hope you don't give up on this eventhough i can assure you'll get a lot of negative remarks from those who aren't into those things you already hinted at with the daydream scenes. She may be allowing too much "sampling" to Nigel though. She suppose to be a tough chick, some backwater sherrif shouldn't just feel her up quite so soonish
Of course in the end i'm looking forward to see her become the bimbofied townslut obviously. But some would see her remain strong and shrug off these pesky lecherous old pervs that surround her. So that you offer a choice is important. Keep in mind that this "pure" route to work out you'll have to offer lewds on it as well. Otherwise its pointless. Me, totally bimbofied buttlicking cumdumpster mc is the way to go