So for the folks commenting on the English in this update, for the last few updates, I have been doing the proofreading for
Vatos. Unfortunately, we have not fallen into a good work rhythm yet so my edits have been appearing one update behind. We were actually close this time. I was able to finish the edits, but I wasn't able to test play the edited script before he needed to start uploading. (He has slow upload speed so he was concerned about missing his promised release time.) I'm not sure, but I think he's going to try to get them added for release to his lower tier patrons. Maybe that version will make it here when available.
As for the pancake issue, it's pretty clear he used the wrong asset. Not sure if it's worth it to him to re-render though. *shrug*
Regarding the length of the updates, he's pretty consistently updating every month. (This past update, he took a few weeks off so this one took longer. However, his work time was still about a month!) There's only so much you can do in a month, and as far as I know, he's doing it all. So maybe cut him some slack?
Complaints about pacing and slow-burn are a different matter. As long as you're polite, he's probably happy to read those. I've found him pleasant and reasonable to communicate with anyway.
My thoughts on the update:
Lydia
Janet is a randy little minx!
Eva and Nora are huge fucking teases!
It seems like the Robstone/mafia story is about to be re-engaged soon. Looking forward to seeing what develops there.