I've really been enjoying this game. Storywise it's fun and engaging. The art is pretty good with a nice variety of girls. The language part of the equation has been a bit lacking though. It is comprehensible, but rough enough to detract from enjoyment if you are reading everything.
Therefore, I took it upon myself to do an edit job on the script to hopefully improve this feature of the game. I have corrected punctuation and syntax. I have tried to remain true to the original script wherever possible, but there have been a few places where I needed to reword sentences. I hope my efforts will be appreciated by any of you who enjoy this game. If you use it and would like to leave comments, either here or in my DMs, I would like to hear your feedback. Especially if you like what you have done, I would be interested in collaborating with Devs to make better, cleaner games by making sure the English in the scripts is up to snuff. Referrals would be appreciated.
In order to use this file, first you will need to use unren to extract rpa packages. Then, delete (or rename) script.rpy and script.rpyc from the /game folder. Drop this file into /game and restart the game application.
Finally, I noticed a continuity error. The game refers to Chloe and Chris as step-siblings. However, the story Chloe tells indicates they are half-siblings (same mother, different fathers). If they are in fact half-siblings, it's elementary to make that change in the script.