- Dec 24, 2019
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I agree with you. I feel like my biggest problem with this game as a whole is the pacing feels really weird for most of the girls in the game.
By episode 9, I definitely think that the MC should have slept with a good chunk of the girls in the game. I also don't have a problem with the number of girls in the game and I am fine with Vatos adding a few more like Lydia and Jasmine for example.
The only thing that needs work is the pacing, but honestly short of a rewrite I don't see that happening, my hope is that at least the content with the Mom will be more on track and hopefully the content with the other girls will be more consistent as well.
I feel like the sex with Lily happened too fast and should have had a bit more build up. For instance it feels a bit weird for her to jump into sex before experimenting with blowjobs first.
I think the pacing with the Aunt and most of the milfs has been fine with the exception of Mrs Watson because you need a few slutty milfs to keep the sex content up to speed. I would have liked to have seen either slightly more build up with Mrs Watson or for her husband's plan to have been for you to impregnate her from the beginning and for there to have been a scene between the two of them where he explains this to her and she has to come to grips with this idea. Her going from loyal wife to cheating so fast was odd. Granted there was a lot of heat between her and the MC during the swimming lessons and Mr Watson definitely gave off a cuck vibe, but I still think the scene could have used some work. I also think that the guilt she is feeling afterward is good for the story, but I feel like if the sex had been planned by Mr Watson before hand, there could have still been some guilt associated with actually going through with it and the 'cheating' being planned would have helped the pacing.
The main issue is definitely with the Mom. The constant back and forth with little or no progress is jarring. A nice slow burn type build up would have been better with maybe that scene where she almost seduced the MC being like the last thing that happened before she finally gave into her feelings. At this point it feels like she has gone from wrestling with the idea to not even considering it and it just feels off. I would like to see a nice build up from here on out for maybe like 5 double sized updates before we finally get to have sex with the Mom. Once that milestone is crossed, we can move into the 3 some stage and then the full harem and pregnancy stages.
I will say though, the underlying story is still very interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing how it plays out. The reveal with Jasmine was very interesting.
I also think that the sex scenes as a whole are very nice. The models are all hot and have a very original look. I like this game a lot, I just think the pacing could use some work.
