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- Nov 20, 2018
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I definitely agree that I think Adam should get respect; I actually think he's a pretty cool guy overall. I think just a few tweaks to the dialogue in this part would have made it much better. I think the biggest reason for the outcome (well, not why Janet took the MC to "help" in the first place in this episode) was that, once you're in the throes of passion it can be very difficult to focus on anything else. Sometimes, when you get interrupted, it can take a bit to focus your mind. While both Janet and the MC knew they were talking to Adam, I'm don't believe they really thought much about what they said. I think it was more of a base-level response, like "Screw off, we're fucking!" — not really meant to be cruel, just a knee-jerk reaction to the situation.OK, finished through the current build. Other than the grammar and pronoun issues in the back half, my only complaint is how the MC went from feeling some concern about Adam's feelings to DGAF. Adam is the only husband in the game that deserves some respect, as he truly does love his wife and wants to do whatever he can for her. Just because he was cursed with a micro-peen, does not make him worthy of scorn. I would rather they came at that whole thing differently, Adam asking the MC to impregnate and please his wife, basically asking him to be a manwhore for his wife.
I did also have a little trouble accepting the choice to mock Cody while you and Eva went at it. I get that he's a bit weird and that his dad is an ass, but taking glee in ripping a family apart isn't cool. I have no problem with the MC having sex with her while Bob's on the phone—screw that guy. But the extra insults and taunts to Cody were just cruel. I had to see what happened with that choice, but it's definitely not what I want my playthrough to have.