- Jul 3, 2021
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Much appreciated response! Didn't realize there were several people doing the writing. That probably explains why I felt like it was somewhat of a rollercoaster ride, with some bits being written better than others.Don't feel sorry for raising critique or giving feedback, I actually apprecciate it very much. But I've also learned that different people have different tastes and you can't satisfy everyone. But if some parts of the game, whether it is renders, animations, sounds or particular scripts are getting constant hate from most of players, then something is really wrong.
Whole game Babysitters until update 0.0.4. was written by Sindel, native female storywriter, she was really good and especially fast. She was best writer I had, after my hiatus she left and she has now full time job, she doesnt have time to write anymore. In my personal opinion Babysitters scripts are in general better written than previous game Babysitter, although each game has it's better and worse parts. However, I get it that standards are much higher now and if anyone who is native speaker, is familiar with the game, has free time and enjoys writing is more than welcomed to join me and we can discuss it in private.
Scripts for this update were written as follows (all of them I reviewed and re-touched using ChatGpt and GPT3):
1.) EP6_Bathroom_Lara+Angelica_Final - Burt
2.) Ep6_Dr. Wick Session_Final - Burt
3.) Ep6_NewHomeExhibitionismFunWithLara_Final - Burt
4.) EP6_EricaBathroomEncounter_Final - Ceaser (New guy)
5.) EP6_AngelicaRoomEncounter_Final - Ceaser (New guy)
6.) EP6_Lunch Time_Final - Ceaser (New guy)
8.) EP6_YogaSession_Final - Ceaser (New guy)
9.) EP6_PhotoSession_Final - T4bbo (me)
10.) EP6_DormRoomLesbianFun_Final - T4bbo (me)
11.) EP6_Nightout_Final - T4bbo and Ceaser
12.) EP6_EricaOfficeMasturbationandBathroomFantasy_Final - Ceaser
I think you'd greatly benefit from a native English speaking proofreader, maybe not even a writer as Burt apparently is on board, and I believe he is a good writer from what I can remember in Babysitter. Now I gotta play through the update again to see which one of you deserves a spanking..
Jokes aside, thank you!