VN Ren'Py Abandoned Bad Bobby Saga [v1.1.0] [RAinces]

[Horny Little Brother]

The game code is already finished, including the finalized dialogue, music, and sound effects. All that's missing are the finalized renders of some scenes. There's already some gameplay that I think looks cool! I need to finish the scene where he challenges Lucy to get loose, watches her as she poses in sexually arousing poses, and she ends up enjoying it, another where he tries to pull down her pants, another where he sits on top of her and spanks her, and a couple more scenes. It seems like few scenes, but they're still just in the draft stage, meaning I need to refine the poses and facial expressions and render the images. If I could find someone I trust to help me, I could send them the files, and they could render or finish some sequences.

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It takes a lot of time to create body and facial expressions that look natural and are consistent with the characters in the game. In these three renders, I still have to work on Bobby's body language reacting to her action.
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Dude, when will we get to see this?

 

[john1230]

can you printscreen this moment?

I'm not creating standalone scenes, but rather continuing events that can progress through the sandbox. It seems to me that what you're suggesting is just a one-time option, since the sexual abuse committed by the boss only happens once. If you show me, I can probably download the models used in the scene and create that sequence for you. But I'm already so busy with Lucy's event that I can't guarantee anything.

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Damn it!

A mod deleted my previous reply instead of editing it.

Basically I said it's just a suggestion for you to consider adding to the game and you don't need to actually need to make the scene.

The scene is:

"momafterofficescene00" and you need to set "momoffice" to 9 and "momproggress" to 1 to get the scene to play using universal renpy mod.

The pictures in use is momafterofficescene 15-17 and 20 and can be found in game\images\momroom folder (might need to use unren to see the picture folder)

 

[mikednew]

What makes BBS beautiful and lovable is that Bobby pursues his desires through blackmail, violence, and coercion.

Bobby has never been romantic, never pursued romantic paths.

None of the girls have ever considered Bobby a romantic partner; they've always found his desires unacceptable and repulsive, and they've always resisted.

These are the things that make BBS what it is. To stray from them would betray the spirit of the game. I expect Lucy to push Bobby away in disgust at the end of this scene.

Also, the render in question is yours, you've done an amazing job. Last time, Axeman was producing renders like this, then he changed the name to ziptiefun

Hi! The render is from the original game. Maybe done by Rainces or one of his collaborators, like Zip. I just used it to illustrate that Bob didn't always get things through blackmail or violence. In this specific scene, he's giving Lucy a massage, and she's half-drunk and enjoying the interaction. He kisses the back of her neck, and she runs away. Apparently, she doesn't remember it happening the next day, but surely if she were sober, she would react with revulsion.

I understand what you mean. But one thing I find interesting about Bobby is that at SOME MOMENTS, it seems like he genuinely cares about the girls. He does his own thing, but when he sees they're suffering, he expresses concern (although most of the time this doesn't stop him). I like this duality, but certainly in the event I'm continuing, Lucy won't accept his advances. At this point in the game, she's not corrupted to that extent (and if you'll allow me to point out, they would never accept a romantic relationship with him).

 

[mikednew]

Dude, when will we get to see this?

I'm seriously considering publishing what I have within a week, even with rough renders. That way, I can get a sense of what people are thinking and build on that. Despite the months it took me to do this, I unfortunately don't have much content. If I counted all the time I worked on the game, I don't think it would be a month.

When I first considered continuing the game, it was around the time Rainces had disappeared and there was no sign of the game continuing. Now that he's back, it might not make much sense to continue. However, I'm thinking about finishing this event at least, and it would be fun if Rainces himself continued the event in the original game, and we could compare what he did with what I did.

 

[mikednew]

The scene is:

"momafterofficescene00" and you need to set "momoffice" to 9 and "momproggress" to 1 to get the scene to play using universal renpy mod.

Thanks! I managed to find it. But I think I chose to stop the boss from raping her, so the dialogue is different for me. Bob doesn't ask if he came inside.

 

[Corambis]

What makes BBS beautiful and lovable is that Bobby pursues his desires through blackmail, violence, and coercion.

Bobby has never been romantic, never pursued romantic paths.

None of the girls have ever considered Bobby a romantic partner; they've always found his desires unacceptable and repulsive, and they've always resisted.

These are the things that make BBS what it is. To stray from them would betray the spirit of the game. I expect Lucy to push Bobby away in disgust at the end of this scene.

Also, the render in question is yours, you've done an amazing job. Last time, Axeman was producing renders like this, then he changed the name to ziptiefun

Hi! The render is from the original game. Maybe done by Rainces or one of his collaborators, like Zip. I just used it to illustrate that Bob didn't always get things through blackmail or violence. In this specific scene, he's giving Lucy a massage, and she's half-drunk and enjoying the interaction. He kisses the back of her neck, and she runs away. Apparently, she doesn't remember it happening the next day, but surely if she were sober, she would react with revulsion.

I understand what you mean. But one thing I find interesting about Bobby is that at SOME MOMENTS, it seems like he genuinely cares about the girls. He does his own thing, but when he sees they're suffering, he expresses concern (although most of the time this doesn't stop him). I like this duality, but certainly in the event I'm continuing, Lucy won't accept his advances. At this point in the game, she's not corrupted to that extent (and if you'll allow me to point out, they would never accept a romantic relationship with him).

There are all kinds of places where you are given choices between a more romantic path and a dark one. Most of the time, the choice never seemed to make a difference. Jenny is the most recent example, where you can pursue a semi-romantic path with her, or you can blackmail her, but I'm not sure how he intended for that to play out. My recollection is that Rainces definitely intended for there to be romance, or at least less-dark paths, for all main love interests, and said as such long ago. But I think that, like a lot of things, that became something he never followed up on. I think more and more, his fanbase became more focused on the darker aspects, and he's been trying to deliver on that.

 

[Horny Little Brother]

Hi! The render is from the original game. Maybe done by Rainces or one of his collaborators, like Zip. I just used it to illustrate that Bob didn't always get things through blackmail or violence. In this specific scene, he's giving Lucy a massage, and she's half-drunk and enjoying the interaction. He kisses the back of her neck, and she runs away. Apparently, she doesn't remember it happening the next day, but surely if she were sober, she would react with revulsion.

I understand what you mean. But one thing I find interesting about Bobby is that at SOME MOMENTS, it seems like he genuinely cares about the girls. He does his own thing, but when he sees they're suffering, he expresses concern (although most of the time this doesn't stop him). I like this duality, but certainly in the event I'm continuing, Lucy won't accept his advances. At this point in the game, she's not corrupted to that extent (and if you'll allow me to point out, they would never accept a romantic relationship with him).

Hello, I think exactly like you I look forward to your work

 

[Horny Little Brother]

I'm seriously considering publishing what I have within a week, even with rough renders. That way, I can get a sense of what people are thinking and build on that. Despite the months it took me to do this, I unfortunately don't have much content. If I counted all the time I worked on the game, I don't think it would be a month.

When I first considered continuing the game, it was around the time Rainces had disappeared and there was no sign of the game continuing. Now that he's back, it might not make much sense to continue. However, I'm thinking about finishing this event at least, and it would be fun if Rainces himself continued the event in the original game, and we could compare what he did with what I did.

"Now that he's back"
Dude, I think you haven't gotten to know Ra well enoughm It's unclear when the promised update will be released; I think it'll be around 2026.

When will the next update come out after this one? 2027? I think it will come towards the end.

Ra's return, unfortunately, won't mean much

 

[john1230]

Thanks! I managed to find it. But I think I chose to stop the boss from raping her, so the dialogue is different for me. Bob doesn't ask if he came inside.

You have to put "momoffice" "momproggress" on the watch list of ( URM ) so that the variables will be on the left side of the screen when you play the game.

Start the scene and if "momoffice" (9) and "momproggress" (1) is a different number set it to 9 and 1 and you should get the dialogue where Bobby ask her if the boss came inside of her.

 

[mikednew]

What do you think about this? I really don't like the player having access to things the MC doesn't, like the girls' thoughts. It takes away some of the game's immersion. Assuming we're the MC, we should only have access to things the MC has access to. There are ways to indicate what they're thinking, like when Bob watches Lisa alone in the room looking at her panties, which Bob had cum on. It's more interesting for the player to figure things out.

 

[heavyartillery88]

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What do you think about this? I really don't like the player having access to things the MC doesn't, like the girls' thoughts. It takes away some of the game's immersion. Assuming we're the MC, we should only have access to things the MC has access to. There are ways to indicate what they're thinking, like when Bob watches Lisa alone in the room looking at her panties, which Bob had cum on. It's more interesting for the player to figure things out.

This feels like a mechanic that a AAA game studio would implement at the end of development to add polish to their 100 hour rpg. In a porn game that can be completed in 5 hours tops I see no point.

 

[Corambis]

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What do you think about this? I really don't like the player having access to things the MC doesn't, like the girls' thoughts. It takes away some of the game's immersion. Assuming we're the MC, we should only have access to things the MC has access to. There are ways to indicate what they're thinking, like when Bob watches Lisa alone in the room looking at her panties, which Bob had cum on. It's more interesting for the player to figure things out.

It seems unnecessary. There's a saying in writing that goes "show, don't tell". This could all be in the game itself, either in conversations with Bobby, or that Bobby overhears with the character talking to someone else. Maybe it is Bobby reading their diary, or intercepting their texts, or something like that. I'm also disappointed that Rainces is spending time going back to polish the interface, because I don't think anyone cares about that. Or at least would prioritize that kind of thing over actual content and progress in the game.

What I personally hate in porn games is when we suddenly get the other character's thoughts during sex scenes or other key moments, when at every other it is the MC point of view exclusively. The sex scenes in BBS could use some more dialogue, though. There's way too much "Bobby fucks them from behind as he lies on top or next to them and holds his hand over their mouth while their mascara runs due to their tears and there's nothing said or thought". Then again, we need more sex scenes, period. I hope that any others we get have more variety, without turning it into the "catalog of unusual poses" that some games go into. I don't think there is a doggy-style scene in the game, for example.

 

[john1230]

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What do you think about this? I really don't like the player having access to things the MC doesn't, like the girls' thoughts. It takes away some of the game's immersion. Assuming we're the MC, we should only have access to things the MC has access to. There are ways to indicate what they're thinking, like when Bob watches Lisa alone in the room looking at her panties, which Bob had cum on. It's more interesting for the player to figure things out.

I'm not against it, but then again I play these games for a bit of fun so my standards are pretty low.

It seems unnecessary. There's a saying in writing that goes "show, don't tell". This could all be in the game itself, either in conversations with Bobby, or that Bobby overhears with the character talking to someone else. Maybe it is Bobby reading their diary, or intercepting their texts, or something like that. I'm also disappointed that Rainces is spending time going back to polish the interface, because I don't think anyone cares about that. Or at least would prioritize that kind of thing over actual content and progress in the game.

What I personally hate in porn games is when we suddenly get the other character's thoughts during sex scenes or other key moments, when at every other it is the MC point of view exclusively. The sex scenes in BBS could use some more dialogue, though. There's way too much "Bobby fucks them from behind as he lies on top or next to them and holds his hand over their mouth while their mascara runs due to their tears and there's nothing said or thought". Then again, we need more sex scenes, period. I hope that any others we get have more variety, without turning it into the "catalog of unusual poses" that some games go into. I don't think there is a doggy-style scene in the game, for example.

English is not rainces first language so him writing more dialogue during sex scenes horrifies me!

 

[Qalx]

I'm not against it, but then again I play these games for a bit of fun so my standards are pretty low.

English is not rainces first language so him writing more dialogue during sex scenes horrifies me!

probably because you need to use both hands then...

 

[Corambis]

I'm not against it, but then again I play these games for a bit of fun so my standards are pretty low.

English is not rainces first language so him writing more dialogue during sex scenes horrifies me!

Yeah, his dialogue is pretty bad as it is, which ties into my other point about all the characters sounding similar. I'm not at all against "Engrish" in games. It is actually endeading in some games. But his level of typos and clunky dialogue gets really distracting. He could probably find someone to volunteer to punch up his writing a bit in the translation, or even just re-write it. I'm torn between knowing a lot of the dialogue will be a boner-killer, but just finding the silent sex scenes to be kind of empty. I think there's a lot of opportunity for some decently written dialogue during the sex scenes to make them far more interesting. Obviously, too much dialogue, even good dialogue, can also be an issue, although I do like longer sex scenes.

 

[secretcador]

Thanks for your information on RA. It's irony that Liza's expression on that image is exactly my feeling for his return and new game. I am glad he is back, trying new things. But I want to try new things too and move on as we all know from the past experience how his project would run. As far as I can see, his situations are not that different from before and people rarely change, even with new project. But as always, good luck to him.

Bobby is a projection of RA, while the girls are his subscribers, he f them over hard then come to apology and promise to be good, just to f them over all over again, they can be either stupid or they love to get f around.

 

[john1230]

probably because you need to use both hands then...

I don't need two hands to play a silly porn game! if you need to use two hands you shouldn't be playing these games.

Yeah, his dialogue is pretty bad as it is, which ties into my other point about all the characters sounding similar. I'm not at all against "Engrish" in games. It is actually endeading in some games. But his level of typos and clunky dialogue gets really distracting. He could probably find someone to volunteer to punch up his writing a bit in the translation, or even just re-write it. I'm torn between knowing a lot of the dialogue will be a boner-killer, but just finding the silent sex scenes to be kind of empty. I think there's a lot of opportunity for some decently written dialogue during the sex scenes to make them far more interesting. Obviously, too much dialogue, even good dialogue, can also be an issue, although I do like longer sex scenes.

He is using ChatGPT to help with the coding, hopefully it'll catch the broken English and correct it too.

Though some of the dialogue in later parts of the game seems to be in good English, so he might have started to use ChatGPT at the last stage of the previous update.

I've actually went in and made the dialogue less "Engrishy" for v1.1.0 but I'm not going to post the scripts as it's just swapping my terrible English and gramma for rainces's terrible English and gramma.

 

[mikednew]

He could probably find someone to volunteer to punch up his writing a bit in the translation, or even just re-write it. I'm torn between knowing a lot of the dialogue will be a boner-killer, but just finding the silent sex scenes to be kind of empty. I think there's a lot of opportunity for some decently written dialogue during the sex scenes to make them far more interesting. Obviously, too much dialogue, even good dialogue, can also be an issue, although I do like longer sex scenes.

I think the last game update, with the development of Lisa's story arc, felt like it wasn't the same person writing. For example, until then, we'd never had a narrator in the game. But in this latest update, we read a narrator describing what Lisa is feeling. I don't know, but it seems to me like he's using ChatgGPT to write this kind of thing.

'There's a saying in writing that goes "show, don't tell". This could all be in the game itself, either in conversations with Bobby, or that Bobby overhears with the character talking to someone else.'

I agree 100%.

Regarding the dialogue in the sex scenes, do you have any examples of what you find interesting?

 

[mikednew]

Though some of the dialogue in later parts of the game seems to be in good English, so he might have started to use ChatGPT at the last stage of the previous update.

Did you notice that too? How interesting. I just said that too.

 

[john1230]

Did you notice that too? How interesting. I just said that too.

Yes, near the end of the last update the English got way better and I had to edit less of the text. Which makes me believe he was using ChatGPT or something similar to write the last part of the game update.

Now that he is using ChatGPT to help with the coding, I'm hoping it'll also fix the dialogue from the earlier parts of the game.

Fingers crossed!