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I've never rendered her like this, so here is a (real) quick one
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Not bad. On a side note, I'm not sure that her daywear would be accepted in high school anywhere.
Hush you! I'm starting a homeschooling program only for Ellies...
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So you call that pants ? I think I'd like to meet your english teacher
- Sep 29, 2017
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What a nice little gem we have here. Do you plan on different routes for each character? It seems to be a love/healing route and a mindbreak route I would assume.
There are a few things I worry about:
- Down the line, it could be very difficult to write a story with a mute girl. I hope you can pull this of
- I hope you don't rush things, I see this a slow corruption game, the whole "Grab her right in the Pussy" was too fast for me
Overall, I really like what you do, so I support you with a little bit on Patreon. Keep it up!
There are a few things I worry about:
- Down the line, it could be very difficult to write a story with a mute girl. I hope you can pull this of
- I hope you don't rush things, I see this a slow corruption game, the whole "Grab her right in the Pussy" was too fast for me
Overall, I really like what you do, so I support you with a little bit on Patreon. Keep it up!
- Aug 22, 2018
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That's the tag I was trying to ignore.
Not a fan of corruption games in general. I gave this one go because me and Rec spoke about the lesbian side of things a while back and I was interested to see how he'd handle it.
Turns out I really liked the characters too and the dyke side of things is looking good to me too.
I'll just have to see how deep the rabbit hole goes with the corruption thing.
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*Tries very hard to suppress rude comments about rabbits and holes*
- Mar 18, 2018
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So MC + Ellie are real siblings ?
And Rachel is not Ellie's mother, just a woman who lived with their dad?
And Rachel is not Ellie's mother, just a woman who lived with their dad?
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Half siblings by the sounds of it, same dad different mother.
I could be wrong but that's what it sounded like to me.
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Thanks, I don't intend to rush things, I'm taking the time I need
Don't think too much about the corruption thing, it won't be the usual "you'll become my bimbo slave fucktoy" thing
Rachel is Ellie's mother, who lived with MC's Dad.
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I have a pretty strong drug-play fetish, and it seemed like a bit much to me too. Moving too fast, certainly.
It has been mentioned but not really discussed, and I don't really get it. I mean, I get her evoking a protective feeling, I get wanting to be kind and gentle with her, but have you missed that she's literally been humping our leg? She wants it bad, and besides being careful not to move too fast for her I don't see why we shouldn't give her what she wants. That said, oh god yes to the headpatting.
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It's strongly inferred, but it could just as easily be through social media or paper notes.
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Jada side-stepped this, so yes, it is "inferred" though you'd have to be an idiot to think they do not talk.
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Not confirmed, no. Could be notes or she could only talk to Jada.
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