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Bug is even more stranger than that. Sometimes i get notifications from threads i didn't visited for months instead of the ones i frequent.
yea, i got once notification about thread where somebody quited me but there was no such post and hadn't visited on that thread since ~year ago.
 

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What exactly throws you off? I can at least tell you that many people got a wrong picture from the summary^^
It just sounds kinda boring, you know?
It's doesn't really sound interesting. Sounds just like a normal life I guess.
Maybe it's just weirdly written, I don't know
 

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It just sounds kinda boring, you know?
It's doesn't really sound interesting. Sounds just like a normal life I guess.
Maybe it's just weirdly written, I don't know
Welp, I guess it is normal for some people :unsure:
Nonetheless, it's just a rough summary of what happened before the actual story of the game. The story itself is more on the mystery side... dunno what else to say without spoilers, so try it out, or not, it's your decision^^
 

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Hello, I'm JokerLeader a user from this amazing Forum.
This is my first Walkthrough that i have created, if i got any grammar errors, just know that english it's not my speaking language. Thank you.
I hope recreation approve of this Walkthrough.

P.S. Thanks to the Dev recreation, for the game and the extra help in this walkthrough, and a thank you to afterlights for the help with the grammar.
 
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This is my first Walkthrough that i have created, if i got any grammar errors, just know that english it's not my speaking language. Thank you.
Looks good!

Hanna's yellow font is a little harsh to read. Maybe a blue or gray?

I'm not finished with it yet, but only a couple spelling errors so far. I'll share when I'm finished.
 
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Looks good!

Hanna's yellow font is a little harsh to read. Maybe a blue or gray?

I'm not finished with it yet, but only a couple spelling errors so far. I'll share when I'm finished.
Thank you i will change the color, i try to use the colors that the dev use on their name in the dialogue.

P.S. If you can point the grammar errors, that would be lovely, thanks, for taking the time.
 
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Hello, I'm JokerLeader a user from this amazing Forum.
This is my first Walkthrough that i have created, if i got any grammar errors, just know that english it's not my speaking language. Thank you.
I hope recreation approve of this Walkthrough.
Whaaaat? There're so many Rachel point that I don't know it exist.
 
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Hello, I'm JokerLeader a user from this amazing Forum.
This is my first Walkthrough that i have created, if i got any grammar errors, just know that english it's not my speaking language. Thank you.
I hope recreation approve of this Walkthrough.
Alright, looks good so far I haven't seen any errors (but I'm not a native english speaker myself xD).
One thing I'd change is this:
[Name] Affection gained/lost for the specified character.
[Color] I will use color for the choices that give plus points
Gaining points doesn't always mean it's good or that you gain affection, losing points can be good depending on the character, so the sentence could be misleading.
Also, you won't end the relationships with the main girls by gaining/losing points, you'll only end the relationship if there's a variable explicitely for that triggered in the code ($mend for example), if there's no such variable getting triggered, the girl can still be dated later in future updates. You could miss some scenes though (or a lot, looking at Jada here).

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now I've seen one typo: (If Mc had sex with her previous) - "previous" should be "previously"

Aside from the few things mentioned, well done so far (y)
 

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Alright, looks good so far I haven't seen any errors (but I'm not a native english speaker myself xD).
One thing I'd change is this:

Gaining points doesn't always mean it's good or that you gain affection, losing points can be good depending on the character, so the sentence could be misleading.
Also, you won't end the relationships with the main girls by gaining/losing points, you'll only end the relationship if there's a variable explicitely for that triggered in the code ($mend for example), if there's no such variable getting triggered, the girl can still be dated later in future updates. You could miss some scenes though (or a lot, looking at Jada here).

You've missed a few things:
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now I've seen one typo: (If Mc had sex with her previous) - "previous" should be "previously"

Aside from the few things mentioned, well done so far (y)
Thank you i will try to correct the walkthrough, and add the new info.
 
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nice walkthrough but i seem to have made right choices apparently.
 

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Gaining points doesn't always mean it's good or that you gain affection, losing points can be good depending on the character, so the sentence could be misleading.
I notice that with Ellie some scenes she loses points but they are the best choice.

What about this.
[Name] Affection gained/lost for the specified character.
[Color] I will use color for the best choices that give more scenes/dialogue
 

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I notice that with Ellie some scenes she loses points but they are the best choice.

What about this.
[Name] Affection gained/lost for the specified character.
[Color] I will use color for the best choices that give more scenes/dialogue
It's not Affection, I'd probably just call it "points" and mention that losing points doesn't necessarily mean it's a bad thing.
 

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It's not Affection, I'd probably just call it "points" and mention that losing points doesn't necessarily mean it's a bad thing.
[Name] Points gained/lost for the specified character.
[Losing Points for a certain character it's not always a bad choice]
Like this?
 
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