barrymammen

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No idea, but if you think that this is so terrible, can you give some example of a game where you do like the story?

I have been playing as female protagonist by the way, but anyway.
Here are some of the AVN's I personally consider to have decent to good writings and storylines:

Broken Dreamers, Glimpses of the past, Long Road Home, Matrix Hearts, On Distant Shores, Price-Of-Power,
Rebirth, Savior, Shale-hill-secrets, SnowStorm, Summer's Gone, The-Arson-Betrayal, The Grey Dream,
The Mason Gambit, The Unbroken, Toro 7, A.O.A-Academy, Bright Lord, Karlssons Gambit, Leap of Faith,
Reluctant Archon, The Author, Eturnam, Avalon, Being a DIK

And like I said before, this is Only My Opinion.
 
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barrymammen

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Not sure if this is a trolling comment by a jealous dev or fan of other games, or you are actually being serious. With only a few posts on your account I wonder.

Regardless, I'll bite. I think the dialog in BM is very, very good. And many parts are laugh out loud funny. You must have missed all the Hanna scenes.

As for the MC, not sure how he is self-absorbed, more than any other MC in a game. They are the main character after all, so the game has to somewhat focus on the MC's opinions and feelings about the situation he is in. There are a few parts that are a little abrupt, such as the initial few scenes with Katie, and also regarding Rachel pills and taking advantage of her intoxicated state, but I get that it her secret desire after all (plus porn logic), but its a minor point from my own perspective, and it didn't detract from the rest of the game, which is excellent. I would put it at the top 10, absolutely, and depending on my mood, perhaps in the top 5.
Ok first let me just say that it's probably just my "seething hatred" of the way most Devs seem make their MC between 18 tp 23 years old, but the dialog for them makes them look and act like a fifteen year old virgin. This AVN is not as bad as most in this regard. My biggest problem with the MC and the writing style in particular, is the extreme overuse of "Inner Dialog." All stories need it but 90% of the devs I have read must have gone to the same bad school of writng. "inner Dialog" should be used very sparingly when in an actual conversation with another character, but these dev's use it way, way, way too much. As a matter of fact, there have been some games that have more "inner dialog" than actual Dialog. Also, most of excessive "inner dialog" could have been incorporated into the actual dialog very easily. I'm sorry but this is not just MY opinion here, it's most literary schools as well. I know these are not supposed to Pulitzer Prize quality but the level of writing needs to be raised.
 

ziaquk28g

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I had to start BM from the begining and now I am stuck in the "Ground Hog" loop.
What will trigger the exit of it?
I have search the rooms only thing is the box i the hall with the DNA paper
Some pointers
 

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I had to start BM from the begining and now I am stuck in the "Ground Hog" loop.
What will trigger the exit of it?
I have search the rooms only thing is the box i the hall with the DNA paper
Some pointers
tried the other rooms?
 

ziaquk28g

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Yes, tried doors that is click able.
Sometimes Ellie or Rachel is in one of the rooms but usually not interacting with player.
Got spy on Rachel in bathroom and Ellie on toailet interacting.
After tried search for and PC button I am on HomeDay16 according to SanchoMod.
 

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Ok first let me just say that it's probably just my "seething hatred" of the way most Devs seem make their MC between 18 tp 23 years old, but the dialog for them makes them look and act like a fifteen year old virgin. This AVN is not as bad as most in this regard. My biggest problem with the MC and the writing style in particular, is the extreme overuse of "Inner Dialog." All stories need it but 90% of the devs I have read must have gone to the same bad school of writng. "inner Dialog" should be used very sparingly when in an actual conversation with another character, but these dev's use it way, way, way too much. As a matter of fact, there have been some games that have more "inner dialog" than actual Dialog. Also, most of excessive "inner dialog" could have been incorporated into the actual dialog very easily. I'm sorry but this is not just MY opinion here, it's most literary schools as well. I know these are not supposed to Pulitzer Prize quality but the level of writing needs to be raised.
You must have played a game by MrDots to have such feelings against inner dialogue.

I feel your pain. :HideThePain:
 

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Ok first let me just say that it's probably just my "seething hatred" of the way most Devs seem make their MC between 18 tp 23 years old, but the dialog for them makes them look and act like a fifteen year old virgin. This AVN is not as bad as most in this regard. My biggest problem with the MC and the writing style in particular, is the extreme overuse of "Inner Dialog." All stories need it but 90% of the devs I have read must have gone to the same bad school of writng. "inner Dialog" should be used very sparingly when in an actual conversation with another character, but these dev's use it way, way, way too much. As a matter of fact, there have been some games that have more "inner dialog" than actual Dialog. Also, most of excessive "inner dialog" could have been incorporated into the actual dialog very easily. I'm sorry but this is not just MY opinion here, it's most literary schools as well. I know these are not supposed to Pulitzer Prize quality but the level of writing needs to be raised.
The writing here is definitely way above average, especially above the crap writing of many of the games you mentioned, which surprises me if that you say it doesn't have to be pulitzer writing but some of the games you mention definitely have questionable writing and things worse than the "inner dialogue" but hey it's fine.
 

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Could be worse
Could be a ki**er7 game.... :KEK:
I tried playing the latest update and couldn't make it past the first scene... and that was with frequent pauses from boredom.

Anyway, as far as rec's writing... I don't really notice the inner monologues that much so I don't think it's bad.
 

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This is a very cute uh, negligee or whatever. Would really like a sex scene with her wearing it*

*A scene between MC and Ellie, where Jada is not present**
**By 'not present' I mean that Jada does not partake in the scene, is not present at the scene, does not interrupt the scene, is not later revealed to have been clandestinely observing the scene, is, perhaps, not aware the scene is taking place and might, conceivably, never be told of the events that transpire in the scene

More Ellie, less Jada, I suppose is the theme. I didn't mind her at first but she's just everywhere, sick of her face.
 

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This is a very cute uh, negligee or whatever. Would really like a sex scene with her wearing it*

*A scene between MC and Ellie, where Jada is not present**
**By 'not present' I mean that Jada does not partake in the scene, is not present at the scene, does not interrupt the scene, is not later revealed to have been clandestinely observing the scene, is, perhaps, not aware the scene is taking place and might, conceivably, never be told of the events that transpire in the scene

More Ellie, less Jada, I suppose is the theme. I didn't mind her at first but she's just everywhere, sick of her face.
This made me chuckle a bit. I was a fan of Jada. I think she's hot. I think she's fun. But the fact that she is constantly in the way and has robbed me of my time with Kate, I'm really fucking sick of that shit, too lol.
 
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