VN Ren'Py Bad Witch and the Dark Magic Temptations [v0.4] [Bata13]

[DeuSJS]

About F&H - are you familiar with the legends of Tam Lin and True Thomas {"Thomas the Rhymer"}?

If not, Ms Wynne Jones will slip them into the story painlessly.

Also: The anime "Howl's Moving Castle" was sort-of-inspired by her book of the same name ... but the book and the anime might as well be two different stories {both pretty good}...

It's great to find someone else who's read Howl's Moving Castle. Every time I recommend it to people, they're like "I've already watched the movie", and refuse to read it even when I tell them it's wildly different.

 

[Bata13]

Please consider redesigning the main character. There's way too much writing for very little substance and it's also not funny. There are so many blank screens.

I think the designs for Hermoine and Beatrice are decent, but there's so little here to motivate me to play.

Good job working on your game, and good luck to you. Sorry to be a bummer, but there's a lot of areas for improvement.

Nah man—I appreciate your comments.
Any comment is better than no comment. You're not being a bummer hahaha. S'all good.

Hope you'll re-visit some time in the future. I'll keep working on the game and I hope I can change your mind then

 

[Bata13]

I just realized that there was a small bug in the released version of V0.2.

I've fixed it and re-uploaded the game now.

Sorry! I'll be better and do better!

-Bata13

 

[harem.king]

Can never have enough hermoine lewd corruption

Remember that voldemort's dream was to teach DADA in hogwarts.
Which he views as the only home he ever had.

 

[Sam10]

 

[bansdebar]

I swear, if i had had the patience to read beyond the first two books in hopes that the rest of that boring, would-be whimsical drivel MIGHT accidentally turn out to be worth reading, so that i would know enough about that gimcrack universe, i would write some Harry Potter fanfic or dow a game here where Harry turned out to be a submissive, closet crossdresser/transexual who spent his out-of-class time in a girl's uniform giving blowjobs to the masters to get passing grades and taking it up the ass from the other boys.

Just to spite that homophobic trans-hating hag that wrote that drivel.

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You want a GOOD novel about a confused kid growing into magical adulthood? Read

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, by Diana Wynne Jones or any of her books about Chrestomanci {starting with

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}, wshich are pretty much what the Harry Potter books want to be when they grow up.

Imagine coming to a porn parody of subject and then complaining about said subject.

Thank you for your contribution. I had a Chuckle.

 

[1y3uehsbqgs]

Android?

 

[Lupin the 3rd]

Bata13 what did you do?

 

[Bata13]

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Bata13 what did you do?

Uh...
Pardon my french but what the fuck???
I just tried downloading the game in incognito and it was fine.

Can you try again and let me know if you're still getting this message?

Below is the answer I found about quarantined games.

"Sometimes, some projects are flagged for additional reviews. The system is not perfect, and it’s possible to flag a genuine project. This is why it gets passed to a person for review, and once it’s confirmed it all looks good, your project should get out of quarantine. I’d suggest to give it some time, maybe a few days, and things might clear up. "

 

[Lupin the 3rd]

Uh...
Pardon my french but what the fuck???
I just tried downloading the game in incognito and it was fine.

the same message came up.

 

[Bata13]

the same message came up.

I'll send an email to support@itch.io and figure out what's going on. thanks!

 

[Bata13]

the same message came up.

I got a reply from support@itch.io

It should be all good cleared off. Please let me know if you're still facing the same issue. Thanks!

"Hello

Your project has been properly indexed and is now appearing in search results.

For some new projects, it may take some time to appear on our Search & Browse pages. You can learn more here:

You must be registered to see the links

Thank you. Let us know if you need any other assistance."

 

[Lupin the 3rd]

It should be all good cleared off.

all good now on itch.io