VN Ren'Py BAIL YOU OUT [v0.2] [psyker7]

[Panos550]

Nice game, good luck to you

 

[osanaiko]

i know that my english isn't good enough yet,& I'm keep working on improving the language skills.

The content of the writing is okay (not native speaker level but also not the worst I've seen by a long way).
But my point was that there are some basic sentence rules that are easy to follow even if you don't speak the language at all: Sentences begin with a capital letter. Names begin with a capital letter.
And by the way, "Elizabeth" is normally shortened to "Liz", or "Eliza", or "Beth", or "Betty", but I've never seen "Eliz" before.

As I said, good luck and keep going!

 

[Maxh]

Lack of tags or erotic direction means asset flip and a waste of time just like 90% of new games posted

 

[Oh my]

Very uncommon for a woman to have a tummy.
Took a decent number of screenies on the starting clothes.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

THX-4-the-share.

 

[marlboroblack]

im feeling a nice concept....but the MC and other character look the same to me

 

[Psyker7]

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I’ve updated the game and you can download it for free. Could someone update the links?

 

[kentastic]

started good. plot thickened, drama began, and bad guys and good guys established. you were in control right up to the last scene. then your control gets taken and she does something i wouldnt have done considering the morals of those involved. thats something that always just ruins games for me. when control is taken and your char does something a normal rational person would NEVER do. then they give you back control after swan diving you into a shyte storm. no thanks. i usually just turn them off and delete them, either you want us to play it or you wanna play it. if you wanna play then you play ill watch. but dont make a bad choice and then say here you take over. nope. im not a stupid person and i dont wanna play a stupid person. so either give the player the control or make a visual novel. then no choices are needed from the player.

 

[Bob69]

BAIL YOU OUT [v0.2] [psyker7] - Compressed

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