- Mar 20, 2019
- 43
- 134
Fun and diverse lady options. Rough or sweet choices. Compelling-enough conflict arc. Good aesthetics (sans MC, I wish I didn't see him - he doesn't look like he can magic-pull this much poon by breathing, sorry).
One thing that made me laugh and just took me right out of the story was the 'punch a nazi' stuff at the quick-e-mart. I get it, creators live out their fantasies in their stories but damn that was so painfully corny and unbelievable. Up for lamest fake villain this year. But you do you. Haha.
I found the mini-games to be reasonable in difficulty but if you have an option for us to skip them (which is smart since most of us don't enjoy mini-games), we should auto-win, not auto-lose. Not everyone can pull off mad ping-pong volleyball or wants to page-back to win at the fight scene with the most cheesy 'eevvil racist' over a cigarette brand confusion, haha.
Along those lines, I noticed a lot of passive aggressive text when choosing the 'dominant' option; As if the dev was wanting us to feel guilty. That's fine, but it seems like it would work better if it was the 'evil' route rather than choosing a D/s relationship (expressed as 'Alpha/Chad' in thoughts and sub role for the woman), which isn't necessarily exploitative (though that seems to be the theme presented often herein). An odd way to play it out, IMO.
Just a few thoughts. Enjoyable VN. I wish you good fortune.
One thing that made me laugh and just took me right out of the story was the 'punch a nazi' stuff at the quick-e-mart. I get it, creators live out their fantasies in their stories but damn that was so painfully corny and unbelievable. Up for lamest fake villain this year. But you do you. Haha.
I found the mini-games to be reasonable in difficulty but if you have an option for us to skip them (which is smart since most of us don't enjoy mini-games), we should auto-win, not auto-lose. Not everyone can pull off mad ping-pong volleyball or wants to page-back to win at the fight scene with the most cheesy 'eevvil racist' over a cigarette brand confusion, haha.
Along those lines, I noticed a lot of passive aggressive text when choosing the 'dominant' option; As if the dev was wanting us to feel guilty. That's fine, but it seems like it would work better if it was the 'evil' route rather than choosing a D/s relationship (expressed as 'Alpha/Chad' in thoughts and sub role for the woman), which isn't necessarily exploitative (though that seems to be the theme presented often herein). An odd way to play it out, IMO.
Just a few thoughts. Enjoyable VN. I wish you good fortune.