VN Ren'Py Abandoned Bargain of Power [Ch.1 v0.1] [Celestial Being]

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Chris2041

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Celes Being said:
Yes. As said before, the MC being how he is now is something that will change through the player's choice. Either keeping him how he is or change that and make him grow through tough situations is all up to you. If an MC is strong from the start, then there is no growth in character.
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If you people know how to write a good underdog history could be really cool .
But one thing is making he a underdog one that isnt in the best place but can upgrade and other start as ultra loser really dislikeable person that no one wants to play and want to kill himself and change whit another more likeable character also it dosent help that is having a NTR path are we sure this is a character is gonna get better or is one path gonna get more love than other it already happens a lot and im really tired of all games have to be for everyone whit every kink and ends being more bland each path that if the game only focus on one
Anyway good luck dev
 
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Ser Lordypants said:
These people don't care about character growth. Every new thread has to deal with this. If they can't self insert as gigachad and bang all the stacys in a world where every other male is 5'4 with a micropenis, a flood of tears will ensue. It'll be over soon enough.

I think the real issue here is her botched bbl. The morph sliders could use some tweaking. Unless you truly like the way it looks. Then keep it and do your thing I guess.
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Yeah because for a story to have growth you have to start at the very bottom of course you have to be the worst loser and more patetic guy in the city you cant be a more normal guy that has his flaws and you keep upgrading betwen the history no you have to be in the very trilled high school beig humiliated by the bully and everyone have to laught at you it isnt any other way ultra loser and lets see 5 updates of MC being insecure and humiliated by everyone then when you finally get to see when MC starts growing a backbone pum game abandoned it happens to me more times that i care to admit but it happens a lot
 
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Chris2041 said:
If you people know how to write a good underdog history could be really cool .
But one thing is making he a underdog one that isnt in the best place but can upgrade and other start as ultra loser really dislikeable person that no one wants to play and want to kill himself and change whit another more likeable character also it dosent help that is having a NTR path are we sure this is a character is gonna get better or is one path gonna get more love than other it already happens a lot and im really tired of all games have to be for everyone whit every kink and ends being more bland each path that if the game only focus on one
Anyway good luck dev
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The MC had a lot of problems when he was young. So he has a lot of flaws. Also, his mental health is not good right now, right after the move he and Hannah are going through. So, expect some negative thoughts from him. But that all will change when the story is shown in its glory. But I do understand that it's tough to trust a game that has both red flags. All I say is give the story some time to progress and for the MC to settle down in his new house.
 
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Celes Being said:
The MC had a lot of problems when he was young. So he has a lot of flaws. Also, his mental health is not good right now, right after the move he and Hannah are going through. So, expect some negative thoughts from him. But that all will change when the story is shown in its glory. But I do understand that it's tough to trust a game that has both red flags. All I say is give the story some time to progress and for the MC to settle down in his new house.
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Im gonna check one year later to see where it goes like you said 2 red flags and i already been burn a lot whit these types of MC
 
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Ok, what's the default relationship between the MC and Hannah the Milf?
his Mom or GF?
 
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Monty10 said:
Ok, what's the default relationship between the MC and Hannah the Milf?
his Mom or GF?
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Celes Being said:
To clear it out for you guys. You should name the relationship like most VNs do. Here, I give you an example:

Hannah is the Landlady (m)
Scarlett is the Neighbor (ant)
Elizabeth is the Neighbor's daughter (cuz)

When asked about the relationship with Hannah:

Go with Fam / ily.
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had me at incest, then i seen the oversized asses of the them, bit of a turn off, so i hope you can chose to not have relations with them.
 
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hsehsing said:
Can you clarify what type of NTR will be there?
And how much of the focus will be on NTR path?
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It will be a drama aspect that has a lot of pain and suffering that the characters go through, mainly the relationship between Hannah and the MC.
It won't be the main focus of the game. Small scenes here and there.
 
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SonsOfLiberty said:
NOTE: The game has an 280MB WAV file, that is why it is so big :ROFLMAO:
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WTF? I get using WAV as an original source file but what kind of fool actually ships it as part of the software package unless it's less than 5 seconds long. That said I seem to recall WAV works out to something like 10MB per minute so I am curious as to what this half hour WAV is.
 
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Saint Blackmoor said:
View attachment 4970064 Thanks for the warning. Did you appoint yourself the harbinger of doom, or were you elected? :sneaky:
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You are most welcome. And the fact that you got so butthurt by some random guy's post on a pirate porn site that you took the time to quote and reply makes me think that "harbinger of doom" might be an understatement here, for your mental health of course, the title by the way only introduced by you so there's your answer about that.

And considering i have no interest in turning this into a debate because i have no interest in this vn whatsoever, consider this my final post on this thread and quote this to raise your victory flag or whatever it is that makes you feel better. It's ok, enjoy man.
 
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