VN Ren'Py Abandoned Bargain of Power [Ch.1 v0.1] [Celestial Being]

[Woodstock_1983]

Wait, shouldn't it say either Your friend or Your Aunt if you made Scarlett your Aunt? She's not my Scarlett lol.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

I'm only trying to help but what does many much mean?

 

[Woodstock_1983]

Sorry, I'm a very slow reader. Is there away to slow these messages down or just have it read to us? I spent most of my time reading these messages instead of playing the game.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

You are most welcome. And the fact that you got so butthurt by some random guy's post on a pirate porn site that you took the time to quote and reply makes me think that "harbinger of doom" might be an understatement here, for your mental health of course, the title by the way only introduced by you so there's your answer about that.

And considering i have no interest in turning this into a debate because i have no interest in this vn whatsoever, consider this my final post on this thread and quote this to raise your victory flag or whatever it is that makes you feel better. It's ok, enjoy man.

I'm not butthurt (how can I be? ), rather I think you are for being called out for making a totally useless comment, you know NOBODY cares if you're going to stick around, even you don't care when you see other meatheads saying the same thing.

Question: What's the point in saying "I'm not sticking around" but to troll?

I believe in Karma. And Karma can be a bitch.

 

[Woodstock_1983]

One other thing. Whoever chose that song in the title screen chose the perfect song so far.

 

[Celes Being]

Wait, shouldn't it say either Your friend or Your Aunt if you made Scarlett your Aunt? She's not my Scarlett lol. View attachment 4976313

She can be whatever you want her to be. But, yes, you're right. It's fixed. Thank you.

I'm only trying to help but what does many much mean? View attachment 4976333

Fixed. Thank you. It's supposed to read "You have no idea how much I wanted to meet you".

Sorry, I'm a very slow reader. Is there away to slow these messages down or just have it read to us? I spent most of my time reading these messages instead of playing the game.

Hmm, I coded it to pause for 10 seconds after each text, while the last text takes 15 seconds. But if it's too fast for you, you can take a screenshot. Here I will attach them for you.

 

[Celes Being]

Also, from the main photo, I'm getting a theme of either superpowers or a magic theme. I love either but I just was curious lol.

You'll get your answer when Ch2 comes out.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

I like the game. The mom is beautiful and she is very sweet.

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[Celes Being]

I like the game. The mom is beautiful and she is very sweet.

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Fixed. Thank you.

 

[nedret]

What is the name of the song playing in the game menu please?

 

[Rockero_69]

3DCG, Adventure, Animated, Big Ass, Big Tits, Fantasy, Incest, Male Protagonist, MILF, POV, Virgin.
Planned Tags:
Anal Sex, Blackmail, Creampie, Groping, Group Sex, Combat, Humiliation, Interracial, Male Domination, Multiple Endings, Multiple Penetration, Netorare (Avoidable), Oral Sex, Sexual Harassment, Spanking, Stripping, Titfuck, Vaginal Sex.

Hi DEV Celes Being , All good and thanks for taking the time to put present and planned labels. While I hate NTR, it's good that it's avoidable. With all that said, the key question here is:
Where is the key to happiness, where is the MC's dream of becoming a Pokémon master and catching and impregnating them all (hahaha) in short where is the HAREM tag?

Greetings and lucky DEV.

 

[Celes Being]

Hi DEV Celes Being , All good and thanks for taking the time to put present and planned labels. While I hate NTR, it's good that it's avoidable. With all that said, the key question here is:
Where is the key to happiness, where is the MC's dream of becoming a Pokémon master and catching and impregnating them all (hahaha) in short where is the HAREM tag?

Greetings and lucky DEV.

Hello, thanks for the kind words. I'm seriously surprised a lot of people are asking about the harem tag, but still, I understand them. As of right now, Harem is on the list of things to be added to the game, but it's still too early for it to be present in the tags. So, putting it there right now, when the first chapter has just been released, seems too quick. But rest assured, it will be present later when the game reaches a certain point. Right now, it's about increasing love and lust stats. Also, it's about building trust between characters the MC has just met.

 

[Celes Being]

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Hey everyone!
I’m excited to let you know that production for Chapter 2 is officially underway!

While Chapter 1 served as an introduction, setting the tone, characters, and giving you a feel for the world. Chapter 2 is where things start to unfold. Expect a shift in pace and tone: the content will be more substantial, emotional, and rich in meaningful choices.

This is the true beginning of the story, where secrets surface, relationships evolve, and the real plot starts to take shape.

Thank you so much for your continued support. Your encouragement means everything and helps bring this vision to life. Stay tuned for sneak peeks and updates along the way!

• Celestial Being.

 

[smarty101]

sorry i have not looked at all the comments here, ive just played for 5 minutes and i see some mistakes in your script, first one that comes to mind is when you go to scarlets house, and the MC is thinking, it says you were treated as an outcast even by your own "WARD" your 18 years old how can someone over twice your age be your ward?? even scarlett's kids call Hannah their ward?? that does not make any sense

 

[Celes Being]

sorry i have not looked at all the comments here, ive just played for 5 minutes and i see some mistakes in your script, first one that comes to mind is when you go to scarlets house, and the MC is thinking, it says you were treated as an outcast even by your own "WARD" your 18 years old how can someone over twice your age be your ward?? even scarlett's kids call Hannah their ward?? that does not make any sense

There is no name ward in the game. Hannah is, by default, your friend, or whatever label you give her when the game starts.

 

[odbpm]

hate ntr, read the comments and was happy to see its avoidable, buuut then is see a few point its just another one where the mc is weak and pathetic, might aswell just stick to ntr if thats the case

 

[Celes Being]

hate ntr, read the comments and was happy to see its avoidable, buuut then is see a few point its just another one where the mc is weak and pathetic, might aswell just stick to ntr if thats the case

The MC is not weak per se, He is just undecisive about things. With more buildup, he will change if you allow him to. Everything is about choices in this game. I plan to make this game heavy choice based for people to choose options they prefer.

 

[smarty101]

There is no name ward in the game. Hannah is, by default, your friend, or whatever label you give her when the game starts.

I have hannah as my Cretaker and i am her ward, and this is what i get when outside scarletts house

 

[Celes Being]

I have hannah as my Cretaker and i am her ward, and this is what i get when outside scarletts house

It's the relationship you choose early in the plane. When the game asks you "What's your relationship with her?". There's no word "ward" in all of Chapter1 (I checked whole script).
Edit: I see now. You should replace ward with Fam / ily

 

[Celes Being]

You can use this to guide you.

To clear it out for you guys. You should name the relationship like most VNs do. Here, I give you an example:

Hannah is the Landlady (m)
Scarlett is the Neighbor (ant)
Elizabeth is the Neighbor's daughter (cuz)

When asked about the relationship with Hannah:

Go with Fam / ily.