Bea is my favorite, then Byerly. Some very witty stuff, but also some pretty sloppy stuff. Spelling, syntax, general grammar, etc. I mean, if you're going to have virtually ALL your characters be clever and articulate -- you have GOT to proofread your stuff better! I'll attach a small example:
I'm pretty sure you meant "revelation" here. And there's a lot of that throughout.
I really like the game, for the most part. I do wish Bea hadn't started on the LGBTQXL5 stuff, and I worry that credibility may be hurt if it turns out that MC is supposed to have reached puberty by age 8 -- but all in all, an enjoyable time. Thanks dev!