the only issue i have with the whole thing is seeing the girls trying to swallow that thing, its funny to see the snake jaw thing lol, other than that i would suggest the following to make the game a bit more engaging:
A-add Jose's side when getting the pictures of the girls, the whole point of the game is beating the other guy to it, i think seeing his reaction when you achieve something he hasnt should be included (specially when you finally get to do his mom, that would be epic)
B-variety of pictures of defeat, the defeat pictures you get from the girls are alright, but you only get about three different posses for all 24 girls, either Jose is a one trick pony or the dev just saved time not figuring better posses (i know it's already been said that Jose is not the focus of the game, but still getting more from his side of the game would improve the inmmersion of the game)
C-improve argument a little bit, the idea is fairly simple, two guys, a bunch of chicks, let the fuckfest begin,that part is alright with me, but the part i thinks need improvement is the reason behind it, ok, two guys competing, Just to say "duh, i'm the biggest stud" seems too simple and stupid, even for two characters with more dicks than brains, add an endgame, something they both want, idk, like the winner get the losers mom, or the loser has to leave, something they both want to get or dont want the other to get.
D-once againt, depth, the characters are just way too simple, no emotional attachments whatsoever, they simply don't care other than plugging holes, like when you get the mom picture from Jose, it just says something along the lines of "damn you, you fucked my mom¡" and then...nothing...that's about it, c'mon, to make it more engaging you have to make them more believable, i very much doubt that if your worst enemy screwed your mom, you would only say a single phrase, and move on with it, at least have MC say something to his sister or his mom, warning them about Jose before he gets to them, or say something afterwards.
E-time constriction, i know the game is set to be a week in lenght, but it would be nice to add a two week or a month mode, to repeat your favorite girls (preferably inside the game, i kinda dislike having to exit the game to access a gallery, repeating scenes right from the game keeps the magic there in my opinion), or just to do it at your leisure, not having to worry about time-tables all that much.
I know i almost wrote a bible, but that's just how much i liked what we have so far, a great game, just hoping it gets even better.
Keep up the good work