VN - Ren'Py - Because I Love Her [Ep.1 P1] [The Typist]

Ntr route:
Another boring standard ntr story with a standard black antagonist. A weak mc who support and encourages his wife to cuck him. All females (like in almost every games) love exorbitant large cocks. The characters are quite bland and follow the standard western bbc ntr formula.

Love route:
The love route is the reason why i tried the game in the first place. I have to say im realy disappointed. The love route is quite lackluster and substantial smaller than the ntr route. The route seems to be only included to get more patreon money?

Music:
Seems to be included sometimes and sometimes not?

Renders:
The renders are quite good but didn't make up for everything else.

I didn't enjoy the game, my personal rating is 1 star. (If you think my 1 star rating is to harsh, so are most of the 5 star ratings on this site... so i only adapt ;-) )

Note:
If you are into cuckold, bland characters, a beta/weak mc and hints of raceplay, this is a game for you.
If you play the game for the love route , dont bother, just download the cg's somewhere.

Sorry, but what in the fuck happened to this? I remember trying this out when it was in its first 1-2 versions and thought it was actually quite decent. There seems to be no attempt at realism here any more, and that's a shame. What happened?

Went from realistic sharing/NTR game to silly fantasy game with no warning and no tags (at time of writing). I would not normally base a review so heavily on a thematical choice in a game as that is subjective whether it's good or bad. However this felt like a cheap bait and switch that really added nothing. For me it literally ruined the game.
Would have been 4 star but I have deducted 1 star for what I percieve to be a stupid, unnecessary and jarring "twist" and another for in my opinion an overall drop in quality and pacing.
Can be saved but for now it's a hard pass.

wtf is this? a joke?
ch.7 introduced a succubus? is this what a good ntr story should be about? a demon? how much did they really decide themselves, now with a demon that affected them, controlling them?
the writer couldn't come up with a better story? I thought this could be a good and quality love and/or ntr/sharing story. but now with that succubus its just ruined it all.

Feels like it's got some solid potential but is a bit jumbled at the moment.

So I like a lot of what's in there, the renders are solid and the models largely attractive and whatnot... but there are some oddities and that's what I'll focus on here, but I was into the game the following are why I've given it a 4 rather than a 5, I'm not saying it's a bad game by any stretch.

So the pacing is pretty lightspeed ... a super conservative girlfriend, and then pretty instantly gets slutty (this makes sense on the "lust" path to some degree given the supernatural stuff, but not on the "love" one)... or at one point she has a nightmare, and then instantly jumps to it being a haunted house and moves out - I mean maybe if you knew you were in a game or movie that'd be a rational response, but I it'd take a lot to convince me my house was actually possessed... or how your girl is supposed to come from a traditional background, which is why she's so repressed, but then on the first introduction of the mother and she's dressed crazily slutty for the party, the excuse of her thinking it'd be like something off the TV didn't really sell it.

Mainly my problem is that the way through the different paths just feels jumbled, I can't describe it better ... I think it needs a bit more padding and to be clearer and things, it's really hard to diagnose but it just doesn't hit you quite right as you're playing through.

I presume some moments are due to it being unfinished - like when the narrator tells me the next thing is an important choice so to save, but then the next decision there's only one item to pick (what if I just want to let the friend be in the pool and attend to my girlfriend) or maybe he meant the bit after that as that immediately leads into another decision and that one does change stuff up... and I think the 2 choices there are respond calmly or respond angrily - which doesn't really give you an indication that you're going to kiss the girl and choose her over your fiance... love is supposed to be them into you, lust them into others, but even with no love and her heavily into lust then your friend will pick you...

Also the sort of introduction conversation with the narrator is a bit cheesy.

Oh and it ended before I expected because this is chapter 5, at one point there's a screen telling you that you've started chapter 2, but I didn't see one from chapter 3, 4 or 5, haha ... I guess it's just update numbers but maybe remove the screen for chapter 2 then.

Down one route she can choose an old or young bartender ... turns out the young one has content the old one doesn't (I didn't realise until I looked at the walkthrough after a handful of playthroughs to see if I'd missed any of the different stuff) - it's not a big deal which dude it is so maybe save the effort having to make 2 versions of all that.

One concern of mine is that to really flesh out the story after where things are left off in the current content is going to be such a crazy amount of work as things can go down a ton of haywire paths, that it'll either take forever or need to be simplified and rushed... I do really like that there's so many paths though.

Buuuut, like I said most stuff here is solid and I'm very interested in the game, it just feels like it need to be ironed out a little (and I'm talking about the content that's in there atm) and then once that's built upon it could be really cool ... I'm interested to see how the supernatural stuff plays out, or how the fiance's friend will try to manipulate stuff later... but I did really enjoy it so I'll definitely check back in later and hope it's completed.

Review Ch. 5 (NTR update)

I generally don't prefer NTR games, but gave this one a try because of the nice renders.

I found out that you can actually avoid the NTR easily. On that path, you'll eventually need to choose between your fiancee and your childhood friend. Perhaps, in the future, there is a chance for a threesome, but not yet.

The gameplay is pretty good in my opinion. There is zero grind, the choices are mostly straightforward and make sense. There shouldn't be any unwelcome (NTR) surprises if you made the right choices. What I didn't really like though, is that the game seemingly blocks choices at key moments based on previous choices. This means that once you are locked into a certain path, you'll have to go for the entire ride.

Why 4 stars and not 5? Because although it's a solid game, it didn't really "catch" me to be honest. I'm not sure if it's my fault or the game's, but I think it's due to the characters being a bit bland, like other reviewers commented. Still, a solid game and well worth a try!

3/5 Stars
Reason to as why:
Ok, so don't get me wrong, this game has beauitful female characters, but there's just so much wrong in this game, for example the NTR route of the game, i get that it's supposed to be like the "cheating" path and all but it all just seems way too rushed rushed like how the MC's fiance gets all "horny" when you explain to her the dream that you had (where she gets fucked by the black guy) and then she goes to the gym which then leads her to go have a shower and then all of a sudden as if it was magic or some bullshit the black guy walks in on her, doesn't even say sorry or anything he just walks in and decides to fuck the MC's fiance without her having any issue with it whatsoever.. I mean, cmon.. surely I'm not the only one who laughed at how stupid that scene was..

Conclusion: If you're someone who likes NTR I'd either way suggest you avoid it in this game.. It's just not developed as good as it could have been, sadly.

Overall this game definitely holds a lot of potential and I personally do recommend you give this game a try.

Edit: I changed my mind, I give it a 2/5 simply because of how bad the NTR route of this game is, read the reviews below mine to get a more in depth detail on how bad it really is, in general what I'm trying to say is that the story feels so unrealistic and the NTR is terrible, the only good thing about this game I'd say is that the characters are pretty damn hot, oh and on top of everything that I said I'd also like to say that there should be more options to choose inbetween dialouge, like there's this one scene where (i forgot her name) this girl takes her top off completely revealing her boobies and the MC asks her something along the lines of "uhmm.. are you going to put your shirt back on" and I think she said something like "do I have to" and then I was like in my head *well no shit.. I'm soon to be married to my fiance therefore I don't want to see another girl naked* but nope.. the MC simply replies by saying "I suppose you're fine" Like bitch please.... no she's not fine.. I should be the one who decides whether it's fine for another woman to be naked infront of me or not

Please read: Don't hate if the grammar or spelling is bad, I wrote this as fast as possible, I didn't even read through it but yeah I just wanted to get my thoughs out to ya'll, probably no one's gonna read this but hey, whatever <3
Have a wonderful day you perverts <3

Amazing update, story is getting better and better. Probably now one of the best NTR games on this site. Really hope the Dev is able to hit his goal and start pumping out regular updates. Game has grown immensely from last year where to start we had minimal renders and no animations. Where now we have numerous high quality renders and multiple animations per update. The dev is still growing as a dev and it shows, he is listening to his fans and great at communication. Now if only more people were able to support him we would have monthly updates and the potential of this game being the best or one of the best NTR games on the site.

10/10 This is one of the best games of its kind (NTR).

There is great buildup in the storyline - not too fast and not too slow. The story is also not predictable (in a good way).

Female artwork awesome, especially Claire and Olivia. It's great you can select the name of some characters; wish more games allowed that.

This is what makes it a 10. There are some weaknesses as with all these games in continuity, dialogue, story, etc., but the NTR + Claire is worth it a hundred times over.

Future updates, the love/lust system is not too intuitive. Personally not too interested in the Jenni angle but is fine. An Olivia angle would be nice.

Another misuse of the NTR tag. This is willing cuckold. Hot wifing. Sharing. Etc.

The stats are convoluted. The two main girls have corruption and lust, but I still don't understand what exactly we are aiming for. The same stat means different things for the two girls. For the wife, corruption is pointing to the cuckold direction. So what if you want to corrupt her but keep her to yourself? Well there was one choice in a dialogue that moves all the corruption into love if you want to avoid encouraging her to get fucked by others. So whats going on with the stats after that?
**Edit: After I posted this I remembered there was a dream sequence early on that might have been the on/off function for "NTR" stuff. I am not sure if thats true though because I only did one playthrough.

For the best friend Jenni, corruption looks like it leads to you cheating with her on your wife, with possibly threesome and stuff later. Love I have no idea what it does. This girl already likes you but the choices that increase love are the ones where you ignore her and try not to cheat on your wife which leaves Jenni disappointed.

1) Horrible pathing
2) Not true NTR
3) Uninspired dialogue
4) Mediocre renders
5) Stop using Liam in these roles plz.

Meh...

edit2: OK after reflecting for a couple minutes again, I may have been harsh about the pathing issues. Reading the dev notes on first post, I suppose what happens is your early choices in the dream sequence and the choice wife makes the first time at the gym will turn NTR on or off. Also, I might have also been harsh on the NTR tag misuse because this site doesn't have cuckold or hot wifing tags (come on F95zone, lets distinguish NTR and cuckold. Its very different).

Added one star to the review since the dev is obviously going for the willing cuckold narrative but that tag doesn't exist. He should clarify on dev notes and overview that it is this type of "NTR" though.

I kinda knew what I was expecting early on from this game but I said "What the hell?" anyway. First and foremost the characters are ok, with the exception of Jenni and her red haired friend(Forgot her name). Other than that this characters aren't memorable whatsoever.

Like seriously I knew how predictable this game would be when I first saw the Liam, the typical Black guy who conveniently shows up in almost every game and cucks everyone.

My real gripe is with these Devs who try to reel in other crowds from different genre's by saying one thing and doing another. For instance, there are several games on this site that feature these "Love Routes" and "NTR routes". The problem there is majority of those games are pro NTR, there's always far more , detailed and well thought out content on the NTR paths whereas the "Love" paths come off as generic and bland. It's like the Devs put more way more time and effort in perfecting the cuck routes and it shows up doing the updates.

My true problem with these type of games is that there's the same recycled material over and over again.

"Woman was a sweet, kind, ordinary woman and housewife/girlfriend until ONE DAY... she saw another man's COCK and turned into a mindless, insatiable slut".

"The MC is hung but nooooooo she wants to fuck a guy with a 18 inch missile between his legs, while the MC looks on.

draws (cg): good... but could be better.

story: easy to follow.

characters: i already forget them.

gameplay: meh, is ok.

music: is ok.

scenes (erotic ones): they are really hot.


conclussion: the story is simple (almost dull) the characters are forgettable, the choices are kinda useless
( i feel this could be a movie and that would work better)
but it works, at least for a while.


psdt: i made this rewiev on chapter 4.

10/10...

I really have to do the review of this game, because I think that this is the best game that I have played here at F95zone alongside with Alansya Chrorincles. This is my first review, and what can I Say?

The game is awesome, it has new types of showing how amazing can be NTR, CUCKING, and this type od fetishes The renders are just awesome, the characters, the dialogues, the decisions, everything, is perfect. And the story is not the typical girl getting corrupted as always, it is really a deep one, and the author shows it perfectly (SPOILER: the never have i ever scenes are 11/10 hope you can enjoy it).

Waiting for the new updates

Writing is just terrible. No matter your choices, dialogues stay the same and force you on a single path. I liked the background story and characters but that choice in the writing is pretty retarded and dumb and makes your choices insignificant.

PROS
- Good renders.

CONS
- The most incoherent story I've ever seen on F95zone.
- Music is terrible, lower the volume asap.
- The blowjobs look like the dick is smashing into the top teeth of the women, it's terrible.
- I'm a fan of ntr and cuckold content, but none of this game is a turn on. The developer should go read some ntr & cuck stories on the web to learn how to write this kind of content.
- I see too many developers make the mistake of adding too many characters. Don't add too many characters unless you're a master writer. Start simple with a main protagonist, supporting character and an antagonist, that's it. Once you master that, then add maybe one more supporting character.

Spoiler Alert.

I was actually excited about this game after reading the reviews about it. They were love/hate witch in my book means that the story delivers strong emotions.
If you´re looking for WTF you got it here but it is the "makes no sense" kind.
The games best scenes are strong. Good cgi, good porn and nicely written. They just dont make any sense in sthe story. Youre BF is a prude never been kissed kind of girl: a girl doesn't go from that to BJs in a public restroom. Just because you say to your GF that its ok if she looked at another guy, shes not gonna let him penetrate her in a communal shower (really mixed showers in a gym?). A girls "lets do something wild" idea inst BJs in glory-holes... And then the gun, the hospital scene... Don´t get me wrong i think its good ideas but you need build up, you need corruption... You see corruption as a stat in porn games but it´s a real thing.. You don´t go from zero to cum showers in a night. What about the GF and BF? They are too damn inocent. Is this a hentai fantasy? I´m lost.
Some games seem long with a lot of recycled images but when something happens you know why. Just a thought.
I see potential here. Let´s see if the Typist realizes it.

Besides the renders, i can't find anything good about this game. Just an incoherent mess and actions that make absolutely no sense.

"OMG, I like him so much!" - "I like you too and i'm interested in you romantically, but Abigail is such a lovely name." - " I can't believe you just said that! Now I'm gonna blow this guy i just met, despite the fact that i was just described as a shy virgin".... basically.

In my opinion the real NTR is that someone you love have a feeling for another one but not you. That's not you done something wrong. Just the girl you love have a crush on the other even if you're already the couple. That's why I love the ending of Chapter 3 love route. It crushed my heart but I felt bliss at the same time. That's the best NTR game that I like most. I will be pleased to see in future the fiancee can't be satisfied with the love she already had so she cheat on you. It will be the best suffering and pleasure to see that Claire the fiancee and Jenni the best friend have sex with another men when you chose to be faithful.

PS: Yeah... The behavior of main characters including John and Jenni in NTR route was quite ridiculous... shooting somebody for no reason... sucking a stranger's cock just for jealousy... That's really out of John's and Jenni's character...

Everyone who likes a good story and believeable characters. Stay away from this game. They need a good amount of rework.

The renders are good, so if you just want to fap on some pics, this game is something for you.

Pros:
- Renders

Cons:
- Unbelievable characters.
- Cliché story over 9000 (The bad black man who forces you into stuff.)
- No real story build up. (From shy to sucking cock in a few days.)
- Typos, but this can happen.
- 3 to 4 months for a short update (This point does not affect the review.)

I'm going to give 2 stars because of the renders.
I hope the dev is going to rework the story, then I'm going to change this review.

This is probably the best NTR game out there... which is, unfortunately, not to say that it's a good game in it's own. While the cuckold part of the game is pretty well done, with both parties more or less willing to explore the fetish, the other notable plus being good renders, the game lacks in pretty much any other field.

The corruption side of the game is ridiculous, with the MC's GF transforming from a loving, faithful and rather shy person, to a whore deepthroating the dude she saw in a gym in a spawn of a day. I know you're allowed to take liberties with logic since it's a game, but come on. The game also offers you an illusion of choice - you can choose between going full cuck, normal, fetish free path, and something in between.

But if you wanted to escape the fetish part of the game, you're in for a surprise as the game downright ignores your choices and follows the NTR storyline anyway, which I suppose is not that big of a deal, since no one actually plays these games for the non-fetish content, and it's not like the game has any story capable of carrying it outside of the fetishes it offers.
As I said earlier, the game also offers a middle path with the couple staying in the fantasy part of cuckolding, steering more towards exhibitionism, path I personally was pretty excited about, but as of the current version it has a rather bitter ending, with MC underperforming and leaving his GF unsatisfied, which will probably lead to the complete NTR path anyway, to my dismay.

In summary, the game offers pretty good cuckold content but nothing above that. If NTR is your cup of tea, you'll probably enjoy the game, if not - you won't find anything worthwhile here.