VN - Ren'Py - Because I Love Her [Ep.1 P1] [The Typist]

This is my Because i love her review, version 2.1(chapter 1 and 2), based in my experience with visual novels

1 – Graphics(9/10): Good art design, Female characters have good proportions and male characters have good looking, but penis size is unrealistic that's why i take one point.
2 – Gameplay(7,5/10): Simple gameplay, you just decide which route(love or lust) you want to walk, through the options showed between the dialogues, but have some bugs in the love route that makes the narrative confuse
3 – Script(8/10): A nice script with good dialogues and an interesting plot about the MC testing the boundaries of your fiancee and discovering if he really wants to marry her or not(maybe he losing her or not). I take two points because the corruption of Claire is too fast, even i knowing she has own fantasies, the script presented her as a shy person, so i think she opened her mind a little too fast. So i think the pace needs to be work on it
4 – Sex Scenes(8/10): Great sex scenes themselves, mainly the narration showing the female characters thoughts in the scene, but because the fast pace, the impact is low and it just left good faps

Final(8.1/10): Good game with strong potential, but gameplay needs fixing and the story pace needs work too to not look like an artificial or forced scene.

I'm a fan of NTR and this game revolves around it. The characters are believable and the narrative constantly leaves the imagination running with what will happen next. Everything you think will happen does happen and more. If NTR is the goal 10/10!

Rewriting my review just based on how the game has been going in the past year. This had incredible promise to be one of the better NTR/cheating games on the site, with an interesting story and beautiful models. Unfortunately, there has been so much inconsistency with the updates, an obvious lack of vision from the dev, and poor execution that I think it should just be avoided for now.

I think this is a great starting point for the game
-good graphics ,plot and script
-fan of NTR as a main focus of the game
-i hope for the future the NTR/Cuckold keep focusing on both protagonists' POV as it's been so far in the 1st chapter
-models look good but i think jenni looks weird in some poses
really looking forward to more

This is one of the most solid ntr games I've seen thusfar. eh I really like the humor involved, and the choices thusfar are pretty neat. really appeals to my tastes overall.

looking forward to seeing what more comes of this, I have high hopes.

It is one of the rare NTR/cuckold games - that's why I gave 5 stars. Graphics is not ideal but pretty good. Author promised to update it fast and regularly. Story is not perfect either but I hope for the best.

This game is awful the reason why I hate NTR is it so often poorly done. For example the roommate who is in love with the MC supposedly forever gets irritated because a waitress hits on you then sucks a random dude in the washroom despite being a virgin.

How is that remotely believable? Not even in pornland does that make any logical sense. Then the GF gets excited because of rando black man (of course) and instead of blushing and being shy acts like a slut and flashes him. Then later enters a shower and masturbates,. Just awful like the game doesn't have to be shakespeare but don't insult my intelligence with this garbage by pretending these women are shy wallflowers in love with the MC.

Literally the MC is supposed to be surrounded by delicate flowers but instead they are just sluts. You literally get the impression if you say one wrong thing these sluts will sleep with the nearest guy next to them with zero buildup. That isn't NTR that's just them being whores. Like is the character supposed to even be upset? Plus there is zero non NTR content written it basically just skips to next scene.

1/5

This game really fell into a poor path. Also failing to provide much choice in later updates. On rails and not a very entertaining train ride.. Shame because it was such a great start. Possible save, it's still early days, but damn the last update was a huge let down and took a long time.

The demo was fun to play. Very beautiful characters and dialogues. I can see where this game is going with more choices being implemanted. The rendering is good aswell. Maybe a bit short for now, but the story could end up being very good

My Update rating of Because I Love Her [Love Update] is;

Pros:
+ Great Renders
+ Good Script
+ had a nice Plot
+ Makes you want to play for hours
+ Different Paths (for those not into NTR)
+ Fast Pace in the Game (No Bullshit)

Cons:
-None

Conclusion:
This love update was great,I,m glade i didnt have to see the scene again where The guys ends getting shot, would have love to see all four getting it on in the bedroom, and not that short scene in the living room.
Overall a great Game with every bit worth the download.
Still 5 stars in my book.

it seems like a really good project, if it delivers on what the demo seems to go for, it will be a really good swinging/ntr/vanilla game.

the dialogue starts funny and wallbreaks a lot so if you don't tale it too seriously (as you should a renpy h-game) the better.

Review Version: V1.0 DEMO

art 7/10: Not a bad start and I actually like it. It's a standard static background with moving character & it works, but since the dev choose this kind of style it need a lot more facial expressions than other formats, the truth or dare game was a lot better that the gym scene that seemed a little static. We already seen the characters in several games, but they are hot so, who F. cares?:closedtongue: Another thing that i think it miss is a little animation, even the 2/3 images sequence, that the static background kind of VN desperately asks for it.


story 7/10: it is suppose to be a 6/10 kind of story you rich, move to new city, new friends yada yada yada, we already read it 100000000000000 times but a +1 cause the swinging ntr sharing environment (plus i had a boner so i know it's working). But I have some complaining to make both story and writing wise. First, the thinking stuff, i never know who is thinking till i read what it sais.

Second I think is a lot better to know the personality of a character through scenes not from a narrator and such
Third and last but not least, and this one is purely personal, it's kind of weird to start "swing" at 23, it feels kind of unnatural, if it was something between 28 to 33 will be more plausable. if i think about them so young i see this in my mindokerFace:


Sound 0/10: Just farts, but that's probably me or the doggo


Overall 7/10: Nice start, it's a little short for a demo but, it's not the usual "one dick to rule them all" kinda of game :eazyHype: and it can go into depth, from your personal harem to your personal nightmare & anything in between. Good luck and good work to the dev. I definitely want to see more of it & hope to see it soon.