- Mar 16, 2018
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that was the 1st version. it was a trainwreck, as well v.2 too, hopefully, 3x's a charm.
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Oh, I understand it was the first version. I had just wanted to have a Jinny route since I read comments here that the game had "finished" in 1.0 and it looks like Jinny was completely cut outside a cameo in this new version (real shame, that) so I went to check it out. Disappointed was an understatement. Zoey seems to be filling that role now, but it isn't the same.
The latest version is a fair bit better as far as story construction, though I didn't think the original one I didn't think was actually that bad leading up to the new apartment and the pool party that went nowhere. Once the succubus showed up it jumped off a cliff. I hope that supernatural angle is done with in this new version.
- Nov 18, 2018
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I feel like, the Dev has great potential for ideas and does a great job with the renders, but needs a ghost writer to actually handle writing out the scenes to make the people and situations actually fit together and make any kind of sense.
As it is, every scene is too short. While at the same time progress is too slow until suddenly it isn't, then it slows down again.
Like making out with Zoey in front of Claire. That scene takes the game from 0 to 100... then suddenly he cums after she barely touches him and you feel like an idiot. Then the game slows back down again, but scenes are all really short again.
The whole thing with the neighbors barely makes sense. I mean, are you trying to do some "Rear Window" type of situation? If they weren't part of the game it would actually be better. Either that, or their situation needs to get rewritten. Then the game kicks it back up to 100 again by having this lunch between Zoey and Marie like it's totally normal to go out to lunch with a neighbor you've met once after just being scared shitless the night before by the husband...
I just feel like every sequence of this game has some part of it that makes it feel dumb or not totally thought out.
Like Gwen. Barista... and stalker apparently, who found your number and invited you to her place... to have a 2 minute conversation. While you, a married man, go to a woman's place who your wife has never met and act like it's perfectly normal.
Or the Boss (her name escapes me) who upon your second meeting seduces you. And you still have no idea how much money you're making for this blog, it still hasn't come up. Which btw, this is the dumbest idea for a job I have ever seen and has literally nothing to do with "Coding" like you originally said.
The 3 somehow live in this great house... and seem to be mooching off Claire and Zoey's mom... That just alone is dumb as shit and badly written...
As it is, every scene is too short. While at the same time progress is too slow until suddenly it isn't, then it slows down again.
Like making out with Zoey in front of Claire. That scene takes the game from 0 to 100... then suddenly he cums after she barely touches him and you feel like an idiot. Then the game slows back down again, but scenes are all really short again.
The whole thing with the neighbors barely makes sense. I mean, are you trying to do some "Rear Window" type of situation? If they weren't part of the game it would actually be better. Either that, or their situation needs to get rewritten. Then the game kicks it back up to 100 again by having this lunch between Zoey and Marie like it's totally normal to go out to lunch with a neighbor you've met once after just being scared shitless the night before by the husband...
I just feel like every sequence of this game has some part of it that makes it feel dumb or not totally thought out.
Like Gwen. Barista... and stalker apparently, who found your number and invited you to her place... to have a 2 minute conversation. While you, a married man, go to a woman's place who your wife has never met and act like it's perfectly normal.
Or the Boss (her name escapes me) who upon your second meeting seduces you. And you still have no idea how much money you're making for this blog, it still hasn't come up. Which btw, this is the dumbest idea for a job I have ever seen and has literally nothing to do with "Coding" like you originally said.
The 3 somehow live in this great house... and seem to be mooching off Claire and Zoey's mom... That just alone is dumb as shit and badly written...
- Oct 19, 2017
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I like the idea of Zoe corrupting herself to appeal to MCs fantasy. Looking forward to more of that.
- May 16, 2019
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The cuckquean scene, I could kinda accept it. All 3 were drunk as fuck; a perfect excuse for Claire to just blurt out her desire to experiment and Zoey to act upon her long-hidden feelings for John (default name for MC). John seducing Arora definitely comes out of nowhere though, with little to no setup.
It feels like the dev knew folks would be pissed if they didn't get enough sex scenes after a long ass wait, so he hastily created one with little thought put into it.
I dowloaded chapter 3 for mac, but after the ntr scene on the bridge nothing ne happened, its the same ending as chapter 2 had - did i do anything wrong?
- Mar 16, 2018
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Bruh, I gave this game a chance when I heard they restarted with no ntr (but from seeing the switch i guess there are some optional). Honestly, renders are great but the sex with Claire was literally a single image and premature ejaculation is pretty obvious thing MC has by now. I'm outta here.
- Dec 10, 2019
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Yes you did...
You didn't found this very well hidden "door" button in upper-right corner of gallery screen. 
- Oct 22, 2017
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For some time now there are more strict rules in place to prevent minors from getting in contact with content deemed not suitable.
Like OPTCThrowaway says, the problem is that Steam's age verification is not suited to ensure someone really is an adult beyond a doubt.
If I remember correctly, those new regulations make the provider solely responsible in case the system fails and there is a complaint.
Therefore instead of developing/implementing a system suitable for that task, they just tell everyone the content is prohibited.
- Sep 9, 2021
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I don't see anything different from the previous update or is it just me? what is new added?
ends where mc and zoey talk about the neighbors
ends where mc and zoey talk about the neighbors
- Sep 7, 2017
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When you finish that portion and get to the gallery click the door to the far rightI don't see anything different from the previous update or is it just me? what is new added?
ends where mc and zoey talk about the neighbors
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You're really asking if I'm a native English speaker because I made a couple typos? Who are you comparing me to? When I write a couple thousand words a quickly as I can, I tend to make a few mistakes here and there. I try and proof read as much as possible, but I tend to miss a few things when I'm looking at a few thousand lines. Also, in my code editor I do not have an auto correct function built in, so everything I type is written as is. But, I'll go back and the errors you caught because I am trying to be as clean as possible in my writing. When certain words come to mind on the fly like "Site" vs "Sight" I don't give it much thought I guess because typically this isn't a mistake I would think I'd make. However I guess it does slip past me.
Serious question, I'm assuming the premature ejaculation thing is only part of the NTR story line? Like it's the reason why the NTR happens? It can't be part of the vanilla route right?
- Jan 20, 2020
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I needed to be sure how to specifically give feedback on your spelling and grammar as well as your punctuation. If you weren't a native I'd give you more slack
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Something
Prince
Good
Name's
Orrr a job to keep you going?
Well, I'm convinced!
No buts
probably go with three "..." rather than "-"
wants
Zoey
"No it's not weird I promise... "
Whose
Zoey
I'm
attempted
I'm
"Aww fuck..."
can't
suspicious
Gwen
Again. Gwen
won't
were
clothing
Use third person. This isn't the MC
"Claire looks at herself in the mirror"
"Claire looks into the mirror and contemplates"
"Claire takes a second to put on the chains..."
"Claire takes a photo of herself in the chains for Max..."
"Claire finishes changing and heads out"
"I"
Zoey
Secret Canadian? "about"
too
Prince
Good
Name's
Orrr a job to keep you going?
Well, I'm convinced!
No buts
probably go with three "..." rather than "-"
wants
Zoey
"No it's not weird I promise... "
Whose
Zoey
I'm
attempted
I'm
"Aww fuck..."
can't
suspicious
Gwen
Again. Gwen
won't
were
clothing
Use third person. This isn't the MC
"Claire looks at herself in the mirror"
"Claire looks into the mirror and contemplates"
"Claire takes a second to put on the chains..."
"Claire takes a photo of herself in the chains for Max..."
"Claire finishes changing and heads out"
"I"
Zoey
Secret Canadian? "about"
too
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- Jun 6, 2018
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Considering we waited like a year for an update, this is entirely unacceptable. Dev had more than enough time to proofread.
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