Samuel Hidayat

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Use third person. This isn't the MC
"Claire looks at herself in the mirror"
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"Claire looks into the mirror and contemplates"
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"Claire takes a second to put on the chains..."
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"Claire takes a photo of herself in the chains for Max..."
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"Claire finishes changing and heads out"
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This is a multi protag game, so Claire is an MC too. 1st POV would be better than 2nd POV tho.
 

TheTypist

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New poll is up for the next 24 hours, please participate as I'll be finishing the script in the next 48 hours. Progress is moving extremely quick.
 

ozzo

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New poll is up for the next 24 hours, please participate as I'll be finishing the script in the next 48 hours. Progress is moving extremely quick.
Question about the Zoey NTR path, will she and Clair be with the same guy or will you go down the 'The adventures couple' path where there is a new dick every update?
 

TheTypist

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Question about the Zoey NTR path, will she and Clair be with the same guy or will you go down the 'The adventures couple' path where there is a new dick every update?
I have planned 3 separate males aside from the MC to be options in later updates. As things branch out and progress it'll allow the story to come together and make more sense with a tight nit group rather than a bunch of strangers all the time. It makes the writing aspect more fluid for me and planning is always better this way as far as it goes for me.
 

ozzo

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I have planned 3 separate males aside from the MC to be options in later updates. As things branch out and progress it'll allow the story to come together and make more sense with a tight nit group rather than a bunch of strangers all the time. It makes the writing aspect more fluid for me and planning is always better this way as far as it goes for me.
Will we have the option to get the sister to do the same guy at the same time?
 

ozzo

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Dude! Don't you want to have some mystery in the story? Patience, grasshopper.
The only mystery i am interested in when it comes to NTR is how we get to the sceens. The acctual sceens is what determines if i want to throw money to support a project or not, if its all 1 on 1 with random dudes or blow out gangbangs im not interested.
 

WuzzyFuzzy

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The only mystery i am interested in when it comes to NTR is how we get to the sceens. The acctual sceens is what determines if i want to throw money to support a project or not, if its all 1 on 1 with random dudes or blow out gangbangs im not interested.
Understood. But might be wise to send him a PM so the rest of us can play it with an open mind.
 
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