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Typing it out in a word processor with spell checker before doing the code would solve a lot of the easy ones.maybe ask someone to proofread the script
Typing it out in a word processor with spell checker before doing the code would solve a lot of the easy ones.maybe ask someone to proofread the script
People with standards care.Guys who gives a f about the script if you understand what he meant ? Give the man some breathing jeez
Blazer is correct. Blaiser doesn't even exist in any English dictionary.blaiser
This is a multi protag game, so Claire is an MC too. 1st POV would be better than 2nd POV tho.Use third person. This isn't the MC
"Claire looks at herself in the mirror"
"Claire looks into the mirror and contemplates"
"Claire takes a second to put on the chains..."
"Claire takes a photo of herself in the chains for Max..."
"Claire finishes changing and heads out"
Whoops. Somehow I became French. good catchBlazer is correct. Blaiser doesn't even exist in any English dictionary.
I learnt that afterwards. However in previous claire scenes he's used third person so needs to be consistent. As it is 99% of all game time is with MaleMCThis is a multi protag game, so Claire is an MC too. 1st POV would be better than 2nd POV tho.
Standards matter. If you want to be taken seriously you need to write correctly when making a game.Guys who gives a f about the script if you understand what he meant ? Give the man some breathing jeez
My condolences, but there's no cure for being French.Somehow I became French.
I only played vanilla part and he's a fast shooter there too.Serious question, I'm assuming the premature ejaculation thing is only part of the NTR story line? Like it's the reason why the NTR happens? It can't be part of the vanilla route right?
Question about the Zoey NTR path, will she and Clair be with the same guy or will you go down the 'The adventures couple' path where there is a new dick every update?New poll is up for the next 24 hours, please participate as I'll be finishing the script in the next 48 hours. Progress is moving extremely quick.
I have planned 3 separate males aside from the MC to be options in later updates. As things branch out and progress it'll allow the story to come together and make more sense with a tight nit group rather than a bunch of strangers all the time. It makes the writing aspect more fluid for me and planning is always better this way as far as it goes for me.Question about the Zoey NTR path, will she and Clair be with the same guy or will you go down the 'The adventures couple' path where there is a new dick every update?
Will we have the option to get the sister to do the same guy at the same time?I have planned 3 separate males aside from the MC to be options in later updates. As things branch out and progress it'll allow the story to come together and make more sense with a tight nit group rather than a bunch of strangers all the time. It makes the writing aspect more fluid for me and planning is always better this way as far as it goes for me.
Dude! Don't you want to have some mystery in the story? Patience, grasshopper.Will we have the option to get the sister to do the same guy at the same time?
The only mystery i am interested in when it comes to NTR is how we get to the sceens. The acctual sceens is what determines if i want to throw money to support a project or not, if its all 1 on 1 with random dudes or blow out gangbangs im not interested.Dude! Don't you want to have some mystery in the story? Patience, grasshopper.
Understood. But might be wise to send him a PM so the rest of us can play it with an open mind.The only mystery i am interested in when it comes to NTR is how we get to the sceens. The acctual sceens is what determines if i want to throw money to support a project or not, if its all 1 on 1 with random dudes or blow out gangbangs im not interested.