Review Version: V1.0 DEMO
art 7/10: Not a bad start and I actually like it. It's a standard static background with moving character & it works, but since the dev choose this kind of style it need a lot more facial expressions than other formats, the truth or dare game was a lot better that the gym scene that seemed a little static. We already seen the characters in several games, but they are hot so, who F. cares?:closedtongue: Another thing that i think it miss is a little animation, even the 2/3 images sequence, that the static background kind of VN desperately asks for it.
story 7/10: it is suppose to be a 6/10 kind of story you rich, move to new city, new friends yada yada yada, we already read it 100000000000000 times but a +1 cause the swinging ntr sharing environment (plus i had a boner so i know it's working). But I have some complaining to make both story and writing wise. First, the thinking stuff, i never know who is thinking till i read what it sais.
Second I think is a lot better to know the personality of a character through scenes not from a narrator and such
Third and last but not least, and this one is purely personal, it's kind of weird to start "swing" at 23, it feels kind of unnatural, if it was something between 28 to 33 will be more plausable. if i think about them so young i see this in my mind
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Sound 0/10: Just farts, but that's probably me or the doggo
Overall 7/10: Nice start, it's a little short for a demo but, it's not the usual "one dick to rule them all" kinda of game :eazyHype: and it can go into depth, from your personal harem to your personal nightmare & anything in between. Good luck and good work to the dev. I definitely want to see more of it & hope to see it soon.
art 7/10: Not a bad start and I actually like it. It's a standard static background with moving character & it works, but since the dev choose this kind of style it need a lot more facial expressions than other formats, the truth or dare game was a lot better that the gym scene that seemed a little static. We already seen the characters in several games, but they are hot so, who F. cares?:closedtongue: Another thing that i think it miss is a little animation, even the 2/3 images sequence, that the static background kind of VN desperately asks for it.
story 7/10: it is suppose to be a 6/10 kind of story you rich, move to new city, new friends yada yada yada, we already read it 100000000000000 times but a +1 cause the swinging ntr sharing environment (plus i had a boner so i know it's working). But I have some complaining to make both story and writing wise. First, the thinking stuff, i never know who is thinking till i read what it sais.
Second I think is a lot better to know the personality of a character through scenes not from a narrator and such
Third and last but not least, and this one is purely personal, it's kind of weird to start "swing" at 23, it feels kind of unnatural, if it was something between 28 to 33 will be more plausable. if i think about them so young i see this in my mind
okerFace:Sound 0/10: Just farts, but that's probably me or the doggo
Overall 7/10: Nice start, it's a little short for a demo but, it's not the usual "one dick to rule them all" kinda of game :eazyHype: and it can go into depth, from your personal harem to your personal nightmare & anything in between. Good luck and good work to the dev. I definitely want to see more of it & hope to see it soon.