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We’ll seeAmazing update, the only bad part is i'll have to wait a long time for the next NTR update
I just passed my goal on Patreon, which meant faster updates... we’ll see... might surprise you- Thread starter TheTypist
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I just passed my goal on Patreon, which meant faster updates... we’ll see... might surprise you
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I have a very clear idea
it’ll be something... you’ll see thank you btw! I do appreciate it. What I’m going with will not only further my initial plans, but it’ll be much easier to write longer, better scenes and still make a lot of sense as it develops further.
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If by Ashley you mean the main fiancé, you choose to give in and fuck her instead of holding back and not giving her what she wants
it should be pretty easy to get
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Outstanding Update!
Has anyone made any game and/or Claire signatures?
Has anyone made any game and/or Claire signatures?
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Hey Typist,
I really enjoy your game. Out of all of the NTR games on this site this one has the most potential, and the best written character interactions. That being said, your story really goes all over the place, and it can feel really disjointed.
So the start of this update was great. I really enjoyed the scenes of the MC and Claire in the morning, just the two of them discussing their comfort level, their limits, and their feelings. It feels like a very good, healthy foundation for an open relationship, and I find it really ironic that the "NTR update" is doing a better job of showing a loving couple than the "love update".
The pizza scene was great too, it flipped a cliche porn scenario, and by having Autumn ask about the MC instead planted the idea of Claire sharing him as well, which seems like it opens the possibility of the MC sleeping with Jenni with Claire's permission.
But the scene with Darryl did not work for me. It just didn't make sense in this context. First, Claire had said in the morning she wanted to take things slow, but then was suddenly in a hurry to cheat on the MC ? And even if she was too horny to help herself, she calls OLIVIA, not Darryl directly. When Olivia points out that it's 3 am and what could she possibly need Darryl for right now, Claire all but admits to her best friend she needs Daryl for a booty call. So to recap, she decides to cheat on her fiance in the spur of the moment, lets her best friend know, invites the other guy back to her place where her fiance could wake up and catch them at any moment. This whole encounter just seems out of character. It might work if this happened later on in the story, after more much more corruption, but to have it happen so quickly feels rushed. It almost feels like this whole scene would work better as a dream sequence, that Claire, in her aroused state, fingers herself while dreaming about inviting Darryl over in the middle of the night.
Speaking of dream sequences, the final section of the update really did not work for me either. The strange dream sequence was fine, and it was hardly the first one in the game. But the sudden inclusion of supernatural elements really feels out of place. All of the dreams so far seemed like they were just products of overactive horny imagination. The whole "this house is haunted" thing feels like it came completely out of left field. Worse, this threatens to overshadow the character interaction. The main drama of this part of the story should be how far should Claire and the MC go in their wild sexual experimentation, will they lose control of things. Instead all of the sudden now the story is "how will we get away from the poorly explain spooky house". It seems like a distraction.
These are just a few thoughts I had after this playing update. On the whole, I still really like your game and I'm excited to see what comes next.
I really enjoy your game. Out of all of the NTR games on this site this one has the most potential, and the best written character interactions. That being said, your story really goes all over the place, and it can feel really disjointed.
So the start of this update was great. I really enjoyed the scenes of the MC and Claire in the morning, just the two of them discussing their comfort level, their limits, and their feelings. It feels like a very good, healthy foundation for an open relationship, and I find it really ironic that the "NTR update" is doing a better job of showing a loving couple than the "love update".
The pizza scene was great too, it flipped a cliche porn scenario, and by having Autumn ask about the MC instead planted the idea of Claire sharing him as well, which seems like it opens the possibility of the MC sleeping with Jenni with Claire's permission.
But the scene with Darryl did not work for me. It just didn't make sense in this context. First, Claire had said in the morning she wanted to take things slow, but then was suddenly in a hurry to cheat on the MC ? And even if she was too horny to help herself, she calls OLIVIA, not Darryl directly. When Olivia points out that it's 3 am and what could she possibly need Darryl for right now, Claire all but admits to her best friend she needs Daryl for a booty call. So to recap, she decides to cheat on her fiance in the spur of the moment, lets her best friend know, invites the other guy back to her place where her fiance could wake up and catch them at any moment. This whole encounter just seems out of character. It might work if this happened later on in the story, after more much more corruption, but to have it happen so quickly feels rushed. It almost feels like this whole scene would work better as a dream sequence, that Claire, in her aroused state, fingers herself while dreaming about inviting Darryl over in the middle of the night.
Speaking of dream sequences, the final section of the update really did not work for me either. The strange dream sequence was fine, and it was hardly the first one in the game. But the sudden inclusion of supernatural elements really feels out of place. All of the dreams so far seemed like they were just products of overactive horny imagination. The whole "this house is haunted" thing feels like it came completely out of left field. Worse, this threatens to overshadow the character interaction. The main drama of this part of the story should be how far should Claire and the MC go in their wild sexual experimentation, will they lose control of things. Instead all of the sudden now the story is "how will we get away from the poorly explain spooky house". It seems like a distraction.
These are just a few thoughts I had after this playing update. On the whole, I still really like your game and I'm excited to see what comes next.
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There are 2 path in this update , break-point is at gym and janni's love point, lead to share Clair with Damon or Clair leave alone to the bar.
And Bar scene not completed yet, the old gentleman scene not in this update.
And Bar scene not completed yet, the old gentleman scene not in this update.
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I think "Claire" gets more gorgeous each update. I don't care how many guys she fucked, I'd still fall in love with her. Nice update, btw.
please add swinging and sharing threesome in the future please, i beg of you hahaha.
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chipsiup everything you said makes a LOT of sense and I see exactly where you’re coming from. Bare with me for the next few days, as I’ve got a lot of context coming in a few new ways. What you’re saying like I said makes sense. But from a developer perspective, I needed to give myself something that I can really, really put a lot of passion into that’ll open up a lot of story writing capabilities, and I can always fill in plot holes in a variety of ways that will make sense if it’s desperately needed, but what I’m really going for is that sudden click later down the road as to “Ohhhhh... THAT’S why THAT happened earlier, now it’s all coming together.”
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I’ve really tried to better everything I can
Thank you! I’ve definitely gotten a tiny bit better at it haha
i really love when Autumn said "well. do you share him too? then claire gets shock", sharing should be two way, if she gets fucked, he must also get fuck right? and hopefully they are always together when the share or swing.. relationship should be on equal footing hahaha. i love your game now TheTypist plus Claire, Olivia, Rose and that Autumn looks so FINE! so good looking that i forgot that this has NTR haha. great work and more content in the future sir, we will wait.
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Have you seen the new rose model? If you haven’t, I actually posted a poll on Patreon not long ago asking others if I should swap her out with a newer character model I believed looked more related to Claire, and they voted yes so in the next update all her renders will be redone with the new model so I can add in more of her. She just didn’t look right in my opinion, as I rushed her initial design when I was first making her.
These were the mockups I showed for the poll.
so this will be the new rose, completely redone to be more believable that she is Claire’s blood mother...
OMG! i want to see this soon, when i start my working again and have income again, i'll become a patron of yours, the old rose is hot imo, the new rose is muh more hotter and believable damn, you make great quality man great work sir
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If you’re on the ntr path, nope. If you’re on the love path, yes. There is a dream sequence that will be a big part of the future love updates that comes off as strong ntr, butttt, you can skip it easily as I have a warning right before it. Overall if you want a harem or romance game, I’d say it’s difficult to claim mine as a real romance game, not as of right now by any means. It’s definitely not a harem game either... but I’m being honest and transparent. No harm in trying it out
just to add to your collection of games. (I’m not the only one with over 1 TB of porn games, am I?) lol
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