Hey
TheTypist I love the art. I've played your previous iterations. You sure know how to make them look good.
There's some typos though. For example, at the beginning, "my names" should be "my name's".
2) during the character intro thingy at the beginning of the game, "Gwenn" is spelled with two Ns.
3) And "conversation" is misspelled as well.
4) When Damien tells his story about his girlfriend... there's an unnecessary 'we'
5) "Claire. you 'aks' - should be ask (during the Zoey/Claire game)
That's it, so far... I'm sure I'll find more, but no sweat...