Why don't people get that Zoey is in part 2? Can't they read?
Hey, people have to find something to complain about with this one...

BILH sucks so bad, they keep coming back and playing it...
Only time I dislike it is when the wife just shows a pic says what happen but you never get to see the scene from her POV.
I definitely understand that... As the reader, we generally want to see more, everything...
However, for cuckold/hotwife NTS, where the reader is "the MC", it's a very interesting story to not see everything.
That's what makes the sexting, the tease, so good. You're not seeing everything. You see only what Claire shows, and then tells you. You know only what the MC knows (for now). And in my opinion, is a really, really good way to tell a NTS/NTR story...
Any way...
The phone part is a small portion of the overall game and maybe a 1/3 of the update.
And in context, the sexting, teasing is very fitting for cuckold/hotwife NTS.
This didn't suddenly turn into another "phone" game.
Typist had Claire take photos on her phone in the original, and she had the thought of sending them, but didn't. So, this "phone"/sexting part now is Typist exploring a missed opportunity in the original for Claire to tease the MC even more. And the sexting is a really good tool, element of cuckold, hotwife NTS (if not over used). People have the right to not like it; the dramatic overreaction that this is now a "phone" game is just ridiculous.
Personally, I really, really like the sexting part. I think it's good. It could absolutely be better, but it is a great, useful addition to this story...
The "love" route is NO NTR, so there's no "love" route update or crossover here.
This is still "sharing". The degree of NTS-NTR depends on your choices...
Overall, the update is pretty good.
Could it be better? Probably, but by better, just needs more, which is coming in part 2...
I liked the Gwen stuff. I would have liked to see Claire more involved with the cam stuff, but it sounds like that's coming.
I would have liked to see the story paths go a little differently, depending on choice variations.
For instance, if the MC chooses to keep watching Gwen (cuckold +1) instead of closing, should have had the same "ending" where Claire closes the laptop... Not sure why it didn't, but it's not my story...

And of course, looking forward to more Zoey...
Can't wait for part 2. And looking forward to seeing the "complaining" after...
