From what I’ve played so far, the game is a bit of a grind. For a corruption game, that’s not necessarily a bad thing, but right now, I feel like I’m spending a lot of time checking the schedule and watching the clock to make sure I don’t miss trigger events.
While that is one gripe, my biggest gripe is working the cafe. I feel like I’m being trained to be a barista in RL. Dev, can you please make it so the character just makes the damn drink so I don’t have to search the internet to find out what goes in every coffee drink? Adding this grind to a game that already has a high ratio of grind to eroticism made me give up before my in-game character had done anything besides masturbate.
Lastly, I’m not convinced this really is a corruption game at all (maybe I just didn’t go far enough). Jasmine tells me to do things and I either jump on the bandwagon or don’t. i didn‘t see anything to compel me to take the corrupt path. It’s either the PC chooses to be a slut or not, and if you choose to be a slut, you’re just grinding to the next lewd event.
While it seems I’m just being critical, I do see a lot of promise in the ambition here. I fear this game may become too complicated and bugs will become more prevalent or storylines will end up contradicting each other. Hopefully you will view this as constructive criticism and have the ability/will to see this through successfully. Good luck!
I appreciate the detailed message you've shared, and thank you for writing this.
The coffee shop scenes were somewhat of placeholders, events that would make the player feel like they earned the new job. I'll rework these in a later update to include a hint somehow. I understand how it might be frustrating for some, and I am sorry that was your experience with it.
The corruption comes with stats, and as a start we cannot immediately become sluts. The games that give you the option to simply sleep with anyone are indeed not corruption games since the MC is already corrupted.
The eroticism is something that builds up, and that's what usually gives this kind of game the flair of corruption.
Further down the line, your MC has blocked off options based on how open or how much of a prude she is. I know people would rather sometimes dive right into the naughty bits, but exposing the world and the characters there is important for me to really set the tone. I often look for change as a highly appealing aspect of corruption, a before and after that simply reveals so much beauty and sexual energy.
The whole point of this game is for it to eventually become complicated, with the player having to make tough decisions of fidelity against depravity, but that comes at a later date.
Despite lowering the amount of grind as much as I possibly could without affecting gameplay, I still am faced with hard choices like the ones you present, where simply going to school and back might be too much sometimes. I'll see what I can do to make it better for you. Again, thank you for the comment, I truly appreciate the discourse.
