Rauko001 My advices to you:
1. A lot of people here are very rude, this site is full of trolls, my advise is to treat yourself as an important brand: respond to the comments politely everytime, even if those are rude, and learn to not paying attention to the hate, sarcastic and troll comments, those don't dictate the truth about your game.
2. The most of the players are very superficial, they want top models as characters. If you want your game to be more popular you need to incorporate that kind of girls. Although seeing more conventional and realistic looks can be refreshing for some people.
I see that you already has done renders of very hot girls. Maybe you could include some of them in the game.
3. The automatic skip bar inside the game has no purpose, it creates an unnecessary sense of urgency and it generates confussion, my advise is to remove it and let the player advance through the frames manually.
A clock bar could be useful in specific situations such as the player need to choose an option quickly. For example, when the character is running for someone and need to choose going left or right.
4. The long animations are no problem, despite of some people didn't like them, they actually increase the values of the game. Giving the option 'skip movie' is great, but that option should skip one animation at once, not all of them as happened in the blowjob scene. You should correct that.
5. The most of adult VN players prefer one single protagonist to have an inmersive experience: to feel like they are the main character. You could remain with your artistic vision like now. Or you could change to one main protagonist and small scenes of other characters from time to time, if you want more players and patrons.
6. Once your game is here, if you have certain success, leaks of the patreon versions of your game are inevitable, even the same week of a release. You should learn to live with that, although you could always ask the favor to not leak the game too early after a release.
7. Steam is a great place for profit, you should release the game there after having a significant amount of content, for example, one full season, something like 10 chapters. Or you could release a free demo first there, like 5 chapters, to get new patrons. Itch.io is a good site too. And oppaiman.com appears as a new option too. You should try to publish your game in all those sites.
8. Eventually make cross-promotions with other devs of similar amount of patrons (they promote your game in their patreon in exchange of you promoting theirs).
9. If you aren't very familiar with adult VNs, I think you should play
the DeLuca Family, as an example, that's the one I know that has a great reputation in the mob genre here. Ironically, it seems that it hasn't too many sexual scenes, I haven't played it yet.