VN Ren'Py Being a DIK [v0.10.1] [DrPinkCake]

[Dr.Slime]

Any words on the release time as well?

I have flight early tomorrow and probably won't be able able to play for the next few weeks.

Would to suck to miss it because of the different time zones after waiting for so long...

piece of advice don't come near this forum then until you finish the episode fully

 

[TimHawk]

What about Sage eager to fuck MC in a couch in front of everybody in the DIKs party? I think it's a fucking retarded scene.

It's not only about Chad; she's the daughter of the dean of the college and the teacher of "Gender studies", not to talk Tybalts' sister... And she wants to be known as the whore of the campus? Does an intelligent chick like Sage, in her position on campus, want to have that kind of reputation? What would their parents say to her? DPC knows that. When Jacobs talks to MC, he says that shit 'is going to be known by Chad and by...' Obviously he means the Burkes. Even if she's hammered, it makes no sense. To kiss Chad's enemy in a party in front of everybody would be more than enough to make Chad jealous, if that's her target. There's no need to fuck MC and become the whore of the campus and the black sheep of the family for the Burkes, making Tybalt the "good, sensible son." Not to talk that she doesn't give a shit about the trouble this affair would bring to MC, the only guy who has sided with her up to that point. Chad and the alphas would probably beat the shit out of him. Here she is portrayed to us as a person at the same time insensitive and manipulative with the guys, and stupid. But later in the game she turns out to be an intelligent and decent person who genuinely cares about others, including a near stranger like Maya. Sage has some very good moments and scenes, but overall her arc doesn't make sense. She changes personalities with the phases of the moon and her story arc is retarded. In her sorority of less than a dozen girls, there's a drug and prostitution scheme involving at least half of them, and she doesn't know it? Is she blind? Does she not see the guys and girls Quinn takes to her room, which is literally decorated like the bedroom of a whorehouse?

And by the way, I don't think MC is the only customer at Quinn's "restaurant". Probably so are all the DIKs including Derek (if Quinn offers the services to MC, I don't know why she won't offer them to Derek), the alphas, some preps and a lot more people on campus. And everyone thinks it's normal? No one comments on it, no one gossips, like they do with Arieth? Why Derek or MC doesn't say clarly to Maya that Quinn offers the sexual services of the other HOTs to guys in the campus? Why everyone treats the girls like they're not sucking cocks in toilets for a few bucks like crack whores? That whole subplot of Quinn's sex restaurant and the gloryholes is retarded too.

I think Sage got exactly what she wanted out of the "Let's fuck right here" conversation with the MC; to draw other peoples attention to check if Chad still cares once news reaches him. The MC and Jacob talk like how long, 2 minutes tops and she's gone ? Smart chick, that one.

The restaurant was simply a porn scene filler before the MG's went "live", never to be heard of again. After that all the girls being a part of it, ask for money directly if the MC wants that pussy.

What Sage knows and how involved she is, is probably something that will resolve at some point, it's hinted at several times, so it's wait and see on that one.

 

[DarkKiller]

the point was who started the whole thing, and that's MC.

Have it your way mate

 

[NebulousShooter]

Just started replaying before update drops

View attachment mylocalgunshop - 1731756328358445497.mp4

 

[Amedore]

I think Sage got exactly what she wanted out of the "Let's fuck right here" conversation with the MC; to draw other peoples attention to check if Chad still cares once news reaches him. The MC and Jacob talk like how long, 2 minutes tops and she's gone ? Smart chick, that one.

The restaurant was simply a porn scene filler before the MG's went "live", never to be heard of again. After that all the girls being a part of it, ask for money directly if the MC wants that pussy.

What Sage knows and how involved she is, is probably something that will resolve at some point, it's hinted at several times, so it's wait and see on that one.

Sage is about to fuck MC in front of everyone, and Jacob just happens to save her by chance from being the campus whore. A simple kiss to MC in front of people could have done the job with Chad just fine, but she wants to put on a porn show anyway and ruin her reputation on campus with the other students, her professors and her family. Not to mention someone might record it on their cell phone and upload it to social media... That would have happened if Jacob had already been fucking Arieth, or just minding his own business in another room. Yeah, smart girl.

The restaurant was simply a porn scene filler, so everybody must pretend that it never existed... Yeah, that's damn fine writing. DPC is a perfectionist, for sure.

If Sage knows about Quinn's drug and prostitution dealings, and allows them, considering she gets nothing out of it but risks a big scandal in the HOTs, sorority of which she is president, that would reach the media and ruin her future, it would be the most retarded subplot in the whole game, and there are a lot of them.

 

[TimHawk]

And can someone explain to me where Burke being the dean comes from ? Did I miss something ?

MC: "Tell me more about your dad."
Sage: "Um... Ok? He's an honorary professor of the economics department."
Sage: "He teaches several classes, too. He's a student counselor and, as you now know, a major cog in granting scholarships."
Sage: "He used to be a successful investment banker, but he got fired for some bullshit reason."

And Jade said that he basically just bought his honorary professor title by donating a lot of money.

 

[Dr.Slime]

And can someone explain to me where Burke being the dean comes from ? Did I miss something ?

MC: "Tell me more about your dad."
Sage: "Um... Ok? He's an honorary professor of the economics department."
Sage: "He teaches several classes, too. He's a student counselor and, as you now know, a major cog in granting scholarships."
Sage: "He used to be a successful investment banker, but he got fired for some bullshit reason."

And Jade said that he basically just bought his honorary professor title by donating a lot of money.

he is not the dean or anything but he kinda do the work of a dean "being a head of consular meeting with Chad fighting "
thats why people call him Dean

 

[Raphael77]

Thanks i wish you can also edit from the site too but i guess is too much but viewing is also good

I'm no pro, might be other ways for it, but one can do that with UnRen
https://f95zone.to/threads/unren-ba...compiler-console-developer-menu-enabler.3083/

 

[Dr.Slime]

I'm no pro, might be other ways for it, but one can do that with UnRen
https://f95zone.to/threads/unren-ba...compiler-console-developer-menu-enabler.3083/

yep i know this one someone mentioned before

 

[Dr.Slime]

She was drunk... Drunk people do stupid stuff... But it's not a retarded scene... It's a scene about a character acting like a retarded.

I kinda like the way you use your words
you definitely could be a writer

 

[felicemastronzo]

And can someone explain to me where Burke being the dean comes from ? Did I miss something ?

MC: "Tell me more about your dad."
Sage: "Um... Ok? He's an honorary professor of the economics department."
Sage: "He teaches several classes, too. He's a student counselor and, as you now know, a major cog in granting scholarships."
Sage: "He used to be a successful investment banker, but he got fired for some bullshit reason."

And Jade said that he basically just bought his honorary professor title by donating a lot of money.

That Burke is the headmaster is a stretch, but considering that he has a dominant position when judging Chad, he seems to independently manage the scholarships, in the game he represents the highest authority at BR for now, so it's as if he was

 

[TimHawk]

Sage is about to fuck MC in front of everyone, and Jacob just happens to save her by chance from being the campus whore. A simple kiss to MC in front of people could have done the job with Chad just fine, but she wants to put on a porn show anyway and ruin her reputation on campus with the other students, her professors and her family. Not to mention someone might record it on their cell phone and upload it to social media... Yeah, smart girl.

The restaurant was simply a porn scene filler, so everybody must pretend that it never existed... Yeah, that's damn fine writing. DPC is a perfectionist, for sure.

If Sage knows about Quinn's drug and prostitution dealings, and allows them, considering she gets nothing out of it but risks a big scandal in the HOTs, sorority of which she is president, that would reach the media and ruin her future, it would be the most retarded subplot in the whole game, and there are a lot of them.

If that would've been Sage's intention she surely would've waited 2 minutes.

Nobody said you have to pretend it never existed, just acknowlege what it's main purpose was.

Same as before, we have to wait and see until we get more info on what Sage actually knows.

And "great writing" is a high bar, I think most would be happy already if stuff like Maya's tuition or Tybalt's blackmail wouldn't dictate so much of the plot. To me the writing was always "just fine", but if flows well with the overall theme.

 

[TimHawk]

That Burke is the headmaster is a stretch, but considering that he has a dominant position when judging Chad, he seems to independently manage the scholarships, in the game he represents the highest authority at BR for now, so it's as if he was

Scholarships sure, but thats a long way from representing the highest authority. Cathy had the power to exclude him from having any part in judging Rusty, she made the decision on her own.

I think if DPC would have wanted him to be seen as the "highest authority" it would've been easily fixable with a different title, if anything his actual titles make him seem like "we gave him something to do, because he throws money our way".

 

[Dr.Slime]

If that would've been Sage's intention she surely would've waited 2 minutes.

Nobody said you have to pretend it never existed, just acknowlege what it's main purpose was.

Same as before, we have to wait and see until we get more info on what Sage actually knows.

And "great writing" is a high bar, I think most would be happy already if stuff like Maya's tuition or Tybalt's blackmail wouldn't dictate so much of the plot. To me the writing was always "just fine", but if flows well with the overall theme.

yeah the writing wasn't the top we all can agree (unless Dalli think too deep hell even DPC didn't think of friction Dalli think
he made lily undercover spy for burke but he give you something to read and it's fine he maybe right)
now for sage scene she clearly in my point of view was trying to help MC with his struggles because well he did help her and want to help him in a way with movie in HOT's house any kind of help would be good and also we all know words in HOT's house spread so fast so if they got caught Chad will know (we seen it in EP8 when she confront him about cheating he said he knew
so Yeah you know when a guy do some stupid shit to help you? you know that friend i guess some of us know
i have one too so yeah having dumb shit done to make you laugh or something is good way ( not wayy to dumb tho)

 

[felicemastronzo]

Scholarships sure, but thats a long way from representing the highest authority. Cathy had the power to exclude him from having any part in judging Rusty, she made the decision on her own.

I think if DPC would have wanted him to be seen as the "highest authority" it would've been easily fixable with a different title, if anything his actual titles make him seem like "we gave him something to do, because he throws money our way".

I don't think so. Cathy excludes Burke by not telling him anything, not as a matter of authority, if she had then decided to punish Rusty we do not know if she would have had to go through Burke's judgement. The question of the photo remained essentially private.

 

[Wizard_Shiryuu]

And can someone explain to me where Burke being the dean comes from ? Did I miss something ?

MC: "Tell me more about your dad."
Sage: "Um... Ok? He's an honorary professor of the economics department."
Sage: "He teaches several classes, too. He's a student counselor and, as you now know, a major cog in granting scholarships."
Sage: "He used to be a successful investment banker, but he got fired for some bullshit reason."

And Jade said that he basically just bought his honorary professor title by donating a lot of money.

I'm sure that will come out again eventually.

 

[SavageJammer]

Hey guys, just want to know does the game leak here immediately after the release or does it take more time.

 

[felicemastronzo]

Hey guys, just want to know does the game leak here immediately after the release or does it take more time.

Usually the wait is very short

 

[TimHawk]

I don't think so. Cathy excludes Burke by not telling him anything, not as a matter of authority, if she had then decided to punish Rusty we do not know if she would have had to go through Burke's judgement. The question of the photo remained essentially private.

Bro you are in worse-that-Maya's-tutition-territory.

There is just no way, that Burke didn't know that his wife's best friend had a nude picture leaked while hard copies were all over college. How many students would he have to have asked before one of them told them "Ohh, the DIK's leaked it".

We should really take the game at face value in this case; Burke's power stops at students who recieve scholarships. It's how he got involved with both Chad and Maya.

 

[Amedore]

If that would've been Sage's intention she surely would've waited 2 minutes.

Nobody said you have to pretend it never existed, just acknowlege what it's main purpose was.

Same as before, we have to wait and see until we get more info on what Sage actually knows.

And "great writing" is a high bar, I think most would be happy already if stuff like Maya's tuition or Tybalt's blackmail wouldn't dictate so much of the plot. To me the writing was always "just fine", but if flows well with the overall theme.

So according to you, Sage wouldn't fucked MC in front of everybody. She would have backed out, despite saying things to MC like "you pull your dick out or I'll do it." Then, why DPC decided to introduce Jacob in the scene? It would be easier just a scene of sudden regret like the one of Josy in the first date. "Actually, we can't do this, is too risky". Or just a scene of a kissing and groping session on the dance floor. It would reached Chad it would be more than enough to make him react, if that was Sage's target.

DPC writing in general is bad (even if in ninety percent of the games on this forum it is even worse. In the land of the blind the one-eyed man is king), and it's getting worse. In the latest update, MC dialogues are becoming more and more boring. There are hardly any funny or witty moments when he talks to Sage, Bella, Jill or Zoey, for example; and more and more things happen without MC intervention. The girls' problems fix themselves, like Jill offering Maya her lawyer. MC is increasingly a bystander in the plots, and this is a game, not a movie or a novel. MC is the Main Character and the Player. Things must happen because of him or at least he must have an important intervention. Otherwise, what is he for? And yes, that makes MC a Mary Sue, but then again, it's a game. Aren't Mary Sues Commander Shepard from Mass Effect, Geralt of Rivia, and so many other video game characters, like super heroes, who spend their time saving the day? It's no fun playing as a character, seeing how he's just a supporting character in the plot.